Writing Feedback / How much the number of older people in Sweden, USA and Japan is growing? Graph. [3]

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of population for elderly people between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries, including Japan, Sweden, and USA. At first glance, it is evident that Japan is predicted to have the higher population of elderly people in 2040 than other countries. Note, USA has lower population than other two countries in 2040.

To begin with, in 1940, the percentage of population for elderly people in Japan stood at 5 per cent and was flattened out at around 3 per cent over 20 years. In 21th century it increased significantly at 10 per cent, and will be predicted to increase dramatically at 25 per cent and reach a peak at approximately 27 per cent in 2040.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the line graph reveals that USA and Sweden have similar trends. Both countries stood at less than ten per cent in 1940. During 20th century, the proportion of elderly people in two countries saw at fewer than fifteen per cent, but will be predicted in 2040, both countries increase dramatically at approximately twenty-six per cent and twenty-eight per cent respectively.

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Writing Feedback / Information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 to 2007 - the graph. [2]

The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 to 2007

The line graph gives information with regard to the percentage of teacher's recruitment according to year of graduation from 2001 to 2007 in Ontario. At first glance, it is evident that the recruitment of English-language teacher saw a high level at the first year, while at the end of period it decreased significantly. Note, the proportion of French-language recruited teachers experienced a fluctuation over a 6-year period.

According to the line graph, it reveals that the percentage of both teacher recruitments had a fairly similar level of between 70 per cent and 75 per cent in 2001, while the teacher's recruitment for English-language decreased gradually at 40 per cent. However, France teacher's recruitment experienced a significant rise to around 52 per cent and then rose again at approximately 78 per cent over two years.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the line graph shows that the recruitment of French teacher was fluctuated and reached a peak at approximately 75 per cent in the end of period. In 2003, the percentage of English teacher's recruitment saw at 40 per cent and then fell significantly at around 25 per cent in 2007.

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Writing Feedback / Specified design and proper location of the wind turbines make the electrical system more efficient [2]

The diagrams below show the design for a wind turbine and its location.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons were relevant.

The first diagram gives information with regard to the construction of a wind turbine and the second picture shows how the wind turbines work in the optimum locations. At first glance, it is evident that a wind turbine can be constructed by four important components. In sharp contrast, the strategic locations establish the output of electricity. Note, the higher of a wind turbine location is, the bigger of the electricity will be produced.

To begin with, the way of a wind turbine constructed is to complete all the tools which consist of blades, wind sensor, generator, and steel tower. First, when the wind blows the blades, automatically the blades will rotate. At the same time, the wind sensor will operate the speed and direction, and the specific information can be seen in computer which is located beside the steel tower. Then, the generator produces 1.5 megawatts electricity from a wind turbine.

The tower can be placed on the hill, under the sea and near by domestic turbine. The tower on the hill, get maximum wind strength, and it means more electricity can be generated. Afterwards, when a wind turbine is located under the sea, it will result less electricity even this way do not disturb the landscape, Otherwise, wind turbine tends to have less wind strengths by only 100 kilowatts at domestic area than in other locations.

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Writing Feedback / The world's energy consumption in 2010 [3]

The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010

The pie chart shows information with regard to the percentage of energy consumption and provides a global breakdown of renewable energy use in the world in 2010. At first glance, it is evident that even though people use some renewable energy, they tend to consume fossil fuels more than these shapes.

According to the pie chart, it reveals that petroleum is the biggest source of the world's energy at 39 per cent. Then, the total contributes between natural gas and coal saw more than two fifths of energy resources. Base on this trend, people are fiercely dependent on using those energy supplies.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the pie chart illustrates that the energy consumed by people is nuclear electric power at 8 per cent and renewable sources at 7 per cent, whilst renewable sector consists of some energy sources. The consumption of renewable sector for biomass and hydroelectric power saw 53 per cent and 36 per cent respectively. Finally, the total consumption of geothermal, solar, and wind at 11 per cent.

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Writing Feedback / The annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films [3]

The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates information regarding the amount of rentals and sales in different types of movies from a particular store from 2002 to 2011. At first glance, it is evident that the annual number of rentals decreases significantly over the period, and this trend was followed by VHS sales, even just the first four years. Noted, the annual number of DVD sales saw a dramatic increase until the middle of period and it was a dramatic decrease at the end of period.

According to the bar chart, it shows that the annual number between rentals and VHS sales have the similar pattern, both figures experienced a slight decrease of the period in question. The annual number of rentals stood at around 180,000 in 2002 and it was a slight decrease at 60,000 in 2011. And the amount of VHS sales dropped from 80,000 to 10,000 in 2005.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the bar chart, it reveals that DVS sales type increase gradually at the first six years, and it was reached a peak at approximately 300,00 in 2007. While this figure saw a significant decrease over the next period. Finally, the annual number of blue-ray sales only resulted at around 10,000 in the end of period.

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Writing Feedback / The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 [2]

The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The line graph reveals information concerning the population of India and China since 2000 and the population growth up is predicted to increase significantly until 2050. At first glance, it is evident that the population in India saw a steady rise over fifty-year period and it will overtake China at the first thirty-year period. Noted, Chinese is estimated to get a massive change in 2030, while it will fall significantly over the next twenty-year.

To begin with, in 2000, the total population of people living in China is bigger than India. Lots of Chinese societies saw around 1.25 billion, while Indian saw 1 billion. Between 2000 and the present, the number of Indian population had increased at 0.2 billion. Following this period, Chinese population had risen to 0.1 billion and had reached a massive at 1.35 billion.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the line graph reveals that Indian citizens are more likely to incline more quickly than Chinese, and both countries will have the same population at 1.45 billion in 2030. Chinese citizens will fall slightly to 1.4 billion, even though Indian citizens will rise until 1.6 billion in 2050.

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Writing Feedback / People are responsible for the path, the career they choose for themselves. Money vs fun in work. [4]

Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

These days, money becomes an essential part of people's lives. As such, several people believe that people who have comfortable job are more important than to earn much money because they need enjoyable in their jobs when they work. However, others think that a good salary will give people a better life since they can buy anything that they want. Therefore, I would argue that those statements have an influence for people's live because people have right to choose their wish.

On the one hand, people nowadays tend to spend their time for working to earn a lot of money to gain a better life. For instance, many parents today are spending lot of time for their jobs than to their children. This is because they think when they can give enough money for their children, all the problems will be done because the important thing that they can earn much money and it can make their children happy. As a result, this action has no guarantee if people have much money and then they can achieve a better life.

On the other hand, people also need to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Firstly, when people are feeling happy in their jobs, it will result a good effect on their lives especially in their workplace without think about money. Also, people can feel free, it means they do not think that it is more important for people when they work base on their heart.

To sum up, it is evident than both trends have value itself, so people should be careful for their choices. It is imperative that people also should know about the impact of their choices when they make a decision in their lives.

Writing Feedback / The table shows the number of students living in the UK gaining teacher training qualification [2]

The table below shows the number of students living in the UK gaining teacher training qualifications in 2005/6 and 2006/7, and the proportion of male qualifiers.

The table gives a breakdown of the number of students achieving Initial Teacher Training (ITT) qualifications in the UK between 2005/6 and 2006/7, and the percentage of male qualifiers. At first glance, it is evident that PGCE experienced more popular ITT qualifications of both sexes. Noted, the percentage of male qualifiers was higher than female over the period.

According to the table, it is shows that the number of female qualifiers in PGCE and Bed & other degrees were a significant increase over the period. The total number of female qualifiers of both ITT qualifications increased significantly from 23,865 in 2005/6 to 24,335 in 2006/7.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the table, it is reveals that the total number of male qualifiers of both ITT qualifications saw a dramatic decline from 8,065 (25.3 %) to 7,610 (23.8) over the timeframe. Finally, the total number of both sexes had a narrowed considerable with ITT qualifications at 31,930 and 31,945 of the time in question.

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Writing Feedback / Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure [3]

Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.

To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, information technology is becoming more and more popular of people's lives. As such, technology plays an important role of people's lives related to many aspects such as home tools, leisure and work activities. Therefore, I personally believe that information technology has some drawbacks, but many beneficial effects are likely to be excellent.

On the one hand, information technology has drawbacks for some people using it too much. For instance, young children that spending their time by watching television and play games online, seem to have short span of attention because they just focus on what they see that can make them happy without thinking of their bodies and foods. As a consequence, this action can make them to neglect other activities and also they will gain disease.

On the other hand, it is important for people to know about information technology in all aspects. Firstly, information technology can help students for studying such the internet. This is because there are many contents of the internet that is able to help student's exercise when they need some references. Furthermore, information technology provides many types of information that people need and it is easy to find with the advancement of technology nowadays. In addition, technological tools like computer can be adapted as library at home so that people can do their works in their leisure time.

The aforementioned evidence reveals that information technology contributes people to spend their lives more comfortable in their daily activities. It is imperative that people also should pay more attention of their physical activities and they should be aware of managing all the information that they fine and need.

Writing Feedback / Percentage of British people giving money to a charity. [2]

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 199 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates a breakdown of the proportion of British citizen who give money to charity in different ages between 1990 and 2010. At first glance, it is evident that the biggest contribution to charity saw people aged 36-50 in 1990. However, in 2010, people aged 51-65 gain a massive.

According to the bar chart, it is shows that the proportion of British people experienced a dramatic increase from the age 18-50, while there was a significant decline at over the next ages in 1990. The percentages of British people stood at around 16 per cent (18-25), and then it increased dramatically at some 44 per cent (36-50). Unfortunately, British people aged 51-65 and >65 decrease significantly at about 32 per cent of the time in question.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the bar chart, it is reveals that generally the percentage of British people giving charity experienced a slightly incline in 2010. British people ages 18-25 stood at under ten per cent, whilst increased dramatically at approximately 40 per cent in people aged 5-65 and people ages >65 had fallen back at 35 per cent in people aged 36-50.

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Writing Feedback / Do the benefits of workplace mobility are bigger than the demerits of those possibilities? [2]

Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when travelling, etc)

Do benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, information technology becomes part and parcel of people's lives. As such, several people are using information technology to do their jobs outside their workplace because it is effective to spend their time with useful activities. As far as I'm concerned, this action has drawbacks, but many beneficial effects have a tendency to be excellent.

Admittedly, people today have a high improvement of life quality since technology affected people's lives. For instance, people seem to do their works at home because they think that it is more efficient when they finish their works outside their workplace than doing it at office. As a consequence, this way can cause people overwork in their activities and it will make bad behavior for people because they tend to hinge on information technology.

Despite those drawbacks, information technology has many benefits for people's lives especially within people work. Firstly, the internet connection has been known of all people because nowadays people have opportunity to do their works except in their offices. Furthermore, people gain knowledge from information technology that recently they provide. By doing so, people can do their works whenever and wherever they are. In addition, as long as there is an internet connection and technology devices, people can solve their works easily because the internet offers many types of information.

The aforementioned evidence reveals that information technology can support people works in all parts. It is imperative that people also should pay more attention to what kinds of work that they should do in their workplace or outside.

Writing Feedback / In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. [2]

In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country.

Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

Nowadays, high quality of education becomes a compulsory part and parcel for each person. As such, people today seem to choose continuing their studies in abroad because of several reasons such as gain ne experience, better facilities and they can live as independent human. However, in the past, this trend has not popular since they think that studying abroad is difficult. As far as I'm concerned, this trend also has drawbacks, but many beneficial effects tend to superior.

On the one hand, several people in the past are likely to study in their own country because they think it is difficult to gain. For instance, people who choose to continue their studies, automatically they do not afraid of all things that they will meet in their universities like culture because they know the atmosphere in their universities. As a result, while they feel comfortable studying in their countries, they cannot explore more about themselves and their cultures since they just meet with people from own country.

Despite those drawbacks, these days, many opportunities for people who want to continue their studies in abroad. Firstly, in these days and ages, there are many scholarships that people can gain so that people only prepare themselves to enter at university that they want. Furthermore, people also have opportunity to explore their cultures with other people that they meet, and it can result to people have new knowledge. In addition, studying abroad also can help people to learn about other languages, certainly when people live in new place willy-nilly they must communicate with people there.

To sum up, it seems to me that people continuing their studies in abroad will achieve many positive influences in their lives as far as they have effort. It is imperative that people also should pay more attention with their decisions especially for education and parents also should take action to support their children about all parts like education.

Writing Feedback / The frozen fish pies - details about the manufacturing presented in the diagrams. [2]

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams illustrate a breakdown of manufacture of frozen fish pies. At first glance, it is evident that there are five important contents to make a fish pie, it is consisting of peas, fish, sauce, potato in microwaveable container. In addition, a fish pie will be produced in two basic contents including potatoes and fresh salmon.

According to the diagrams, it is reveals that there are different basic contents to produce a fish pie. In this way, people are using potatoes to produce it. The first step is cleaning the potatoes from the container during up to one month. After that, potato peel entered in waste disposal and then slices the potato. After wards, boil the potatoes and then chill before put into store. Then, enter in potato tool to the next step, and it will continue to wrap.

Next, fresh salmon used to produce a fish pie. First of all, add lemon juice and salt, after that enter in steam oven and then remove skin and bones in waste disposal by chef. After wards, inspect the salmon, and then prepared peas and sauce before enter in potato machine. In the end process, collect the potato and salmon in wrap and enter in freeze before send to store or dispatch.

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Writing Feedback / The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours [NEW]

The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph illustrates a breakdown of the mean temperature per month during a year, and the table gives information with regard to the average number of hours of sunshine in different cities. At first glance, it is evident that Sydney has a higher temperature than other cities over the period. Noted, New York was the highest number of hours of hours of sunshine in three major cities.

According to the line graph, it shows that the average of monthly temperatures in Sydney was decreased before it gets a massive at the end of month. This figure was stood at under 25 in January. While, this trend had remained stable over the next three months before it experienced a dramatic decline at around 16 in July. There was a significant increase at 25 in the end of period, with the total annual hours of sunshine at 2,535.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the graph and table, it reveals that London and New York temperatures had a similar pattern, even though both figures had a big gap for the total annual hours of sunshine. Both figures stood at under ten, and then increased slightly over the next six months before those figures fell back at under ten. Finally, the total annual hours of sunshine in London and New York were 1,180 and 2,535 respectively.

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Writing Feedback / The table below gives the results of two surveys, in 1997 and 2006 [2]

The table below gives the results of two surveys, in 1997 and 2006, in which people were asked which communication skills were essential in their jobs.

The table illustrates information with regard to the percentage of people asked of different surveys between 1997 and 2006. At first glance, it is evident that the most essential communication skills which is rated the highest is dealing with people, and making speeches or presentation is communication skills that is not really influencing in people's job over the period.

To begin with, the proportion of dealing with people experienced increase from 60 per cent to 65 per cent. Similarly, giving an advice and have a knowledge of particular products, both increased slightly. However, selling a product or service was significantly decline from 35 per cent to 41 per cent during nine-year period.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the table, it reveals that listening carefully to colleagues was higher percentages of people asked for internal communication at 38 per cent to 47 per cent than others over the period. The proportion in making speeches or presentation was the lowest at 7 % to 11 % from 1997 to 2009. While, for four others internal communication saw the same pattern during nine years.

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