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Poker game - common App essay--risky topic!

7 - How could you "control" yourself withour participating real gambling? And though you are trying not to be emotional but...

UndergraduateAMehj - Jan 1, 2010glimmering - Jan 8, 2010
True Love, Princeton Supplement

6 - "I knew it right then, she was my one true love. She was like the internet to me- everywhere,...

UndergraduatemaXimumeXposure - Jan 8, 2010glimmering - Jan 8, 2010
"horrific crimes against humanity" - Georgetown personal admissions essay

5 - Guilt about my upbringing? Anything you did must be regarded as good teaching events. To be extreme, even your...

UndergraduateBlueman - Jan 8, 2010glimmering - Jan 8, 2010
Long and short term goals (to become a world renowned doctor)

3 - I really do appreciate your helpful corrctions. I mean i really appreciateit. Thanx alot...

Scholarshipchuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010chuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010
"Indefinite Growth" - Texas A&M - My Answer to Essay B

5 - Good start but I think the essay needs coherence between the first two paragraphs. First impression makes me...

Undergraduatealmacubana - Jan 7, 2010glimmering - Jan 8, 2010
TAMU Admission Essay B - important issue in my life

3 - During the 17th presidential election of South Korea, During the seventeenth presidential election of South Korea...

Undergraduatebang688 - Jan 8, 2010syookhong - Jan 8, 2010
Common App essay - writing about computer games!

6 - Game is a culture, a very special one. Unlike many other culture, film culture, music culture or fashion culture,...

Undergraduatewhiteshark243 - Jan 6, 2010syookhong - Jan 8, 2010
Essay in subjects in which you have excelled.To what factors do you attribute it

3 - "She has open up our mind to look beyond the words written on a piece of paper." "She...

Scholarshiplic12 - Jan 7, 2010NT159 - Jan 8, 2010
"Why Vassar" - Vassar College Supplement Essay

8 - essay should be long preferable in the 500 word count range...

UndergraduateKupcakeKim - Dec 29, 2009chuncky13 - Jan 8, 2010
essay about how cross-culture experience contribute to business school-feedback

2 - For those students who are interested in but not familiar with China's market, my experience will provide advice and...

Graduatehuhu - Jan 7, 2010EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
MIT essay. Tell us about your creativity,(undergrad admission)

3 - new ways of counteracting climate change... We were able to use these as recycling receptacles, and even now...

Undergraduateedolhu - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
"this elderly woman" - common app essay how person influenced you

4 - Sweating uncontrollably and considerabl y out-of-breath , I sat down on... At that moment, I felt alone and...

Undergraduatejeetethebest - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
IS PHYSICS A WOMAN THING?- MY COMMON APP ESSAY.

7 - I think you can cut it down by getting rid of most of the discussion of the notion...

UndergraduateVANESSAPHAM12 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
'Charles Schwab conference' - common app short answer ace mentor program

2 - ...such as the building's placement on the lamented (do you mean lamenated? Lamented is very different! :-) map...

Undergraduatejaspreet1992 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Caltech essay. Unusual fun essay!

6 - Have you ever played with children and been astonished by their unlimited imagination? I have, and I can say...

Undergraduatehern255 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
"The Prelude": Yale Supplement Essay, along with a few others

3 - I'm so sorry I did not respond in time to help before the deadline. It is nice that Arvind...

UndergraduatePineappleCrush - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
NYU PERSONAL STATEMENTS , Major and Famous New Yorker

4 - change "I admire how he turns failure to success." into "I admire how he turns failure into success." ...

UndergraduateAlhadhrami - Dec 31, 2009umulbaneen - Jan 8, 2010
Confused - cornell supplement - college of arts and science

3 - numbers are not that objective, after all -----I added a comma Back then, 2 times 4 was not...

Undergraduatesinziana91 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
University of Chicago - Supplement, Gaming

2 - ...garnered much hatred and resentment for being cheap, unskilled, and boring. This is inspired, for sure, but it...

UndergraduateSquishyShot - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Hamilton book review, My thoughts after reading "the stranger next door"

4 - Yes, if the reader can't make sense of it, it is because you used only one sentence for your...

UndergraduateSSYQ - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
About the school or an experience? Questions and confusion on UMaryland's prompt

4 - They want to see if any of you high school grads out there actually think about and appreciate...

Undergraduatebatmankiller - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Yale Supplement "Remembering to be patient, Exchanging Experiences"

3 - How impressive it is that you were an ESL stuent, and now you have such excellent command of English....

Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
"My dream and influence at Pitzer" -- Pitzer Prompt

2 - In addition, because of my father's career I have been exposed to not only people of my age, but...

Undergraduatedduks - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Princeton Supplement - about a person who has influenced you. (Harvard sup too!)

3 - Great beginning! And neither do I chew on them like cows and goats - rather, only for my...

Undergraduatesixfoottall - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Biology Major- Johns Hopkins Supplement

4 - Nice! You are smart... I prescribed two Oreos and a glass of milk, and within seconds she was cured....

Undergraduateprimaballerina - Dec 30, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Carnegie Mellon Essay about Cognitive Science & Psychology - Last Day!

3 - quotation surely inspired by playwright George Bernard Shaw's classic view on life. About NLP... that was created by...

Undergraduatekathyz2010 - Dec 31, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
"You are good at everything." - Stanford Intellectual Vitality essay

5 - Well, it's hard not to sound self indulgent with this kind of essay! It's really tricky to get it...

Undergraduatelexmonti - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
My Network Administration teacher, a person of importance in my life

5 - I think this sentence might be like a thorn in the essay's side: Since then, I make the conscious...

UndergraduateEight - Dec 15, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Common App- Heavier Things

3 - Nice job! You are funny and cool... Wow, this sounds like a traumatic experience... 2 words...

Undergraduatechirper - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
Claremont McKenna "Leaders in the Making" Warren Buffet-Feedback

5 - What about times when conventional methods are appropriate? I'm sorry, I think my comment here is coming...

Undergraduatehelpmego2CMC - Dec 29, 2009EF_Kevin - Jan 8, 2010
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