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My Mom is the Most Influential Person - college application to UCONN

NEW - Hi all, This essay is for my college application to UCONN. It is not quite finished yet but I...

Undergraduatekelseyyes - Nov 5, 2008 -
My Grandmother's Influence

NEW - I was told to choose a person who has influenced me and why. Please tell me if I go...

UndergraduateZ0LIN - Nov 4, 2008 -
Family history & culture + why applying to UCF - UCF ESSAYS

2 - Good morning. I'm not sure what kind of assistance you were looking for, so I've just made some...

Undergraduategeri2009 - Nov 4, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 5, 2008
short essay about presidential election, pls help me this essay

NEW - Why it is important for American citizens to participate in presidential election First of all I'm not American....

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Nov 4, 2008 -
phone calls for a political campaign - common app short answer

NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...

Undergraduatekkp12345 - Nov 4, 2008 -
Lehigh Essay - Undergraduate Education is the Foundation

3 - Good afternoon. This is a beautiful essay. If you don't count spaces, this takes you down to 995:...

Undergraduatebubbles - Nov 4, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 4, 2008
Change. It has been part of my life since I was young - College Essay

3 - Good afternoon. If you are concerned about too many details, how about combining or condensing some of the...

Undergraduatekraz4laxsoc - Nov 4, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 4, 2008
FIT- Fashion Design Essay - your honest opinion is welcomed

NEW - My name is Dani, I'm 23 years old and this year I will be applying to FIT's Fashion Design...

Undergraduatedvashika - Nov 3, 2008 -
Help~ Essay for music school

NEW - Hello. I would greatly appreciate your help on my essay. lots of critisisms please@!!! Please help me to make...

Undergraduatepianogirl_5 - Nov 3, 2008 -
Love experience - Narrative essay

2 - Good afternoon. Since the prompt was not included in this posting, I have given suggestions for grammar and...

Writing FeedbackSherali - Nov 3, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 4, 2008
'Shining Star of the Catechu People' - Common App...topic of choice--who am I?

NEW - Who Am I? Shining Star of the Catechu People It is eight P.M. and no essay. Hours...

Undergraduatemaddskillz180 - Nov 3, 2008 -
UC ESSAY- I aim hard to become a pediatrician

3 - Describe the world you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how...

Undergraduatezzz12 - Nov 3, 2008zzz12 - Nov 3, 2008
To share the abundance of knowledge that I had learned - Essay Check

5 - Good morning. 1. I addressed that and corrected it in the essay; I may not have changed all...

Undergraduateto91 - Nov 3, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 4, 2008
how do i make my narrative essay into a descriptive essay?

2 - Good afternoon. The main difference between a descriptive essay and a narrative essay is to make sure you...

Undergraduatejojo19888 - Nov 3, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
Concert report - essay for my music class

NEW - this is an essay i had to write for my music class. it has to be five paragraphs. the...

Writing Feedbackchimochi - Nov 3, 2008 -
Intro and Thesis statement on Globalization

3 - Gloria, Thank you for the prompt feedback. It is much appreciated! Now to the task of completing the essay....

Writing Feedbacklinooz - Nov 3, 2008linooz - Nov 3, 2008
The elite annual inter colleges soccer competion -extracurriculum. 150 word

2 - Good afternoon. Mechanically, many things do need corrected in this piece. First, whenever you use the pronoun...

Undergraduatenanayaws - Nov 3, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
Starting essay on Barry Glasser fear in Culture of Fear

2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin with a rough outline, not right off with the introduction. After all,...

Essayssierrastreet408 - Nov 3, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
Quote "we get older.." - how to cite it? Correct usage of "we."

5 - If you really want to avoid it, you could go with "the company." Also, simply adopting a more concise...

Grammar, Usagefabxx - Nov 3, 2008EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
a comparison and contrast from two tales from the canterbury tales

4 - Good evening. Make sure you are capitalizing only proper nouns and the first words of sentences. Your bib,...

Writing Feedbacklowryder49 - Nov 2, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
An education can be defined a million different ways

4 - Good afternoon. Thank you for clarifying about the quotation; you are right to write it exactly as how...

Writing FeedbackWonderfulloser - Nov 2, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 3, 2008
Oates and Stone- A comparative research essay- I need a grammar review!

3 - Thank you for your help however: - Americans cannot invade other americans (as far as wars go). Therefore...

Writing Feedbackalexcuk - Nov 2, 2008alexcuk - Nov 2, 2008
How to start my essay about a criminal?

3 - thanks x...

EssaysJess89 - Nov 2, 2008Jess89 - Nov 3, 2008
Henry miller, man's destiny - my undergrad admissions essay

2 - You've done a good job of explaining this event, but not a lot of evaluation of it. Try to...

Undergraduatemimi101 - Nov 1, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 2, 2008
Soccer Essay. Common App 150 words or less

2 - Good evening. Your piece is mechanically clean; I could see no spelling or grammatical mistakes. You have good...

Undergraduateazianpinoy - Nov 1, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 2, 2008
my leadership skills, UCF I need feed back and grammer checking

NEW - prompt:What qualities or unique characteristics do you possess that would allow you to contribute to the UCF community? ...

Undergraduateelenighbinks - Nov 1, 2008 -
The Summer of 2001 changed my life completely. UF essay

2 - "The SummerAs this is neither a proper noun nor the first word of a sentence, it should not be...

UndergraduateSui0915 - Nov 1, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 1, 2008
Satirical essay; The topic is how lazy American's are.

3 - Just refrain from writing "like" and it's going to be fine....

Writing Feedbackxxcookiesxx - Nov 1, 2008alexcuk - Nov 2, 2008
Lacrosse became my passion - Common App Short answer

3 - Thanks Alot...

Undergraduatekraz4laxsoc - Nov 1, 2008kraz4laxsoc - Nov 2, 2008
To enrich Howard University - Help with law school personal statement.

9 - Good evening, I apologize for using all caps, I had no intent of yelling at you. Thank you...

Undergraduateiwanthis - Nov 1, 2008iwanthis - Nov 23, 2008
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