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UC prompt 1 - how Scouting has shaped who I am today

5 - If you want to include some reflection on the importance of Scouting, you could do so after opening with...

Undergraduatekhoi1092 - Sep 13, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 14, 2009
competency goal statement / Professionalism Early Childhood Education

3 - In teacher education, they make a big distinction between goals and objectives, using the terms in a much more...

Essaysppennington69 - Sep 13, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 16, 2009
'She did not stop me then' / 'Harry Potter' - Uchicago extended essays

6 - Lol yeah. I didn't really mean it seriously. Harry Potter will always be a good bedtime read for me...

Undergraduatepurplesocks - Sep 13, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 14, 2009
"experience is the best teacher" - Practice essay for CLEP Exam

4 - Thanks for the feedback!...

Writing Feedbackjwinzer - Sep 13, 2009jwinzer - Sep 14, 2009
"my time studying physics" - Stanford short essay- intellectual vitality

3 - I will try and tighten it up tonight/tomorrow, as well as change up my wording in the beginning. ...

Undergraduatekart00cj - Sep 13, 2009kart00cj - Sep 14, 2009
Univeristy of Texas Essay- Essay E

4 - New and Improved version When you ask a person my age, why did you vote for the person...

Undergraduateredsox099 - Sep 13, 2009redsox099 - Sep 14, 2009
"Use you have put your earnings to" - Short Answer Questions

3 - I think these answers are fine....

Undergraduatetkkt1 - Sep 13, 2009Liebe - Sep 14, 2009
I am having trouble differentiating between several terms needed for an essay

5 - It depends on in what field and for what purpose you are writing the review. In general, for papers...

Essaysdanielh - Sep 13, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 17, 2009
"Success doesn't come to you" - UCF Essay

4 - Look over your comma usage, some points have commas where there should be a conjunction....

Undergraduatewoah_amie - Sep 13, 2009BoNyKiD07 - Sep 13, 2009
"ainy Monday summer morning" - Common Application Essay - topic of choice

2 - I did not feel... It is too early... Do you see the problems -- one grammatical, the other...

Undergraduateiceyjammie - Sep 13, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 14, 2009
'Salvadoran culture and multiculture' - UNIVERSITY OF MICHIGAN---diversity

4 - ^I would think that you were either assigned the book or that you chose to read the book...

UndergraduateMercyme90213 - Sep 13, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 14, 2009
TOEFL: Media are paying too much attention to public figures' personal life?

2 - This looks good for a TOEFL essay. Just a few punctuation problems... The interrogations of the media often...

Writing Feedbacklitingjiao - Sep 13, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 14, 2009
An 18-month Vacation-an FSU essay

5 - Good Job! I like the way you write the last sentence in paragraph two: "This experience was a key...

UndergraduateKClevel17 - Sep 13, 2009Kelz0 - Sep 14, 2009
'Acting like an adult' - Florida A meaningful experience..

4 - wow! great essay. it was definitely interesting, compared to some other UF essays i was reading a little while...

Undergraduatekma721 - Sep 13, 2009Lorena21 - Oct 4, 2009
Intro to CommonApp Essay "Evaluate a significant experience & its impact on you"

11 - Okay so I thought I'd put up the first intro I came up with just to see which one...

UndergraduateJDBorough2150 - Sep 13, 2009JDBorough2150 - Sep 13, 2009
"develop expanded thought" - UT admission essay

3 - Yea i was afraid that i was going too far beyond the real problem. I just wanted to make...

Undergraduatecbun - Sep 13, 2009cbun - Sep 13, 2009
Common App Essay for Cornell about Myself?

14 - Hehe.. maybe nothing will happen.. so try to remember something.. even if you were young...

UndergraduateBoNyKiD07 - Sep 13, 2009Mayada - Sep 20, 2009
Her Struggle, a poor Haitian teenager - UCF

4 - It seems like you have a rich history base, but this is all about your mother. The prompt is...

Undergraduateascholaruknow - Sep 13, 2009kenziii - Sep 16, 2009
Common Application Essay on Cousteau

4 - Yay, minimal redraft: 'What Lies Beneath' Jacques-Yves Cousteau. To many, maybe just a name. However, to me,...

UndergraduateUgla - Sep 13, 2009Ugla - Sep 20, 2009
Common App - 'She taught me how to skate' - An influential person

11 - I apologize.. I should have quoted the whole sentence then, lol. Sorry anyway.. As you might have noticed,...

Undergraduatejiaxing - Sep 13, 2009Mayada - Sep 13, 2009
Toefl topic -- why should people attend the university?

4 - EF_Simone kma721 i will improve it! really appreciate your help....

Writing FeedbackJin - Sep 13, 2009Jin - Sep 13, 2009
Cornell Engineering Essay - Aircraft doors

4 - Nice start, but it's too long of a sentence to start by.. Oh Gosh engineering is...

Undergraduatejake_c - Sep 13, 2009Mayada - Sep 13, 2009
Essay on Science (to pursue the proposed field of study)

3 - This is a very likable essay, as Ugla said. However, try to give the ending more emotional power....

Undergraduateeternal flame - Sep 13, 2009creampuffs - Sep 13, 2009
Reserve Readings - What did I do wrong in this essay?

7 - Research your topic more, and spend some time reflecting on it. Once you know the material well enough, your...

Writing FeedbackJeannie - Sep 13, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 25, 2009
Professional experience essay using I Can I Will

2 - You can't determine how to start the essay until you've decided what you're going to say in the...

Essayscomet2000 - Sep 13, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 13, 2009
Structure is not as difficult as writing.

6 - Thank for your nice site neuromancer...but it seems like I'm going to work hard to use it......

Grammar, UsageKeng - Sep 12, 2009Rosejoker - Sep 28, 2009
Common app essay about AMERICAN CREAM PUFFS!

14 - In the paragraph about Edna, make sure you mention that she scooped snow into her hands. It sounds like...

Undergraduatecreampuffs - Sep 12, 2009dancer2010 - Sep 20, 2009
I learned to enjoy spending hours after school running and spending time with my team mates

7 - I'd like to see this read a little more like a narrative than a chronology. Cross country is *tough*....

UndergraduateProcterSilex - Sep 12, 2009Notoman - Sep 17, 2009
Common App Topic of Choice Essay "tumbling down the rabbit hole"

2 - ^It may have potential to be good if you can work on the analogy. Your analogy as it...

Undergraduateioannidis007 - Sep 12, 2009Liebe - Sep 13, 2009
Comparison essay with subject on tolerance and power.

11 - To EF_Sean Hmm, I better be more careful with how I word things next time. Actually it wasn't until...

Writing Feedbackdanielh - Sep 12, 2009danielh - Sep 26, 2009
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