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TU Graz MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

2 - The letter is good. The theoretical motivation is there. It is clear. Where you want to apply it and...

Lettersayushya - Dec 7, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
WRITING TASK 1 (IELTS):Number of Vehicles Bought in Kiwi City

2 - The summary overview was almost complete. You just forgot to reference that the vehicle sales were measured in the...

Writing Feedbackzitiudayaj - Dec 6, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Motivation letter to study masters in material science word limit is 2500 characters.

2 - Since you have an interest in strengthening the use of carbon fibers in an aerospace setting, why not consider...

Letterstarunkp - Dec 6, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
writing task 1-line graph : The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies

2 - Be careful with your singular v. plural word usage. 5 is more than 1 and therefore, should be...

Writing Feedbacknagan123456 - Dec 5, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
ielt p2: causes why people like online meeting than meeting directly and solution for it

2 - In the later part of the first paragraph, you should be separating your suggestions for solutions to the situation...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Dec 5, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
UCLA Theater, Film and Television Supplemental Essays - Life Challenge Essay

2 - Your essay is right on the mark as far as I am concerned. You have depicted a lifelong struggle...

UndergraduateConfusingSphinx - Dec 3, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
IELTS WRITRING TASK 1: The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European

2 - The summary overview requires you to give a short listing of the information provided, which will be discussed...

Writing FeedbackQaan - Dec 2, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
writing task 1: The chart shows the information about salt intake in the US in 2000.

2 - I would like to call your attention to this presentation. It is confusing. You are focusing the reader's...

Writing Feedbackyeonyi - Dec 1, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Looking for critiques on USC Cinematic Arts (Animation) Personal Statement!

2 - The essay is good. I can tell that you are trying to discuss your family background and how difficult...

UndergraduateSamkzarts - Dec 1, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Writing task 1 - The percentage of households with cars

2 - The first sentence of your summary overview is not really going to be considered an original statement. It still...

Writing FeedbackMemeLorD - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
The line chart illustrate fish and meat consumption (grams) in HCM city from 1979 to 2004-WRITING 1

2 - There are different meat descriptions available in the chart. You should not be identifying the meats in a...

Writing Feedbackvothanhan27 - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience and achievements

2 - The program is asking you to describe your professional experience in relation to the program requirements. I do not...

Undergraduatechol - Nov 30, 2023Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Causes, effects and solutions in waste and rubbish pollution

4 - Apart from that, I can see that you used advanced vocabulary and the structure is good but as mentioned...

Writing Feedbackthtrang - Nov 29, 2023sankook - Dec 5, 2023
Advice for a statement of purpose for a master in robotics at EPFL

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Balancing my life priorities - UBC Application: Tell us about who you are.

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Traveling to work - writing task 1: Pie chart

2 - The summary overview is missing from the actual discussion. That is the first paragraph that kicks off all task...

Writing Feedbackthytyn - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The effect of professional sports on children

2 - You should not have began to present your personal opinions about the discussion in the first paragraph. That would...

Writing Feedbackmabel111 - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
Ielts: is using technology a bad trend ?

2 - Try to shorten your essay next time to no more than 300 words. That is to ensure that you...

Writing Feedbackductam06 - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
UBC SAUDER PERSONAL PROFILE QUESTION

2 - This sounds like a very concise presentation of the problem that you faced as a co-CEO of the school...

Undergraduateseniorstudent - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
The graph about the percentage of tourits visiting different countries in 2010

2 - Try to clarify the type of graph next time. There are several graphs used in the task 1 essay...

Writing FeedbackLangfarm - Nov 29, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
Statement of purpose for MSC mechatronics at ETH review; the sop has word limit of 1000 words.

NEW - Seeing my old grandparents struggle with daily chores like cleaning, cooking or even getting items lower to the ground...

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Common App-The contagious influence of smiles

2 - You have too many references for the Smile reference. Bring it down to 2 examples. Keep the perspective of...

Undergraduatepawan_pai02 - Nov 28, 2023Holt - Dec 3, 2023
UBC Personal Profile - What is important to you? And why? "Photography"

3 - @Holt Hi, is there a way to private message you on here? Not here, but you may email: essayforum.com+holt@gmail.com...

Undergraduateyooogiis - Nov 6, 2023Mav47 - Dec 3, 2023
Why business? GKS-G Personal Statement | GMBA ASPIRANT |

3 - First of all, Thank you sir/madam for your corrections. I will use your suggestions and yeah I am not...

Graduatesankook - Nov 26, 2023sankook - Dec 1, 2023
Document about your academic and research background, career goals, academic interest and program

NEW - Growing up helping my parents fill the charts with students' scores, I stumbled upon the first data science lesson:...

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Quitting Basketball - Common App Essay

3 - I've met many new amazing, interesting, and beautiful people who I will remember for the rest of my life,...

Undergraduatemaxn - Nov 28, 2023ductam06 - Nov 29, 2023
HEALTH DISPARITIES AND EQUITY - NEED

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Write an essay about the negative impacts of social media on teens

2 - Where did you get this information? Cite your source. This is authoritative information that you are providing so...

Writing Feedbackaubreyyy - Nov 28, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
Reforming the United States Prison Industry

2 - I would try to connect the essay to recidivism at this point. The Swedish model works on preventing...

Writing Feedbackpjoseph13 - Nov 27, 2023Holt - Nov 28, 2023
The charts detail the proportion of Australian secondary school graduates who were unemployed

2 - The image information is incomplete. You have not provided any data regarding the number of charts, and what specific...

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