|NYU Supplements- all 5, help with strenghts/weaknesses
9 - Well i actually used a rap song for my NYU talent show response. Handlebars by Flobots. Its all about...
Undergraduategmailblows31imike - Dec 22, 2008
|ECONOMICS, CHINA & ASIA PACIFIC STUDIES; Cornell college of arts and sciences
Undergraduatewongxywongxy - Dec 22, 2008
|'My top colleges / Kind to others' - Lehigh University
UndergraduateYoshipupdudeYoshipupdude - Dec 22, 2008
|Common App - Person of Significance (Never hurt anyone or anything)
2 - Hello Mehmet, In my opinion (It's your choice to accept or reject), I think you only recite what...
Undergraduatelighter3891Ivy_91 - Dec 22, 2008
|CALS (committed to the improvement of life) - review and advice
7 - Thanks :). Feel free to check the FAQ section or the EssayForum Contributors page for more information. EssayForum.com...
UndergraduatejoshuaEF_Team - Dec 22, 2008
|Rochester Essay - Supp. (secluded from society)
2 - I think that you start out well..as in the direction that you intend to in would lead into an...
Undergraduatenunya415fastracker91 - Dec 22, 2008
|common app short (keen on becoming a member of the student body)
UndergraduatepinkrinkEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|why do you want to attend pratt? 'my interest in architecture'
3 - I had always thought that one was either good at art or not, naturally; however, my artistic abilities have...
Undergraduatecalico0605EF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|A Question - , an Egyptian - American woman/ College essay
Undergraduatenoureinynoureiny - Dec 22, 2008
|Essay on Reason of choosing career - Law school
GraduateRaiRai - Dec 22, 2008
|Common Application Essay (My Transition to High School)
3 - It could work out okay if you expand the meaning by concluding with a revision of that saying. Perhaps...
UndergraduateCellerdoorEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|Which essay should I use as my Common App essay?
6 - Oh... yes, I prefer the first one, I guess, but they are both good! Sometimes you have to choose...
UndergraduatealicimooEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|Evaluate a significant experience you have faced and its impact on you.
6 - Nope, that means to surround something. You are trying to say that is .. maybe... pierced them? ha ha,...
UndergraduateatomvikEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|NYU short answers - Trait, NYC, talent, academic program
2 - Here's another one In addition to any work experience that you listed on your application, please tell us...
Undergraduatesilversweetsilversweet - Dec 22, 2008
|UIUC essay 1 (the fields of business and accounting)
3 - Here is a fix for the ending: Business is the heart of my academic and professional interests, but...
UndergraduateprincetongirlEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|I was presiding at piano in a 13-piano-ensemble at The Cemetery for Martyrs in April 2006.
3 - Better to write out the numbers, so it looks nice: I was presiding at piano in a thirteen-piano...
UndergraduatecharliesunEF_Kevin - Dec 22, 2008
|u michigan short answers essay
3 - wow~ It is really helpful for me! I didn't know that I can find this great helper online. Thank...
Undergraduateomgomgomgomgomgomg - Dec 22, 2008
|Common App Essay (Anti-Americanism)
UndergraduateJustGlazeJustGlaze - Dec 21, 2008
|Princeton - Significant Person - my mentor Mr. Mehmet Yuksel
Undergraduatelighter3891lighter3891 - Dec 21, 2008
|'the president of Taekwondo Club' - common app short answer - extracurricular
UndergraduateSapphireSapphire - Dec 21, 2008
|"a fatal mistake" - CommonApp Essay 1
UndergraduateIvy_91Ivy_91 - Dec 21, 2008
|"Why Colorado College" essay
2 - It's not too personal. It's quite good in that regard, actually. I'd do something about the order of your...
UndergraduatebatdoiEF_Sean - Dec 21, 2008
|Recalling three years that have passed. Personal essay on volunteer experience!
8 - This is much more interesting to read. A definite improvement. The excitement now comes from your own clearly stated...
UndergraduateAmyRemusEF_Sean - Dec 21, 2008
|Columbia short answers; most appealing thing/ why the study of engineering
5 - Here is a revision, again for grammar. You might want to continue to work on creating stronger transitions between...
UndergraduateprlEF_Sean - Dec 21, 2008
|Describe an activity - an English newspaper Huijia Voice
2 - I'd say you need to add a bit more background. What made you think that an English newspaper would...
UndergraduateseatoyEF_Sean - Dec 21, 2008
|Hula has always been one of my passions; COMMON APP: DECISIONS
8 - Thanks!...
Undergraduatex soundclashx soundclash - Dec 21, 2008
|'awards and accomplishments' - UPenn - Professor of Interest
8 - Unfortunately, because of the space limits, I had to cut out some of the great ideas you guys gave...
Undergraduatelighter3891lighter3891 - Dec 21, 2008
|Describe a significant experience common app essay (I love canoeing)
3 - As my body poised for yet another stroke, I would feel incredibly lucky- this is canoeing; this is my...
UndergraduatethejoymovementEF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2008
|Common app-elaborate on one of your activities, "to understand the material
12 - kikozang, I get it!!! Thanks for the clarification! I guess I thought you were making fun of her for...
Undergraduatetiffanyh5849EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2008
|BU essay - a trip to Boston
2 - I had been to Boston several times before, but I especially anticipated this visit because I was going to...
Undergraduategmailblows31EF_Kevin - Dec 21, 2008