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"my grandpa's journey" - significant experience, my college admission essay

4 - The process of coping wit h his death has taught me a lot. It made me understood the reality...

Undergraduatejamesmai92 - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
"I was born to a family of immigrants" - Editing Help for my admissions essay.

3 - good luck, and if you need anyone to read your essay or help you brain storm ideas. I'd be...

Undergraduategreatzak - Nov 17, 2009Jd87rh - Nov 20, 2009
UWM personal statement 1 - culturally enriching

4 - Okay, I see that an important point you are making is that you harmonize well with diverse people....

Undergraduatealiaad - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
Experience is the best teacher; influential person - Preparing for the Clep exam

4 - Susan and Kevin - thank you for the feedback. I studied the mistakes you pointed out and understand now...

Writing Feedbackpaula - Nov 17, 2009paula - Nov 23, 2009
reasearch topic on human resource management

7 - i would really like to help you but i am having a hard time understanding what you are trying...

Research Paperskkg786 - Nov 17, 2009summeradams - Nov 17, 2012
'Volunteering at the hospital, pediatrician' - UC Personal Statement: community

2 - Going to school and interacting with friends does not really set you apart from anyone! Yes, you need that...

Undergraduatemshalavadi - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
Dickinson college supplement-globally engaged citizen leaders

4 - My men may sound bad.., My people is not much better. If you say "my colleagues" or something like...

Undergraduateruzhang143 - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
"Seek, seek"-common application short answer( elaborate on one of your activity)

4 - Maybe you can think of something creative to do with seek, seek, seek. Seeking scholarly sources, web resources, and...

Undergraduatejelly - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
Management essay on sporting organisations

4 - Describe the jobs that important members of management must do and describe how netball is the same as other...

Essaysmissyk - Nov 17, 2009jasonwiesenthal - Nov 22, 2009
TOEFL ; Recent story that affected me the most was Pig Flu

4 - I don't know the name of the rule associated with this. You can write, "My jacket is here." and...

Writing FeedbackHelin - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
UC Essay #2 An important experience. Roller Coaster

12 - Mustafa, you are so mean! Ha ha, and even though my first impulse is that it is not good...

UndergraduateJennB2288 - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
The important thing for my campus community to learn about my country- Sewanne U

5 - Thz for the suggestions, I have added some words now, but I don't know how to make concrete conclusions...

UndergraduateRobertlatt - Nov 17, 2009Robertlatt - Nov 20, 2009
Dreaded by walking into that class; it felt like I was walking into a class - Influential Teacher

5 - No, that is just my suggestion! Someone who is very serious about a field also tends to have special...

Undergraduatetesfaw - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 22, 2009
Forward or first page - A Book I am Writing

18 - Much more to come; I appreciate this venue to at least get over my fear of never being good...

Writing FeedbackJeannie - Nov 17, 2009Jeannie - Nov 29, 2009
Thanksgiving night; UC Prompt #1 - Traditions

7 - I disagree with amaryrose. I think that the ending sentence is just the right way to end the essay,...

Undergraduategumdrop41 - Nov 17, 2009Pikafu - Nov 18, 2009
Admissions essay for masters in chemical engineering

10 - I was saying you should include a sentence WITHIN the first para that lists the topics. "In order...

Graduateprasanna88 - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 14, 2009
Essay on events that have changed Australia's multicultural society - feedback.

3 - Looking good. If you get inspired, maybe you will come up with a more intriguing first line. This is...

Writing Feedbackdubulee - Nov 17, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 19, 2009
UC personal statement- community and family

7 - Thank you, yeah I didn't want to sound aggrogant. Its really hard for me to write about myself and...

Undergraduatebabylocs23 - Nov 17, 2009babylocs23 - Nov 18, 2009
my art essay, parthenon vs pantheon

6 - omg i think you are in my class! i have the same thing... 4 exam questions too for my...

Writing Feedbackstockwell - Nov 17, 2009sesudita - Nov 19, 2009
East meets West UC Prompt #2

3 - They contradict one another... that is a good observation. Can you also include a paragraph that gives the opposite...

UndergraduateSmH - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
TOEFL ESSAY " Shools should ask students to evaluate their teachers"

13 - thanks a lot...

Writing Feedbacklyhongyen - Nov 16, 2009lyhongyen - Nov 30, 2009
"the person i am today" rutgers diversity prompt

3 - Don't switch verb tense: My weekend consisted of going to... this is supposed to be about how you...

Undergraduatereptar28 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Biology, Diversity UC Prompt #1

5 - y'welcome...

Undergraduatealeggz - Nov 16, 2009Jeannie - Nov 21, 2009
I loved fighting; Personal statement for University of Arizona

4 - I have to warn you... the admissions people might be prejudice against you if you include MMA and the...

Undergraduatejk17 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
UCF Essay Prompt "Bumps in the Road"

3 - Thanks ;) I just wish I could write as well for the SAT, 25 minutes is not enough time...

Undergraduatekael92 - Nov 16, 2009kael92 - Nov 18, 2009
Toefl- Do you think it is good for teenagers to work while schooling?

3 - Good corrections! But, you are wrong to think they can be corrected by reading aloud. People learning English...

Writing FeedbackPoojasugandhi - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
Research Paper on Reincarnation

13 - There are objects of emotions, of rational thoughts and of intuition, just as there are physical objects. Objects are...

Research Papersheathere - Nov 16, 2009Rajiv - Dec 10, 2009
Admissions Essay about my future career plans-feedback

3 - As a child, I was the member of my family who took interest in helping those who were in...

Undergraduatemonkey1992 - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
"professional chefs" - Rutgers admission essay

4 - This is a refreshing approach and a nice essay to read. You might want to consider answering the "How...

Undergraduatebk310 - Nov 16, 2009zw123 - Nov 21, 2009
Hospitals in Pakistan, International concern

7 - Well, I can't write it for you... I think what you should do is google: descriptive writing Get...

Undergraduatetenzeeila - Nov 16, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 20, 2009
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