Although technology has dramatically changed the way we see and relate to each other, it has yet to achieve its threshold.

Why we cant use " bringing about the" in this sentence .

This problem , among others , will be discussed hereafter, and methods which can reduce them will be given .

First of all , v iolent films made people

Moreover , Violent movies

Due to the fact that , Youngsters are not mature enough

For example , If the government

Beside , Parents should have a discipline

In conclusion , while there are many issues aringing as a consequence of the increasing amounts of violence in movies,(use comma instead of period). I believe that the best way to solve that problems is education . Hence , People will understand that violence is unacceptable and they will not mimic it .

from it's' engine

It allowed her to stay in contact with her loved ones, surf the web,and faster than anything she had ever seen before.

car's

But , can you tell me what's the different between in regards to and with regards to
Can in regards to substitute with regards to?

I will discuss this issue below.

After having considered all the points that I have discussed above,

Particularly what impressed me is whenone day it was a heavy snow, she came to have classes lonely one day in the midst of a heavy snow.It is what made me firmly believe that she was a girl who was worth training well.

With abandon of knowledge obtained by reading, she could discuss with me about some professional qu esti ons.

In this essay I will give reasons about that.

People attend college or university for many reasons however many people attend college or university without reason.

The knowledge weather it comes from science, literature, and art.

It is for self development each person whatever that reason.

Heating water by sun is cause water which is undergoing evaporation, and water vapor condenses to form clouds.

Evaporation of water to emanated from ocean contributes about 80% of total water vapor in air.

To summary, the water cycle is a continuous process showing howof water evaporates , condenses, and precipitates . which is always happened and never to stop .

"Speech is power: Speech is to persuade, to convert, to compel"- Ralph Waldo Emerson.

I wanted to help my cousin improve her speech so badly that I would watch Sesame Street, over and over to practice the pronunciation of various words and then teach them to my cousin, and had no idea that all that time spent practicing my articulation and phonetics would someday lead to a marriage between a passion and a profession.

I know that I am well armed to face the challenges of an online graduate school and that I am a good candidate for the graduate program because I am passionate about the field of speech language pathology and because I have a strong work ethic.

I am able to withstand stress and face challenges that may come alongmy the way. I know that I will be a great asset to your university during and after my academic pursuit.

At last, if we only keep succeeding without failing we will never learn..

Many successful andinfluenciveinfluential people in the history have failed first before succeeding like Thomas Edison. Thomas Edison have failed a thousand times before he successfully inventedbeing able to creat the light bulb.( another sentence)W hen he was asked how did he failed a thousand times , he said that these weren'twere not failures butbecause making the light bulb had a thousand steps (Stop here) . B ecause he learned from each failure which resulted in making the light bulb,and he said "failure is the opportunity to start again more intellegently".

When i was young

i think that if without my parents now i will be homeless or in jail but by their support and careless(what?)now i have a job a wife a child and even a dog feel happy .

It is commonly known that successful education act as precursor to future career growth.

Different approaches and methods of teaching have been applied to develop education system in order to find out the best way to cultivate (what is going to cultivate? children.

Whereas some believe that children should learning( should + base form of verb) ...

The degree to which individual education is beneficial to child education can be measured in several ways.

In the past, teachers have to write what they want to convey to students on the chalkboard, resulting in a great waste of time and the fatigue of teachers.

Pizza line shows from 1975 to 1995 increased sharply until 82 people eaten per year.

But, in 5 years latest consumed of this food leveling off about 82 people eaten per year.

cost per year of various household divides.

In a year, electricity consumption (singular) increases depending on the kinds of electronic.

There are only 5 electronicswhere in this part.

They are need about 1000 kwh per year.

They are need not less than 1500 kwh per year and cost $125 per year.

These days, it seems that far more modern society's justice desire to legitimate carrying firearms among individuals.

Although there are valid arguments to the contrary,in this paper However, I would argue that to carrying guns should be prohibited. The reason for this are twofold.

ThoughAlthough the storing of gun , to store gun legally no matter whetheris for self protection or to tackle some problems , it could still disturb this peace, that one day it will shot and cousecause bloodshed.

Indeed , Becausethe prime reason for weapon invention is to use it against humans.

If the government legitimates carrying guns, this would be welcomecertainly affirmtothe jungleworld of dictatorship and chaos.

Even more disturbing, firearms could be used for illegal purposes, thoughin spite ofthe usage of them is legal.

By the way of conclusionTo conclude , I once reaffirm my position and my agreement to the statement by support of aforementioned views above agree that carrying guns should not be promulgated for this will only open the way towards destruction and trouble .

As economic environment is constantly changing, particularly economics and business demand for advanced computer-based methods capable of processing and analyzing complex and divers information.

This job provided me an opportunity to understand better particular spheres of business (finance, marketing, logistics, law, and accounting).

AmongOne of my current responsibilities is establishing of new business contacts with foreign companies.

I think the Master programme will assist me in acquiring up-to-date knowledge of information technology and to developing complex approach, which combines management concepts with computer science technologies.

After graduation I aspire to work in the area of technical consultancy, especiallyfor I am interested in developing informational infrastructures in business companies.

I will be deeplygreatly honored if you decide to acceptwill consider my candidature.

When I was a child, I got used to playin g games on my older brother's computer and with that, I gradually felt excited about information technology.

During the time Ihave worked there, I have enthused over finance and business and thus I have decided to learn more about Business field.

If we talk about the recent era, Parents just want their children to be a doctor or engineer. They force them to go in the field which they want and don't care about what their children want and what are their interests. It's just like a new trend that my friend's daughter is a doctor and getting very handsome amount of salary so they start degrading their daughter that why don't you become a doctor rather than being a teacher.
Parents should keep this thing in their minds that what are the interest of their children and what they want to be in future. What are their desires.If they force them to be what they want then maybe they start getting against of their parents.

While public use the Internet or smart phone to share information to each other at different positions.

Instead of using letters, technology advanced not only gives us more spare time but also convenient and efficient.

More, even if family members who are in different countries, they also can use the Internet to connect each others, especially though the images or videos, they can feel close.

Furthermore, technology is also essential for students, livelike in remote districtsareas , to shared the valuable natural resources with friends.

Another issue is that within the continuousever-accelerated updating of science and technology,

, but now, thanks to the social networking websites, people can easily to find someone who has similar interests.

In this way, technology is beneficial to humanitytowardsdevelopsdeveloping positive relationships.

I agree with that the technology has more optimal effects on people's interaction, because it helps ordinary people to make new
friends and to maintain relationships.

Lies, they are never justified. Lying is a sin from my religious belief. Not only lying is a sin but you can lose trust between others. You put shame on yourself. Lying isn't going to get you anywhere, you're just going to end up with a whole bunch of crap that you never wanted in the first place.

Lying is a sin from my religious belief.

People preferred to buy cheap but good products several years ago. However, increasing number of people trend to pursue famous-brand items such as clothes, cars and cell phone.

to pursue famous-brand items

you'll

several-career lifestyle will help you to wider your outlook

1 job

because at that times

it is my strong believe belief

There are 24/7 live broadcasts on TV

Now, television provides them with contacts so that customers can possess necessary items in the simplest and most convenient way.

Last but not least

These are necessary especially when we now live in a flattervirtua l world where virtually people can communicate through all borders can beerasedthanks to technology.

television benefits us in many aspects of life

bad things and wrongdoings

Can I ask whether my wording seems too simple and informal?

There are the chart shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and gender in the year 2000 between female and male.

Firstly,There are male illiteracy for the 6 areas shown.

In the chart, the lowest illiteracy rates were Developed Countries, Latin America/Caribbean, East Asia/Oceania which have percentage each regions as big as 1 %, 10 %, and 8 %.

In the first place, spending too much time on phones may exert adverse effects on social life.In the first place(try to use another related transitional
device since you have used it in the preceding sentence) , as people are increasingly tend tofocus and relayrelying on phones, they
may lose their interest on daily activities like meeting with their friends so that distraction may be developed during study or social activities(The bold part is another
idea which makes your sentence ambiguous.) .

The chart indicates a survey about compared two kinds of new music on internet as long as fifteen days period that people visit.

These are music choice and pop parade music with approximately 180.000 respondents.

To begin with, food and cars were the highest spending in both of them.

Even thoughOn the other hand , the lowest spending factor in a graph (a) was by computers and in a graph (b) was by books.

Food has number 44% of spending in 1996 (a), but declined dramatically until 14% in 1996 (b).

Graduate number of each province rose during the five years generally and the highest number in each the two mentioned years, 2001 and 2006, happened on New Brunswick.

Time is running and we are keeping our pace so as to chase it but in doing so ourlife style of living lif e has also been changing from traditional and conventional to modern sophisticated luxurious form.

As a result, we are consuming healthier balanced diet and using less physical force in performing jobs which isare soaring our life expectancy a bit longer than we used to live in the past.

These points will be examined closely as follows.

First of all, knowledge can be acquired owing to televisions.

By watching Discovery channel, he or she can getthe notionvisually knowof how well a polar bear camouflages in order to hunt rabbits in the most vivid way, which is obviously impossible to know without television.

in your comment above it was my opinion such my experience like what i saw in the real life. So did you mean, i have to write like "in my opinion or in my view" in the first sentence, didn't it ?