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Essay on achievements from my professional life

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Writing Feedbackbdoan - Oct 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2007
'playing my character' - Howard University - My Admission

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Undergraduatedee301568 - Oct 28, 2007dee301568 - Oct 28, 2007
Essay on global citizenship

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Writing Feedbackliza6390 - Oct 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
'Physical limits' - My UF aplication essay

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Undergraduatelostsy10 - Oct 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
Essay on Development of Nuclear activities in Iran

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Writing Feedbackwest_sher - Oct 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
Essay on Reactions to Western Imperialism in Asia

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Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 27, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 28, 2007
"It shouldn't hurt to be a child" - child abuse essay

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Writing Feedbackimdapitcher20 - Oct 26, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 27, 2007
Math Essay for college- feedback/comments?

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Undergraduatelopsicicle - Oct 14, 2007lopsicicle - Oct 27, 2007
The theme of Linda Pastan's poem "Ethics" - Literature Essay Help

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Essaysjamielynn0213 - Oct 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 27, 2007
"Cry the Beloved Country" - Essay due tomorrow

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Writing Feedbackdance24_7 - Oct 23, 2007dance24_7 - Oct 25, 2007
New Deal Programs, How it Changed American Life - Essay Critique

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Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 23, 2007samuraitom - Oct 25, 2007
Purpose of App; Why I chose Penn State University

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Undergraduateblue_palace - Oct 24, 2007blue_palace - Oct 25, 2007
"My family", the greatest influence on me

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Undergraduatewolffangel21 - Oct 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
Influence of Manifest Destiny upon James K Polk

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Research PapersDrock3106 - Oct 24, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2007
My extremely successful business - Imagine you just completed your BIOGRAPHY

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Undergraduateammarrauf - Oct 23, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2007
Consoles - comparing and contrasting essay

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Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - Oct 23, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2007
need an opening sentence (not thesis)

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Essaysdance24_7 - Oct 22, 2007dance24_7 - Oct 22, 2007
Polarization causes violence & remedy is compromise; FREE CHOICE

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UndergraduatePeachy - Oct 21, 2007Peachy - Oct 22, 2007
Eng 102 Academic Paper....desperately in need of help

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Essaysyigster - Oct 22, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 22, 2007
My Summer 2007 internship with Senator Schumer - admission essay

4 - Greetings! I don't think your quotation is awkward; I would have said "attention-grabbing"! As far as the last...

UndergraduateKostasg - Oct 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 22, 2007
"A place for You" - ENGLISH 101 Personal essay help

2 - Greetings! Your essay is strong and compelling--very creatively written! I have just a few editing tips: you,...

Essayssammie1981 - Oct 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2007
"The people we admire most shape who we become" - analogy essay

2 - Greetings! I think you're selling yourself short--it's very good so far! The painting metaphor is a good one,...

Writing Feedbackkarmabelle - Oct 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 20, 2007
Help on Humanities paper (Gregorian chant)

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New Imperialism in Asia and Africa

2 - Greetings! As usual, another well-written and thought-provoking essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: Although we...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Oct 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2007
ESSAY ON CHARLES A. BEARD. FOR AMERICAN GOV. CLASS

2 - Greetings! A thesis statement is essentially designed to tell the reader what the entire essay is about. It...

EssaysWPU89 - Oct 16, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2007
Teaching mathematics; - PERSONAL STATEMENT

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Undergraduateammarrauf - Sep 29, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2007
Scientific Revolution & Christianity Essay

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Economic activity of developing country, Pakistan - personal essay

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Undergraduateammarrauf - Oct 10, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 11, 2007
Argumentative Essay - Welfare Programs

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Writing Feedbackss03 - Oct 7, 2007EF_Team2 - Oct 9, 2007
Samuel P. Huntington - The Clash of Civilizations

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