|"The day when I get my report cards" - UCF Admission essay
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UndergraduateShaenatEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|Super Size Me! - Movie reponse/ Most memorable part
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Writing FeedbackmachoEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"mathematics affinity" - FSU essay on values Vires, Artes, Mores
2 - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores," challenges students to have strength, skill, and character. Nice job;...
Undergraduatekm0416EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
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Writing FeedbackjerryEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|My parents' divorce; U Florida - MEANINGFUL CHALLENGE
3 - Good afternoon. How will this experience influence the kind of student you will be at UF? The main...
Undergraduatekm0416EF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|The Obstinate Man -- Essay on knowing vs. believing and opining vs. ignoran
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Writing FeedbackranmanEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"Skill or craft" ; FSU - "Vires, Artes, Mores"
3 - For several base reasons it is Artes I identify with the most. Artes, by my definition, is reaching a...
UndergraduatesrqkingEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|"My most life-altering experience under my nose" - admission essay "Vires"
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UndergraduatecelestialxxEF_Team5 - Sep 22, 2008
|People controlling their lives - UCF admission essay
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|"... everyone was proud to be a Golden Knight" - UCf admissions essay
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|The influence of psychology and psychoanalytic on the field of social work?
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EssaysbebemalaEF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Shaping our lives - Common App personal Essay
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Undergraduatevid2seanEF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Values as components of our lives - Florida State Admissions Essay
|I need help thinking of a contradicting argumentative paragraph for this..
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Essaysvlach7EF_Team5 - Sep 21, 2008
|Essay on addiction - what does it mean?
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|Vires is the one that stands out the most; FSU Esssay
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|'Hard work should pay off' - UF Essay - Meaningful experience
|Movie review essay "The Pursuit of Happyness"
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|ART is anything that requires skill, ingenuity,imagination; FSU-Vires, Artes, Mores
Undergraduatebhangra369EF_Team5 - Sep 20, 2008
|"The diamond is the hardest gemstone" - admission essay
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|Beautiful death of Hektor
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|Admission Essay Personal story - being friendless
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Undergraduatelaughx3smileEF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|Concepts that are reflected in your life - FSU Undergrads admission essay "Artes"
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Undergraduatejasun17EF_Team5 - Sep 19, 2008
|Studying abroad: seeking better opportunities for students?
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|"forced to build...the Fort" - Personal Experience
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|The Freedom Writers Diary - Why it is Important to Read such Novels
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|fsu essay, my moral strenght comes from Christ
2 - Good afternoon. Good start. What about Artes? You include it in the philosophies, but you do not talk...
UndergraduatemkmEF_Team5 - Sep 18, 2008