justivy03
Mar 28, 2016
Writing Feedback / Different Roles Played by Men and Women [3]
Hi Jan, I would like to share my thoughts on your essay by adding and enhancing a few sentences with much needed help.
1st paragraph
- willbemost likely to
- This is a typical pair
- mother, ( don't forget your punctuation marks ) continues - outline the reasons behind
2nd paragraph
-there formed a clear dividedivision between - for competitions , stand
- Women,by contraston the contrary ( contrast - is for colors ) ,
- specializ e at in cooperating.
- There also exists a bB iological distinction also exists ,
- that it is, females
There you have it Jan, I do hope that the corrections I made helped and just be careful with the form as well as the tenses of the words you input in your sentences.
Hi Jan, I would like to share my thoughts on your essay by adding and enhancing a few sentences with much needed help.
1st paragraph
- will
- This is a typical pair
- mother, ( don't forget your punctuation marks ) continues - outline the reasons behind
2nd paragraph
-
- Women,
- specializ e at in cooperating.
- that it is, females
There you have it Jan, I do hope that the corrections I made helped and just be careful with the form as well as the tenses of the words you input in your sentences.