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|I am potential leader and influencer in the future - CHEVENING ESSAY
3 - Thankyou for your suggestion, this is my first time write essay in english, So should I send this essay...
ScholarshipdalilaHD - Sep 19, 2020 / dalilaHD - Sep 23, 2020
|The Stanford Medical Youth Program - Questbridge - proudest achievement
Scholarshipthaonhi97 - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 22, 2020
|Chevening - Leadership essay - what have I achieved as a leader
2 - The essay does show influencing abilities. However, being elected president by default us not leadership. This poses a problem...
ScholarshipMostafa94 - Sep 20, 2020 / Holt - Sep 21, 2020
|PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE
2 - You have only given the brainstorming information that you developed. This is nowhere near an academic essay that reflects...
Scholarshipkarenntz_1097 - Sep 21, 2020 / Holt - Sep 21, 2020
|To be the leader of our own life - Chevening looking for leaders or influencers
5 - @Omnia A bundle of thanks that you have read my essay and mentioned my mistakes, I try to fine...
ScholarshipAnsari01 - Sep 19, 2020 / Ansari01 - Sep 20, 2020
|GKS This scholarship will assist me greatly in my endeavors and allow me the accomplish career goals
Scholarshiprabrab - Sep 19, 2020 / rabrab - Sep 20, 2020
|Chevening - Studying in UK Essay (The aim of studying is not only to obtain a scientific degree)
2 - The Chevening Scholarship will look for the connection of your current work, your past and present work experience, with...
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 19, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|Plan on studying Psychology - Puestbridge Essay
2 - You can actually write a totally new essay because this current presentation fails to respond to two questions: 1....
Scholarshipbrowngal - Sep 20, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|QUESTBRIDGE "What do you admire most about your community? What would you change?"
2 - Please remember to break up your presentation into paragraphs. It is extremely difficult to read in this format. The...
Scholarshipdarrensar - Sep 19, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|Chevening Networking Essay (relations are one of the most important strength of current time)
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 18, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|The representative of my colleagues - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
ScholarshipOmnia - Sep 9, 2020 / Omnia - Sep 19, 2020
|Civic Engagement Program - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
ScholarshipSam Ji - Sep 13, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|Chevening Leadership Essay (leadership is not a right to be given, but a privilege to earned)
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 18, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|Confidence - My questbridge scholarship short answer 1
ScholarshipAriel2002 - Sep 18, 2020 / Ariel2002 - Sep 18, 2020
|History, Book, Weekend, Compliment, Challenge, Future - Questbridge Short answers for Scholarship
Scholarshipluluexcel - Sep 17, 2020 / Holt - Sep 18, 2020
|"CS is too hard" - Questbridge Short Answers - My Proudest Achievement
3 - You wasted the word count on an unnecessary back story. You should have kicked off the essay using the...
ScholarshipBearByte - Sep 17, 2020 / Holt - Sep 18, 2020
|Swimming determination - Questbridge Biographical Essay.
3 - @Holt Thank You for giving me feedback on my essay! I was actually trying to alude to Dory's famous...
Scholarshipprinsipe - Sep 16, 2020 / prinsipe - Sep 17, 2020
|General Science - Chevening application
Scholarshipbluecherry - Sep 16, 2020 / bluecherry - Sep 16, 2020
|"As high as the sky" - KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS MAJOR
3 - Hi @JPM21 I think you use too many quotes for the beginning of your personal statement. I think...
ScholarshipJPM21 - Sep 14, 2020 / imhana - Sep 15, 2020
|Questbridge 1, Historical Figure to meet: Gavrilo Princip
3 - You mixed up your question presentations. This response is meant for a different Questbridge essay regarding the proudest moment...
ScholarshipIcarusFliesOn - Sep 14, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Civil Engineer / A practitioner of Taekwondo - Leadership & Influence Question
ScholarshipJadi - Sep 11, 2020 / Jadi - Sep 12, 2020
|QuestBridge - Tell us about your proudest moment and what it says about you..
3 - The essay is too bland and uninteresting. It does not create an imaginative reading experience for the reviewer. It...
Scholarshipmbotchway - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 11, 2020
|Creations of great infrastructures - KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM 2021 APPLICATION
Scholarshipshinkouuuu - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 9, 2020
|Helping other people grow - Personal Statement for GKS Scholarship 2020 (Embassy Track)
7 - Your updated personal statement is way more better however, you can't start a sentence with "Because" . The reason...
Scholarshipjannicefelicia - Aug 5, 2020 / shinkouuuu - Sep 9, 2020
|Civil Engineer - networking and Influence skills - Chevening
3 - @Holt Dear Mary Rose, Thank your for your precious feedback. Even though, I think it very difficulty for me...
Scholarshipmoo332211 - Sep 3, 2020 / moo332211 - Sep 8, 2020
|Become a influencer, who will be able to change the world into a better place; Chevening scholarship
2 - Sadly, you are not qualified to apply for a Chevening scholarship at this point. You do not have any...
Scholarshipasema_alt - Sep 8, 2020 / Holt - Sep 8, 2020
|A black kid in America - Questbridge Biographical Essay
3 - It would be better if you started this essay on a hopeful note. Rather than the gloom and doom...
ScholarshipAndrewO - Sep 7, 2020 / Holt - Sep 7, 2020
|A section manager - My Chevening leadership essay a part of scholarship needs
2 - Okay, you did well explaining your leadership personality based on a test that you took. However, there was no...
ScholarshipAli Elias - Sep 6, 2020 / Holt - Sep 7, 2020
|"If you are not willing to risk the unusual, you'll have to settle with the ordinary"-Jim Rohn
ScholarshipMimo08 - Aug 31, 2020 / Mimo08 - Sep 6, 2020
|Personal statement for Korean government scholarship. (Civil engineering)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. Tbh This is my first draft personal statement. I will think about your...
Scholarshipapriliyarosa - Sep 2, 2020 / apriliyarosa - Sep 2, 2020
|KGSP: Motivations with which you apply for this program - Why South Korea? Psychology.
2 - Ditch the second paragraph altogether. Work instead on presenting 2 facets of motivation, the social and the educational. You...
Scholarshipalua122 - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|RMIT Personal Statement - Leadership and Digital Marketing
2 - Your reason for believing you deserve this scholarship is unimpressive. Have you studied the requirements of the scholarship? Look...
ScholarshipKurekoHikari - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|Marriage Idea - On QuestBridge short answers
2 - The assumption of the promptnis that you will physically meet a historical figure and spend some time.e with that...
ScholarshipHoneybear - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|The country I did not belong. 2020 GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT SCHOLARSHIP
5 - @Holt I can clearly see my mistakes now. Thank you for pointing out. But regarding the application, associate...
Scholarshiplylrose - Aug 29, 2020 / lylrose - Aug 30, 2020
|"I am trapped" - My Personal Statement - Global Korea Scholarship
2 - The English grammar in this essay is inconsistent and reflects the use of an English translation software during a...
Scholarshiprafifirman - Aug 28, 2020 / Holt - Aug 28, 2020
|Research project about music and learning new languages - KGSP-U: Extracurricular activities
3 - While all of these activities are notable. They do not share equal importance in your presentation. You should indicate...
Scholarshipalua122 - Aug 25, 2020 / Holt - Aug 26, 2020
|Question about Study Plan to improve foreign language for GKS undergraduate. Review needed.
4 - @Holt Your feedback is very helpful. Did I sound like boasting? I really didn't intend to do that, I...
Scholarshipghufran839 - Aug 24, 2020 / ghufran839 - Aug 25, 2020
|"My high school club experience"- prompt: Write about your school activity (1600 characters)
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your critique on my essays, they have been very insightful and I really...
ScholarshipKurekoHikari - Aug 23, 2020 / KurekoHikari - Aug 24, 2020
|University Scholarship Essay Prompt: Write about a contemporary figure you admire (4000 characters)
2 - Does the character count include spaces or not? If it includes spaces, you need to cut this down by...
ScholarshipKurekoHikari - Aug 22, 2020 / Holt - Aug 22, 2020
|The field of law - Motivation PERSONAL STATEMENT - KGSP
3 - The personal statement for the GKS scholarship is not individually written. You must have a copy of the topics...
ScholarshipMoel - Aug 20, 2020 / Holt - Aug 21, 2020
|Passion for leading teams - Chevening leadership essay
2 - Your first 2 experiences are too basic to make an impression on the seasoned reviewer. You should focus on...
ScholarshipCarolinabgp - Aug 20, 2020 / Holt - Aug 20, 2020
|Wordless Love: My Goal to Become a Veterinarian
2 - So, the goal is to discuss your career plan for after you graduate. It is not a discussion of...
Scholarshipkirkwoodkirk - Aug 18, 2020 / Holt - Aug 18, 2020
|MA in Governance and Regional Integration at Pan African University scholarship
2 - Even though you did not have a word or page limitation for the essay, you should really not be...
ScholarshipMusawenkosi - Aug 17, 2020 / Holt - Aug 18, 2020
|'The Mountain to success'- My UWC admission essay
2 - Having advised a tremendous number of students on their UWC applications, I can tell you that this essay will...
ScholarshipCooldudxyxy - Aug 13, 2020 / Holt - Aug 13, 2020
|Korean as the door to the opportunities - GKS-U Study Plan
3 - @Holt Thank so much for you correction, i will correct it to upload it againg, and i hope you...
ScholarshipMariaP24 - Aug 10, 2020 / MariaP24 - Aug 11, 2020
|Studying applied ethics in sports - Personal Statement for Erasmus+ Scholarship MAISI
2 - The personal statement is a bit difficult to understand. You have not really made any clear background reference in...
Scholarshipnanonano - Aug 7, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
|GKS Undergraduate Scholarship 2020 Personal Statement Philippines
Scholarshipkhailmaxim - Aug 5, 2020 / khailmaxim - Aug 5, 2020
|KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS / Role Model
3 - I'd like to take out the first paragraph and please do let me know if there's anything unnecessary...
ScholarshipAnnie26 - Aug 4, 2020 / Annie26 - Aug 5, 2020
|Network building for life opportunities - Chevening Scholarship
3 - Hi Ibad, I noticed some minor mistakes in your essay. For example, "it would be a difficult way". Also,...
Scholarshipibad2308 - Jul 29, 2020 / abclaudya - Aug 3, 2020
|GKS/KGSP Essay Study Plan Language (BEFORE and AFTER you come to Korea.)
2 - You should be presenting the information in an essay / paragraph form. You do not need to outline the...
Scholarshipvbastos36 - Jul 29, 2020 / Holt - Jul 30, 2020
|Describing my leadership and influencing skills to make an effective essay for Chevening application
2 - Okay, remove the reference to your teacher position. It is not a real leadership position because you are referencing...
Scholarshipliacristin - Jul 23, 2020 / Holt - Jul 23, 2020
|KGSP-U Personal Statement for Pol Sci and Int'l Relations (First Draft)
ScholarshipUniAndVerse - Jul 17, 2020 / UniAndVerse - Jul 17, 2020
|Scholarship application for Global Markets and Local Creativities Programme - personal statement
2 - Your personal statement is not focused enough. Have you gone through the list of available masters courses for the...
Scholarshipmarfra - Jul 14, 2020 / Holt - Jul 14, 2020
|KGSP undergraduate Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering
2 - Okay. There is a problem from the very start of your essay. The opening statement is an exaggeration. The...
Scholarshipdomevel - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|3 examples of how to use knowledge and skills + Possible constrains - Master of Commerce AAS
3 - Do not waste character count by counting out your discussion topics. Simply start the discussion. The 3-4 paragraph format...
Scholarshipnabhila - Jun 29, 2020 / Holt - Jul 4, 2020
|AAS - Master of Data Science & Master of Computing
Scholarshiprabka - Jun 28, 2020 / rabka - Jun 30, 2020
|(AAS) I choose this institution because there is an expert with similar research object
4 - Dear Holt and the moderator, thank you very much for your feedbacks! I will try to rewrite my essay...
Scholarshipphenylpropanoid - Jun 29, 2020 / phenylpropanoid - Jun 30, 2020
|Supporting Statement for Applying Australia Awards Scholarship as freshgraduate bachelor's degree
Scholarshipelpsy - Jun 23, 2020 / elpsy - Jun 30, 2020
|How will the proposed study in cybersecurity contribute to my career as a software engineer?
2 - You should not have included the discussion about Australia's position in the world in regards to their cybersecurity expertise....
Scholarshipdiwangkoro - Jun 29, 2020 / Holt - Jun 29, 2020
|Sugarcane factory: Why proposed this course and institution
5 - @Holt, thank you very much for the suggestions, very useful. I will try my best to revise my essay....
Scholarshipliyamu - Jun 28, 2020 / liyamu - Jun 29, 2020
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