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All students should wear uniform when going to school.

3 - @Holt thanks a lot for your comment, I'll follow it and practice more <3...

Writing FeedbackClera Nguyen - Dec 19, 2021Clera Nguyen - Dec 19, 2021
My passion for programming. Motivation letter for Master degree in Computer Science

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your reply! I will think further about the letter according to your advice....

LettersVivienCao - Dec 18, 2021VivienCao - Dec 18, 2021
UBC Undergrad Personal Profile: (Engineering)

2 - This response statement does not provide any semblance of prompt responsiveness. There is no reference at all to the...

Undergraduateanimishg - Dec 18, 2021Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Europublichealth+ EMJMD- Erasmus Letter of Motivation

2 - Paragraph 3 can be better fomatted to seperate the information. It appears to be an over informed paragraph to...

Letterswinsar - Dec 18, 2021Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Erasmus Mundus Masters in Central and East European, Russian and Eurasian Studies Personal Statement

3 - Last paragraph where you said that you want to study in Europe because of their political and economic action...

GraduateMeerimia1 - Dec 18, 2021monicaaa0017 - Dec 21, 2021
The UGRAD /global undergraduate exchange program's essay/ - What is you leadership style?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for responded. I will take your review and upgrade my essay. Thank you very...

ScholarshipKHLili - Dec 18, 2021KHLili - Dec 18, 2021
THE OTHER ROAD I'LL TAKE - MY BACKUP PLAN IF I DO NOT GET A SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thanks a lot for helping me out and for replying at the earliest. @Holt...

Undergraduatehardilaz - Dec 18, 2021hardilaz - Dec 19, 2021
Conditions of Mental Illness: How Capitalism is Responsible for the Mental Health Crisis

2 - You are still trying to establish your thesis statement. As such, a general discussion of the cost of...

Research PapersBuggy - Dec 18, 2021Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Studying English language in an English-speaking country is best (but not the only) way to learn it

2 - In truth, your restatement is a bit off target when compared to the original. The idea behind the original...

Writing Feedbackthungan3009 - Dec 18, 2021Holt - Dec 18, 2021
[ Task 2 - Discussion ] take a job before university

3 - The introduction could have a bit more work done on it. For example, the sentences are too long and...

Writing Feedbackdaisy223 - Dec 18, 2021kaching00 - Dec 18, 2021
Exploring options for holding corporations accountable - DuPont and PFOA contamination

2 - The hook will be more effective if told through a narration of historical events, without any reference citations. That...

Research Paperssunnyhart - Dec 18, 2021Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Could someone explain what does this quote implies? Any advice on this essay will be appreciated.

3 - The quote talks about how science needs intuition before logic, for even to prove anything scientifically, you need to...

Essaystalhasaracoglu - Dec 17, 2021winsar - Dec 18, 2021
Motivation letter for CSE program: "Why are you a suitable candidate?" Why CSE and what next?

3 - the overall presentation is pretty good. It is well organized. However, I think you should add more about your...

Letterskaching00 - Dec 17, 2021monicaaa0017 - Dec 21, 2021
Chart - Anthropology students decisions and Table - salaries of the anthropologists

2 - The task 1 essay and the task 2 essay have different word count requirements. The Task 1 essay requires...

Writing FeedbackWingw - Dec 17, 2021Holt - Dec 17, 2021
Computer Science programme - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

2 - Your essay is too generalized in approach. This essay needs to be more specific and longer due to the...

Lettersahsbrrr - Dec 16, 2021Holt - Dec 17, 2021
Two graphs: the number of train riders and the proportion of trains that run on time to the target

3 - While the 'overall' part is fine enough on it's own, the first graph seems to have more accurately fluctuated...

Writing FeedbackBlluryFace - Dec 16, 2021kaching00 - Dec 17, 2021
Creativity takes courage. Photography and video Statement of Intent.

3 - Thank you I will take this into consideration when editing....

Undergraduater3njnbott - Dec 16, 2021r3njnbott - Dec 16, 2021
Nowadays, more and more older people need to compete with the younger people for the same jobs

3 - Hello, Jasmine. Hope this suggestion would help you, I used to struggle from the same problem that shown on...

Writing FeedbackJasmine Le - Dec 16, 2021Wingw - Dec 17, 2021
How the Internet affect one's critical thinking?

4 - @Wingw Your structure is pretty clear and easy to read: Introduction - Example - Conclusion. However, it would...

Writing FeedbackWingw - Dec 16, 2021alx301 - Dec 18, 2021
SI scholarship for master's studies in Sweden

2 - Your referral is coming from a very personal place in writing this reference. You are obviously very personally involved...

ScholarshipMaheer18 - Dec 15, 2021Holt - Dec 16, 2021
Question 18: Some people think the government should spend more money on public services rather than

2 - To what extent? The measured response is required. You need to frame your response to show a measured...

Writing Feedbackhoangtamanh - Dec 15, 2021Holt - Dec 15, 2021
The bar chart shows the employment rate of males and females in South Africa, Chile, Finland, Norway

2 - When you write the summary overview, of which the trending statement is included, you will need to limit the...

Writing FeedbackKevin Huy - Dec 15, 2021Holt - Dec 15, 2021
WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY? (UBC but can be used in other university/scholarship applications)

2 - I believe that you have over philosophized your response to the point where it lost its logic and common...

UndergraduateDaegu - Dec 15, 2021Holt - Dec 15, 2021
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Discussion about advantages and disadvantages of GREEN ENERGY.

4 - @Wingw Thank you! I noted your comment! But can you give me some examples for the consequences of green...

Writing Feedbackthangitcbg - Dec 15, 2021thangitcbg - Dec 18, 2021
Share your reasons for choosing AIF Computer Science program at Waterloo. Why this school?

2 - It is obvious that you have done much research into the course listing for your chosen major. You can...

Undergraduateglacierstar56 - Dec 14, 2021Holt - Dec 15, 2021
Japanese-European Master program - Erasmus mundus scholarship

2 - You are jumping a whole timeline here. The Covid outbreak was not till 2019. So your interest could...

ScholarshipEnyinnaya1996 - Dec 14, 2021Holt - Dec 15, 2021
I always wanted to be a leader. The values and beliefs you hold strongly to - with examples

2 - Leadership is composed of core leadership values. You cannot use leadership in general as a value you hold dear...

Scholarshiptantantan - Dec 14, 2021Holt - Dec 14, 2021
"The teaching process" - Personal Importance Essay - NTU Undergraduate

3 - woah thx a lot. I will try to fix it....

Undergraduatecanewriter - Dec 14, 2021canewriter - Dec 19, 2021
Professional and cultural experiences shaped your career goals/ how this major will help to that

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review. i really appreciate it. Considering this is my first draft and...

Graduatesravyareddyk - Dec 14, 2021sravyareddyk - Dec 14, 2021
Essay on Prince Edward Island, Colonel Gray Highschool and reasons why you want to enter this school

2 - While the prompt seems to indicate that you should use an outline format to respond to the questions, the...

Writing Feedbackkittenmeo24 - Dec 14, 2021Holt - Dec 14, 2021
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