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A letter of motivation for DAAD master program scholarship in Neuroscience

NEW - They have asked me to write a letter of motivation outlining the academic, professional and personal motives for completion...

ScholarshipSadiq Mangal - Oct 12, 2023 / — -
Statement of Interest for admission to the Japanese university as a student from Ukraine

NEW - Hello, I wrote something like this at the first time and I really need help. What should I remove...

Scholarshiptoxyyx - Oct 10, 2023 / — -
GKS-U An only child with 4 siblings aspires to become an IT Engineer

NEW - Global Korea Scholarship application essay - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Educational background -...

ScholarshipKirab1222 - Oct 9, 2023 / — -
It starts with a self-awareness - Chevening leadership and influence essay

NEW - Hi all, this is a draft I have prepared for Chevening leadership essay. Wish I could receive some feedbacks...

Scholarshipawispawit30 - Oct 8, 2023 / — -
Commonwealth Development Impact Statement Part 1 - journalism challenges

2 - The impact statement you have chosen to use does not necessarily reflect the sentiments that you have presented as...

ScholarshipSanskriti - Oct 5, 2023 / Holt - Oct 8, 2023
My academic journey - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - This is not a leadership and influencing essay in line with the expected information for Chevening. What you wrote...

Scholarshiphabib_baharuddin - Oct 5, 2023 / Holt - Oct 8, 2023
"From Adversity to Aspiration: My Journey of Passion, Determination, and Cultural Bridging" - GKS

2 - You make a convincing case in this essay except for where your passion to study in Korea comes from....

Scholarshipyetung - Sep 27, 2023 / Holt - Oct 8, 2023
Clean water - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay

2 - The presentation is too selfish in focus. This is all about your leadership skills, but it is also wanting...

Scholarshipantonio1995 - Sep 23, 2023 / Holt - Oct 7, 2023
GKS-U Personal Statement Business Administration; time to complete my university education in Korea

2 - This response is actually more aligned with the Language Study Goals than the requirements for the personal statement. Have...

Scholarshiprosieloet - Sep 22, 2023 / Holt - Oct 7, 2023
MSc program in Physics at The University of Queensland - AAS

2 - You have to revise the whole response. You need to choose at least 2 institutions in Australia to apply...

ScholarshipOUDOM - Sep 20, 2023 / Holt - Oct 7, 2023
Catalyst of Change: Pursuing AI Dreams from Mexico to Korea (GKS scholarship)

NEW - personal statement Hi guys I will apply for the GKS scholarship, via university what do you think of...

ScholarshipByf1nd - Oct 6, 2023 / — -
Leadership and Influence - Chevening Essay - An Ex Employee, Currently Business Owner

NEW - Greetings! Really appreciate your help with this Leaderhip and Influence essay for Chevening application. Any input is welcomed. Thank...

ScholarshipNGP1112 - Oct 2, 2023 / — -
"gks-u 2024 "media and communication:my interests and motivations" personal statement" @holt

2 - Try to provide more of a backgrounder on your family as required by the prompt. You are not mentioning...

ScholarshipHITZYBITZYTYTY - Sep 16, 2023 / Holt - Sep 26, 2023
Uganda's economy - Common wealth scholarship

2 - The essay lacks a clear focus on Uganda and how you plan to develop the local and national interests...

ScholarshipDianish kiconco - Sep 15, 2023 / Holt - Sep 26, 2023
QUESTBRIDGE SHORT ANSWER RESPONSES!

NEW - Hi! Incoming senior here applying to Questbridge. I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give feedback on...

Scholarshipathenalee - Sep 16, 2023 / — -
GKS personal statement interior design master degree

3 - Im currently studying to get ielts and also started studying korean to boost my application file and to get...

Scholarshipkoukoumin - Sep 4, 2023 / koukoumin - Sep 16, 2023
What kind of impact do you want to have through your UWC education?

2 - You have not answered the question. You have placed a very interesting non-response in its place. You have no...

ScholarshipShophita - Sep 5, 2023 / Holt - Sep 16, 2023
A padded cell - QuestBridge Personal Essay

2 - You are right about the "I am poor" theme of the paper. That does not fly with the reviewers...

Scholarshipantiquelegend - Sep 6, 2023 / Holt - Sep 12, 2023
Essay for MSc Business Analytics Australia scholarship - demonstrating the University's values

NEW - Hello Everyone, Please help me with my draft for the MSc Business Analytics scholarship. Thank you Topic: Please...

Scholarshipkainan - Aug 29, 2023 / — -
Application for Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Europubhealth+ Program - motivation letter

NEW - Hi all, I kindly ask for your insights and feedback on my motivation letter, which I have prepared...

ScholarshipKokoButter - Aug 29, 2023 / — -
Chevening essay - How networking helped me succeed in my career development

NEW - NETWORKING essay Chevening is looking for individuals with strong networking skills, who will engage with the Chevening community...

Scholarshipkn197 - Aug 28, 2023 / — -
Chevening essay - Leadership and Influence - Inspiration and motivation for a common goal

NEW - LEADERSHIP essay Chevening is looking for people who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries....

Scholarshipkn197 - Aug 28, 2023 / — -
Leveraging my networking skills to impact the health sectors - Chevening Networking Essay

NEW - Hello Everyone, please this is my draft for the Chevening networking essay. All suggestions are humbly welcome. I...

ScholarshipFrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023 / — -
Skills and knowledge gained from study by an individual aspiring to become a healthcare professional

3 - First of all, my first choice program is the University of ... You will need to reconstruct this...

Scholarshiplingling4 - Aug 9, 2023 / FrimpsCobby - Aug 22, 2023
My rotation at the antenatal care unit - Chevening scholarship on Leadership

NEW - CHEVENING SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY Please this is my draft for the leadership and influence. @Holt, could you please review...

ScholarshipFrimpsCobby - Aug 19, 2023 / — -
Resilience, curiosity, and a passion for learning - Global Korea Scholarship (GKS)

NEW - Global Korea Scholarship admission essay Good day! Please kindly share your opinion about my essay. The essay...

Scholarshipnandbwd - Jul 30, 2023 / — -
Manaaki Scholarship Essay: What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your proposed program?

2 - You cannot just explain the syllabus to the reviewer. You need to make a direct connection between skills development...

Scholarshipdanni5 - Jul 17, 2023 / Holt - Jul 17, 2023
MA in Interpreting and Translation - Leadership Essay for Chevening Scholarship

2 - This is not a leadership essay as the Chevening committee would require an applicant to present. This is more...

Scholarshipmademoisellegise - Jul 1, 2023 / Holt - Jul 7, 2023
Qualities that sets me apart from other LPDP Indonesia scholarship applicants (no word limit)

2 - The essay is very busy with giving a listing of your traits, but these all lack in justifications. Your...

Scholarshipastr_in_jkt - Jun 19, 2023 / Holt - Jun 20, 2023
Love for STEM and UX - Self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship

NEW - Hi all, I want to submit a self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship. Here's my draft. can anyone help me...

Scholarshipbonon_noona - May 1, 2023 / — -
The field of epidemiology - Why did you choose your proposed course?

2 - While this is a concise presentation of your academic goal and reasons for choosing the university, the AAS actually...

ScholarshipJay_001 - May 1, 2023 / Holt - May 1, 2023
Practical Examples of How You Intend to Use the Knowledge, Skills and Connections - AAS Scholarship

2 - I am not sure that you should be assuming anything as an example in your discussion. Are you absolutely...

Scholarshipbrendadevita - Apr 30, 2023 / Holt - May 1, 2023
The multicultural society of Australia - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution

2 - The response to this essay should only be around 200 words. It should never be at the 600 word...

ScholarshipAA356918 - Apr 26, 2023 / Holt - Apr 27, 2023
Trade. Fixing the process. Solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform?* - AAS Essay

2 - Keep your narration to the maximum of 200 words. The AAS is a word limited response essay application type....

Scholarshipnurikasetya - Apr 18, 2023 / Holt - Apr 19, 2023
Personal Statement about Aspirations & Desired Impact Proved by Extracurriculars for Scholarship

NEW - Outline your future aspirations and how a degree at (Uni) will help you achieve these goals. What positive impact...

Scholarshipstrawboy - Apr 17, 2023 / — -
Public Health - AAS Essay: I chose Public Health as my proposed study. Why?

2 - Do not separate your interest in Public Health from your chosen courses and universities. That is because your academic...

Scholarshipsintahtp - Apr 5, 2023 / Holt - Apr 6, 2023
Supporting Statement for AAS-Part 1: Proposed Course and Institution - Comm. and Media Studies

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, that is really helpful....

Scholarshipmaulanaws - Apr 1, 2023 / maulanaws - Apr 4, 2023
Hand on experience - HISPANIC SCHOLARSHIP FUND ESSAY

2 - The first 2 paragraphs do not necessarily reflect responses that would relate to the given prompt instructions. These are...

Scholarshipvivi_0628 - Mar 29, 2023 / Holt - Apr 3, 2023
Personal Statement - Master at Brunel University (motivation letter)

2 - This is a very messy thought presentation lacking in actual application towards the prompt requirements. There is, quite often,...

Scholarshiplany83 - Mar 28, 2023 / Holt - Apr 2, 2023
Why proposed course and institution? I put my attention to the University of Sydney (USYD) and UNSW

2 - The essay response has a 200 word maximum requirement. You will need to reduce the word count in this...

Scholarshipcarlsjunior - Mar 27, 2023 / Holt - Apr 1, 2023
Undergraduate Global Excellence Scholarship - What makes you excellent?

2 - You fall short in terms of qualifying factors for this scholarship. Your academic achievements do not warrant any consideration...

Scholarshipayemar - Mar 21, 2023 / Holt - Mar 22, 2023
Shaping Public Discourse Through Journalism - QUESTBRIDGE CPS

2 - You are over the maximum count by 3 words so you will need to revise one sentence presentation to...

Scholarshipjoshdaposh - Mar 19, 2023 / Holt - Mar 19, 2023
Group work and human resources

2 - Note that the essay prompt refers to you, in the singular in reference to the writing topic. The provided...

ScholarshipKazu01 - Mar 7, 2023 / Holt - Mar 8, 2023
Artisanal and small-scale mining (ASM) - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

2 - You sound like you are just repeating the course description and syllabus from the university websites. You spent more...

Scholarshipnawaf - Mar 6, 2023 / Holt - Mar 7, 2023
Swimming - Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program

4 - @gulfbreeze123 Hi! I'm currently doing the same application and I think for this question focus especially on the numbers,...

Scholarshipgulfbreeze123 - Mar 5, 2023 / celbel - Mar 7, 2023
The multiverse theory - QUEST BRIDGE ESSAY - Is this too generic?

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'm not exactly sure what I should take out. Due to the fact that...

Scholarshipizyuki - Mar 2, 2023 / izyuki - Mar 3, 2023
Ecommerce, fiance, management - GKS - G Personal Statement (MBA Student)

3 - @Holt Hello, Please don't get me wrong. Actually I failed last time that's why I'm trying to write good...

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 22, 2023
Social Science - KOREAN GLOBAL SCHOLARSHIP - GOAL OF STUDY

4 - @tsyiaa99 Hey, I face the same problem while writing "study goal." I'd suggest you read some good articles...

Scholarshiptsyiaa99 - Feb 6, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
2023 GKS-G STUDY PLAN - VETERINARY MEDICINE MASTER'S DEGREE

3 - @mvorti Write in as much detail as possible and explain how you learned Hangul, step by step. As you...

Scholarshipmvorti - Feb 17, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
Growing up in the Solomon Islands - why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - This is not an appropriate response to the writing query. These are considered vague, nonganswers to the question. You...

ScholarshipPED65 - Feb 21, 2023 / Holt - Feb 21, 2023
GKS-G Doctoral in Media and Communication - Goal of Study and Study Plan (Embassy Track)

2 - You guessed right. You somehow managed to write a personal statement / motivational response rather than a goal of...

Scholarshiphzal - Feb 19, 2023 / Holt - Feb 20, 2023
Improving Further - GKS - G Korean Language Study Plan

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the help. I'll improve myself....

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 14, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 15, 2023
Student Council - a situation that demonstrates your ability to develop new relationships

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. At first, I thought the point of the question was how can I...

Scholarshipusksblm315 - Feb 13, 2023 / usksblm315 - Feb 14, 2023
Commercial Law: How will my knowledge and skills to contribute to my country's development?

4 - looks like you're just answering the question, not writing a discussion about it. You do not write structured articles,...

Scholarshipalinariana - Feb 9, 2023 / someoneishere - Feb 12, 2023
Management position - scholarship to contribute to the organisation's human development needs

2 - This is an incorrect response to the question. A proper response will show how the applicant has assessed his/her...

ScholarshipTutu000 - Feb 11, 2023 / Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Master in IT project Management - knowledge and skills important to Botswana's development

3 - Good content, you've mentioned the problems in your own country and most likely how they can be addressed. Try...

ScholarshippalePale - Feb 4, 2023 / Tutu000 - Feb 11, 2023
An underprivileged community - Australian award Scholarship preferred choices

3 - @holt Thanks for the review, I need a wake-up call and you just gave me. Appreciated....

ScholarshipAhmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023 / Ahmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023
Social Science / Linguistic with Hons - KOREAN GLOBAL SCHOLARSHIP - STUDY PLAN

2 - The essay is not concerned about your undergraduate certification. Nor is it concerned with the number and kinds of...

Scholarshiptsyiaa99 - Feb 3, 2023 / Holt - Feb 4, 2023
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023 - Social Welfare major!

3 - As Holt said above, you have no apparent motive. For a person who already has an academic background, there...

ScholarshipFitriws21 - Jan 20, 2023 / crlian - Jan 24, 2023
Commitment to contribute, Study Plan, and Contribution after graduated

2 - Do not deviate from the actual focus of the essay which is the improvement of Science teaching in the...

Scholarshipdanijaya08 - Jan 20, 2023 / Holt - Jan 21, 2023

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