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an enemy who was a positive influence on me.. application

6 - thanks...

Undergraduateishla2 - Dec 2, 2008ishla2 - Dec 3, 2008
"Vacation in China" - NYU Supplemental Essays

9 - I spent my 2008 vacation in China, where I had a very exciting trip. It started in GuangZhou, where...

UndergraduateAngela629 - Dec 2, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 6, 2008
Creative work of art-Commonapp Personal essay

9 - Ya man. I thought so too. I think i have to really check that aspect....

Undergraduateammonia32 - Dec 2, 2008ammonia32 - Dec 3, 2008
toefl: overemphasizing on personal lives of famous people by media

3 - As a student majoring in mass media, I think that it is true that modern media is overemphasizing the...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
Narrative Ethnographic Essay - Needs help

2 - In 1995, a Minister, along with his wife and five children, emigrated from Guatemala City, Guatemala. Her youngest...

Writing Feedbacknguyend - Dec 2, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
Senior Prefect and House Vice-captain; SMU essay- need help in editing it.

3 - I think for your last point, it should be something like, "Today, I feel empowered..." satisfied just doesnt have...

Undergraduatemallikahirwani - Dec 2, 2008mbhaire - Dec 8, 2008
I need help writing my admission essay, how to start it? Rutgers University

10 - Just go with what you think will help you get in. Try to be real about it but whatever...

Essaysporshia - Dec 2, 2008snowc1b - Dec 8, 2008
Have there been any bumps in the road in your life.

3 - I would suggest you to start your first line by saying something unique about Siobban. Don't reveal your secret...

Writing FeedbackMoni09 - Dec 2, 2008hasnaahmed - Dec 2, 2008
Bhangra, Indian folk dance Common - App. Short answer question -edit/trim

6 - Hi, this is the TOS item that the other moderator was talking about: 12. Due to high volume...

UndergraduateSwami - Dec 2, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 3, 2008
Poltical Science, Multiple Questions Essay on Political Issues

2 - Oh, you have to think of the words as if you have only so many to use! Try to...

Writing Feedbackiceboar - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
University of Washington - Choose one of the following two topics and write a short essay.

2 - I know what you mean... sometimes you write something and you know it just is not inspired. However, some...

Undergraduateipo1107 - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
"Choose one activity." Univ. of Ill essay

3 - At first, I was lazy and hated going to the volunteer service, but after (a) few months, I started...

Undergraduatejusanglee91 - Dec 1, 2008timothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
"Personal or academic interests." Univ. of Ill essay.

2 - Airplanes represents a kind of magic for little children, but as they grow up, children tend to shift their...

Undergraduatejusanglee91 - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
MONOPOLY VS. PERFECT COMPETITION (research paper feedback)

3 - Thank you! I'll make some changes and will focus on MLA citation; it's not due until next week so...

Writing FeedbackAndrew - Dec 1, 2008Andrew - Dec 1, 2008
'A new look on life / Competing with others' - Umich essay --setback

5 - I really like it. It flows great. Everyone else covered the minor flaws....

Undergraduatestephaniegu - Dec 1, 2008timothyerdei - Dec 3, 2008
Playing the Piano - short answer

2 - Write so that the words sound like notes.. sometimes with a slow rhythm, sometimes staccato, and drum away at...

UndergraduateMikeyT - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 2, 2008
'Budget cuts' - the leading problem facing our eduactional system today?

2 - Budget cuts have been the leading problem facing our educational system today. When the state of California announced a...

Writing Feedbackmavictoria - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Rhode Island short essay- significant Person

4 - thank you for the comment however I do have one IMPORTANT question, does this essay stays within the topic:...

Undergraduateadelewu - Dec 1, 2008adelewu - Dec 8, 2008
My Life; FALLING THROUGH THIN AIR

3 - My thoughts, The qn asks about the title for the story of your life until now. and why? You...

UndergraduateSunkenSandle - Dec 1, 2008vj_justin - Jan 14, 2009
'taking up challenges' - NYIT essay on career goal.

3 - thank you very much....

Undergraduateishla2 - Dec 1, 2008ishla2 - Dec 2, 2008
Common App Personal Essay~"I could not swim competitively ever again?"

2 - The unbearable experience of swimming that race has had a profound effect on me. Not only did I...

Undergraduatenyczxgemii - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
'Angela did not like the school very much' - Homeschool supplement

2 - I understand that homeschooling is a very special way of learning and I know this is the method for...

UndergraduateAngela629 - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"Saih maht geanguh"- historical influence.

7 - Thanks four your comment on my essay. I like how your each paragraph connect to each other. I like...

Undergraduatejenchow1992 - Dec 1, 2008hasnaahmed - Dec 3, 2008
Datong District, the oldest district of Taipei City, is my hometown.

3 - Hi Kevin, Thank you so much :D...

Writing Feedbackcamellia2008 - Dec 1, 2008camellia2008 - Dec 2, 2008
Passion for a subject or cause? UD Essay Help

2 - Over the past sixteen years of doctor visits, ... I was too young to understand why Sam was...

Writing Feedbackameretouch - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
US Space Project - English CLEP essay (space exploration!)

2 - Space exploration has made information available to us that previously unimaginable. Issues like hunger, disease, global warming ......

Writing FeedbackRacheli - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Lehigh supplement essay - I will contribute to the campus greatly.

3 - Well, the first thing i notice in your essay is that it does not specifically explain why Lehigh is...

Undergraduatemurf5 - Dec 1, 2008Angela629 - Dec 1, 2008
Research Paper (Argument)-Reflections of Society in Children's Literature

2 - I thought the opening paragraph was fine, and your intention clearly stated in the last sentence. Though still...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
New York City is an essential element of academic and cultural life at NYU

3 - Add one more sentence telling about the club you would start. Then, add a sentence about a specific facility...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Essay about Superstition, how to start it?

5 - You can start with a little story. Describe in detail an instance of superstition....

Essaysarslan - Dec 1, 2008aj7514 - Dec 10, 2008
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