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Super Powers Hero - FSU Essay

NEW - "Vires represents strength in its many forms. Whether it is physical, emotional, or intellectual, it is something that can...

UndergraduateLimaEm - Oct 15, 2008 -
The National Merit Scholarship Essay - UF Essay Help

7 - Congratulations on National Merit. Oddly enough, I just applied to National Merit and I'm writing my UF letter...

ScholarshipAlbo - Oct 12, 2008Liist - Oct 14, 2008
Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay

3 - Thanks Gloria! Your comments are really helpful. Regards, Prakash...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
"my strong moral and intellectual ability" - Last Minute Essay. (FSU)

NEW - Throughout my entire life the Latin word Vires has been my guiding philosophy. Vires embodies my moral and intellectual...

UndergraduateAnthony - Oct 14, 2008 -
(techniques that Schlosser) FAST FOOD NATION ESSAY

4 - Ethos,logos, pathos are the three writing styles that everyone needs to know to be a more effective writer and...

Book Reportstaeb1n - Oct 10, 2008taeb1n - Oct 14, 2008
Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help

NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....

Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Oct 14, 2008 -
'difficulty learning' - UCF ESSAY - BUMPS IN THE ROAD

2 - Good evening. You've got a fine piece here, but I'm not sure how it fulfills the prompt. The...

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
COMMON APP - the importance of diversity to you

3 - Good evening. Your response does answer the prompt, with well thought out examples and good description. It flows...

Undergraduatecalend4r - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
I am passionate about each activity which I am apart of - Elaborate on one of your activities...

2 - Good afternoon. I am not involved in every club, b ut I am passionate about each ... As...

Undergraduatebeingryanjude - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'Better grades' - Common Application - Significant Achievement

3 - I agree with calend4r's comments about the last paragraph; it is important to make sure that you are relating...

Undergraduategbtl - Oct 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...

Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'

4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...

Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson

4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...

Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
'I have no body, I'm stuck' - Why do you want to attend Pratt?

3 - I agree that the pieces definitely need more expansion. "Intro I have been interested in all sorts of arts...

Undergraduatekobedatnext - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Lost And Found - Narrative Essay

3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....

Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
'giving up my time to help my uncle' - personal statement

NEW - TELL US A PERSONAL QUALITY,TALENT,ACCOMPLISHMENT, CONTRIBUTION OR EXPERIENCE THAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU. WHAT ABOUT THSI QUALITY OR ACCOMPLISHMENT...

Undergraduatenickymicky - Oct 14, 2008 -
"Zoo Rejection" - my essay

3 - Thanks for your help, Gloria....

Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
About my youth and my first visit to the USA - some suggestion pls

NEW - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduateawakenlion - Oct 13, 2008 -
a multitude of unforgettable memories - common application essay

NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...

Undergraduatethebobert - Oct 13, 2008 -
They that wait upon the Lord shall renew their streng - FSU essay help

4 - Yes; elaboration and specifics will save these essays, because as they are here they are still a bit vague....

UndergraduateCydiona - Oct 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
"Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow?

4 - Good afternoon. This is a great essay. The content is good and well cited, the paragraphs are very...

Writing Feedbackjordanlee - Oct 2, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
effective way of writing an essay

2 - Good afternoon. The thing about a great introduction is that it is complicated. It should be a precursor...

Essaysami - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
University of Pennsylvania courses / characteristics

6 - Great point! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Undergraduatezhangyi - Oct 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
Common Application; Help with "Elaborate on one of your activities"

2 - Good afternoon. My first concern is capitalization; make sure that you are capitalizing proper nouns and words at...

Undergraduatecubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
Essay supporting an issue about which you are particularly passionate.

6 - You have some great ideas in it, but I would suggest trying to focus on just one event, just...

Undergraduatemickeygirl - Oct 12, 2008cubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008
Unique characteristics - ability to mentor new students and to tutor underclass-men

3 - One suggestion that I had was that rather than list your accomplishments and say that they made you a...

Undergraduateshinoda10920 - Oct 11, 2008cubs72191 - Oct 13, 2008
We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.

NEW - It is possible to know something about a person by the way of he or she dressess. - TOEFL...

Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 13, 2008 -
'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay

2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...

Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
"I am an artist." FSU essay...I need help...Is it too out of the box?

2 - Good evening. As the prompt for this essay was not included in this posting, I can give suggestions...

Undergraduatejane6272 - Oct 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
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