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Mathematics and technology - motivation letter to a german university

2 - Paragraphs 3 and 4 are out of place in this presentation. You do not need to give a summarized...

Letterssara1999 - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Motivation letter for MSc in Data Science.

2 - Remove the reference to your academic training. Those are normally a part of a motivational letter. You should sell...

Letterssupunchandi - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
MotivationalLetter: Master's degree in Microbiology and Microbial Biotechnology

2 - Since you already have an existing master's degree, you should be justifying why you would want to pursue a...

LettersDam94 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Faculty of Management and Tourism at Hanoi University - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR ERASMUS SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This is not a very effective ML letter for EM. It is more applicable towards a non scholarship based...

LettersHuiMin - Mar 25, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Motivation letter for master of fine art master in Amsterdam

4 - I believe that it's very nice but for some improvements i would totally agree with holt...

Lettersedenlan - Mar 11, 2024 / smichalo - Mar 18, 2024
Motivational essay to study a bachelor degree at the Copenhaguen Business School

2 - Please edit the beginning of your essay. You should be focusing only on the motivational aspect of your interest...

Lettersoller210 - Mar 6, 2024 / Holt - Mar 10, 2024
Motivation letter to Germany embassy in computer science for master degree

3 - @Nazfe73 Your motivation letter only talked about your personal interest. How does it benefit the people of Yemen; I...

LettersNazfe73 - Feb 26, 2024 / Aroma - Mar 8, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus - Advanced spectroscopy in chemistry (ASC)

2 - Being an Erasmus Mundus motivational letter, I was expecting a far more interesting and informative presentation than this. Your...

Lettersblanicen - Feb 15, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
For Review- Letter of motivation for Global Scholarship under Lund University, Sweden

2 - Paragraph 5 should be further developed. That paragraph offers you the opportunity to further enhance your qualifications as a...

Lettersnafiz33 - Feb 12, 2024 / Holt - Feb 18, 2024
Motivation letter on why I should be given the AXEL ADLER SCHOLARSHIP.

2 - Do not waste the time of the admissions officers with petty information such as how to address you. That...

Lettersbenadine30 - Feb 10, 2024 / Holt - Feb 11, 2024
Motivation letter for Erasmus mundus program in Applied Ecohydrology

2 - There are so many things wrong with this letter that I do not know where to begin. I guess...

LettersOkpokwu - Feb 6, 2024 / Holt - Feb 9, 2024
Letter Of Intent For Turkey Burslari Scholarship - Human Behavior

2 - Your intent to study Human Behavior in Turkey, through this scholarship is not one that will impress the reviewer....

LettersSibgha - Feb 4, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Personal statement for Erasmus mundus IMSISS programme (self-founded)

2 - Consider finding a connection between your interest in Pathway A and your thesis research. You will do well...

LettersMartssm - Feb 2, 2024 / Holt - Feb 7, 2024
Letter of Motivation for Master's Degree in Cognitive Neuroscience and Clinical Neuropsychology

3 - Dear @Holt, Thank you for your feedback! I also agree regarding that specific section. Could I inquire further...

Lettersalizarincrimsons - Jan 26, 2024 / alizarincrimsons - Jan 28, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in IT project Management in Sweden

2 - Avoid turning the motivational letter into an academic and professional biography. The motivational factors in your presentation are quite...

LettersTasosCh - Jan 23, 2024 / Holt - Jan 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Computer Science at University

2 - Dandy, remove the first and second paragraphs. Those are not relevant to the motivation. Replace those instead with paragraphs...

LettersDaFabian - Jan 22, 2024 / Holt - Jan 23, 2024
Motivation letter for HAN university in the Netherlands

3 - @Holt appreciate your help! :) I'll check all the parts that need to fix later on....

Letterstlinh nguyen - Jan 20, 2024 / tlinh nguyen - Jan 21, 2024
COVER LETTER to apply Event Marketing position

2 - Is this supposed to be a practice essay? Or is it an actual application email? My review will vary...

LettersThu Hieu - Jan 19, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivational letter for Erasmus mundus Euroculture program

2 - Try to reduce some aspects of the essay so that you can discuss your professional aspirations in the essay....

LettersY_Saleh - Jan 19, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
A motivation letter for a program at the University of Rome.

2 - There are actually too many screened information in this presentation for me to give you a useful observation but...

LettersLeila321 - Jan 18, 2024 / Holt - Jan 20, 2024
Motivation letter for stipendium hungaricum, for BSCS (undergraduate),Pakistani student

2 - You first indicated that your reason for applying to the scholarship is the positive experience of your friend. You...

LettersManahilFatima - Jan 14, 2024 / Holt - Jan 14, 2024
KU Leuven 2024 Bachelor of Philosophy Mot. Letter.

3 - @Holt Greetings, Halt. The fact that you said that this text was made with the help of an AI...

Lettersssennyyaa - Jan 6, 2024 / ssennyyaa - Jan 13, 2024
My Electrical Engineering Motivational letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Remember that Hngaricum Stipendium is an international scholarship that hopes to have their graduates make a difference in their...

LettersAndern - Jan 8, 2024 / Holt - Jan 13, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Management of Technology at TU Delft

3 - Hi DandyFabian, offering my two cents on your essay: 1. One part that I find unique from your...

LettersDandyFabian - Jan 3, 2024 / himca - Jan 12, 2024
LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR MASTERS IN SUSTAINABLE FOREST AND NATURE MANAGEMENT

4 - @sankook Thank you so much, I appreciate your honest review. I know all this, but the word limit restricts...

LettersEmDee - Jan 3, 2024 / EmDee - Jan 10, 2024
Motivation letter for masters in psychology of global mobility, inclusion and diversity

2 - I do not feel that you have a very strong professional representation in this motivational letter. You have mostly...

LettersEduneeds4me - Jan 3, 2024 / Holt - Jan 9, 2024
Motivation Letter for EMJMD euroculture

2 - What embassy? You have to be specific if you want to catch the reviewer's attention early in the...

Letterspeachylover - Dec 31, 2023 / Holt - Jan 6, 2024
Motivation Letter to MSc in Statistics and Data Science at KU Leuven

3 - @Holt Thanks for the tips! I was still thinking to keep the first paragraphs as a hook(but I will...

Lettersveto - Dec 27, 2023 / veto - Dec 28, 2023
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - You cannot decide anything at this point. However, you can hope to work for Accenture. Remember that you are...

Letterssevesinaa - Dec 15, 2023 / Holt - Dec 25, 2023
Application for Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship for Bachelor of Computer Science

2 - Your vision is not clear enough in this letter. Where do you want to go? Alignment of goals is...

LettersTalha bashir - Dec 9, 2023 / Holt - Dec 25, 2023
Motivation Letter of Stipendium Hungaricum for Masters in Horticulture

2 - Refocus the presentation on your professional and extra curricular activities as it relates to the masters program you are...

Lettersitsbeth - Dec 22, 2023 / Holt - Dec 25, 2023
Recommendation Letter for MFin at MIT

2 - The letter has an almost generic feel to it that makes it very lackluster in terms of recommending you....

Lettersarkfin20 - Dec 22, 2023 / Holt - Dec 25, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivation letter (Mongolian student)

2 - When you speak of the University of Debrecen, do so with more excitement and knowledge about the school. Make...

LettersNandia701 - Dec 21, 2023 / Holt - Dec 23, 2023
TU Graz MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

2 - The letter is good. The theoretical motivation is there. It is clear. Where you want to apply it and...

Lettersayushya - Dec 7, 2023 / Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Motivation letter to study masters in material science word limit is 2500 characters.

2 - Since you have an interest in strengthening the use of carbon fibers in an aerospace setting, why not consider...

Letterstarunkp - Dec 6, 2023 / Holt - Dec 8, 2023
Motivational letter for CERN Summer Student Programme: revision ideas

2 - You do not need to mix your academic history into the motivational letter. The one thing that a motivational...

Lettersniyar - Nov 11, 2023 / Holt - Nov 25, 2023
TU Delft MsC of Computer Science motivation Letter

NEW - Dear Admission, I am Peter. I grew up in a family with a strong football atmosphere, where my...

LettersPeterrrH - Nov 25, 2023 / — -
Motivation letter for the University of Padua - Management for Sustainable Firms

NEW - Hi, I'm writing a motivation letter for the University of Padua. Can someone give me directions? This is really...

LettersTakodundua - Nov 14, 2023 / — -
Motivation Letter for the Master in Computer Science (Machine Intelligence) at ETH Zurich

NEW - I am applying for the Master's program in Computer Science, specialized in Machine Intelligence, offered by ETH Zürich because...

LettersFrancesco Bondi - Nov 13, 2023 / — -
Motivation letter for International Master's program in Neuroscience (NeuroBIM)

3 - Thank you for your feedback, I will revise the essay accordingly, but about my scientific publication, since I will...

Lettersminhsym1341 - Nov 5, 2023 / minhsym1341 - Nov 9, 2023
Letter of Motivation for Admission to the BBA Program at KU Leuven

4 - hi! i am not a professional but i just want to share with you some of my thoughts about...

LetterssaqibM - Nov 2, 2023 / nghn_thyyannh - Nov 4, 2023
Letter of Motivation Master Control, Microsystems, Microelectronics

NEW - Motivation letter Dear Members of the Admissions Committee, My name is XXX, and I am an Electrical Engineer...

Lettersuserawa - Oct 19, 2023 / — -
Motivation letter/ Statement of Purpose for MSc of Environmental Economics

3 - @Holt thank you, I will contact you for help...

Lettersferiverhlg - Oct 13, 2023 / feriverhlg - Oct 16, 2023
You want to sell the televesion. You think a friend of your might like to buy it from you.

2 - There are several discrepancies in your letter that affect the clarity of the information. 1. You have not...

Lettershnhung308 - Sep 21, 2023 / Holt - Oct 7, 2023
DEVELOPMENT MANAGEMENT STUDIES- MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION

3 - THANK YOU VERY MUSH...

Lettersibrahimaaa - Sep 6, 2023 / ibrahimaaa - Sep 27, 2023
Motivation Letter for Ph.D in Bioanalytical Chemistry

NEW - APPLICATION FOR Ph.D Bioanalytical Chemistry program I'm MSc 1 student and this is a motivation letter for applying...

Lettersakeocampha - Sep 24, 2023 / — -
Motivational letter - Postgraduate Studies in the Field of Architecture program - DAAD

2 - The letter itself is too wordy to hold the attention of the reviewer. He is looking for immediate information...

LettersAnandaAlmeida - Aug 31, 2023 / Holt - Sep 16, 2023
Review: letter of explanation for my study permit reapplication

2 - The essence of your reconsideration letter is lost in the basic translation from one language to the next. It...

Lettersphemmy680 - Aug 27, 2023 / Holt - Sep 13, 2023
Recommendation letter for Undergraduate degree for GKS program_Biotechnology

NEW - This is my recommendation letter that I wrote on behalf of my high school principal. Dear Board of...

LettersUser_81 - Sep 9, 2023 / — -
Write a reply to Sara. In your email - ask her what she want to do - suggest places

3 - @nguyenthuthuya35 How have your -> How has your Many thank -> Many thanks It's glad to -> It's nice...

Lettersnguyenthuthuya35 - Aug 26, 2023 / Duy Dang - Aug 26, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum; writing motivation letter to apply for a one-tier master's degree in medicine

NEW - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter - Medicine My motivation letter: Dear Admission Committee, I am writing this...

Lettersouiouioui - Aug 14, 2023 / — -
Write the letter for Sam to review your tet holiday

2 - This letter is too short. You have to write at least 150 words for the letter to be considered...

Letterswithbei - Jul 28, 2023 / Holt - Aug 4, 2023
Help improve my Motivation Letter for Masters Degree in Environmental Engineering

2 - It is quite unfortunate that you do not realize the intention of a motivational letter and it could help...

Lettersl_inaaaa - Jun 8, 2023 / Holt - Jun 25, 2023
My letter of interest to study biotechnology in Portugal

2 - At that point you should be providing information about your previous experiences that will actually prove that you...

Letterssirobedd - Jun 23, 2023 / Holt - Jun 24, 2023
How To Write A Good Letter Of Recommendation?

NEW - How To Write A Good Letter Of Recommendation? Writing a strong letter of recommendation is important to effectively...

Lettersvidhi001 - May 23, 2023 / — -
Motivation letter draft for Food Innovation and Design Erasmus Joint Masters Degree program

2 - This is an academic and experience biography. It is not a motivational letter that can be used for the...

Lettersnoveliaananda - May 11, 2023 / Holt - May 12, 2023
Motivation letter for LLM in Finance application in Germany

NEW - letter of motivation Hey hey, I am considering applying for a LLM in Finance and I have...

Letterspinguino98 - May 8, 2023 / — -
Write a letter to your friend telling them about the book.

2 - There are several confusing elements in your writing that affect the clarity of the your letter. The first confusing...

LettersKhuong Nguyen - May 8, 2023 / Holt - May 8, 2023
Reviewing a Motivation Letter for MSc Robotics University of Bristol

2 - I know that you meant for this to be the impressive hook for your opening statement. However, it...

Letterssethivansh6 - Apr 15, 2023 / Holt - Apr 17, 2023
An email: A lost bag You went to your friend Jay's house yesterday and you left your bag there.

2 - The letter writing task shares the same criteria as the other Task 1 essays. That means, you cannot write...

LettersHamin - Mar 20, 2023 / Holt - Mar 21, 2023

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