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Dec 4, 2012
Writing Feedback / Writting a argument synthesis essay about Divorce and children [3]
this is a very interesting topic to write on and you have presented some very good facts. :)
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A divorce is child's nightmare.It is one of the most harmful things that could happen to his future.
... Children of divorce????
Thankfully, most children whose parents have divorced have managed somehow to overcome the emotional trauma.
Try and reduce the grammatical errors and you will have done a good job. :)
this is a very interesting topic to write on and you have presented some very good facts. :)
Here are some suggestions you may find useful.
Divorce generally puts children at greater risk for many kinds of problems.
A divorce is child's nightmare.It is one of the most harmful things that could happen to his future.
However, most children of divorce do not experience those serious problems; most children are strong and resilient, and most have returned to a pretty normal life after 2-3 years.
... Children of divorce????
Thankfully, most children whose parents have divorced have managed somehow to overcome the emotional trauma.
Try and reduce the grammatical errors and you will have done a good job. :)