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Stanford Residential Essays: future education, college exposure, SMYSP

3 - Seeing him in a new light - the vulnerable side - made me want to pursue a career in...

Undergraduateangel2u2000 - Feb 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2009
"successful artist" - The University of Texas at Austin

11 - Thanks, Kevin and John!!! And thanks to the ones that had commented previously as well!!! This is my final...

Undergraduatebabevi - Feb 11, 2009babevi - Feb 24, 2009
NJIT what academic, educational, or other experiences have you had

4 - thanks a lot...

Undergraduateyasin391 - Feb 22, 2009yasin391 - Feb 24, 2009
Critical moment essay; Memory....is the diary that we all carry about with us

6 - thanks so much for your help I really appreciate all the grammar mistakes you corrected and all of your...

Undergraduatecoriimon - Feb 22, 2009coriimon - Feb 24, 2009
motherhood (Motherhood is Amazing)

3 - I believe Being a mother is a most extraordinary gift, yet it brings challenges that ca be difficult to...

Writing Feedbackpurfec8gel - Feb 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2009
My father was an ordinary business man; Ryerson (reasons, details)

4 - Thank you guys so much :) !! I now got a final draft for business management !! But too...

Undergraduateinfatuation - Feb 23, 2009infatuation - Feb 24, 2009
Personal Statement for Robotics Graduate Programme

4 - Try combining para #3 with that short para #4 and take out the unnecessary sentence: My thirst for...

Graduatepsykosonik - Feb 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2009
admission essay (clear goals in medicine)

4 - In the last sentence of the first paragraph, you might want to refer back to that moment that you...

Undergraduateseu3 - Feb 23, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 24, 2009
Stanford Essay - Medical: academic weekday, experience, low-income, health

2 - Hmmmm . . . perhaps you should break this up into several threads, by posting each essay as its...

Undergraduateangel2u2000 - Feb 23, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
Activity since secondary school

5 - What do you mean "you can't seem to access the reply?" You must be able to read our posts,...

Undergraduatemelat - Feb 23, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
UT Transfer SOP Essay (theatre technician)

3 - This essay is very well-written. You have a great style, and tell an interesting story. The conclusion does seem...

Undergraduatemetrion - Feb 22, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
'Want to become a business woman' - transfer essay (what I can learn from life)

4 - You're getting there. Some more suggestions: "I always ask myself what I can learn from life, and the...

Undergraduatemichelle127 - Feb 22, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
Not Mr. Towers, he and his family watched TV; Narrative Essay

8 - Adding dialogue would also be a great way to add more conflict. Perhaps at the beginning of your essay,...

Writing FeedbackCTowers - Feb 17, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 24, 2009
reasons for pursuing an exchange experience

5 - I agree with Kevin. It seems like you only answer the first part of question. You should also talk...

Graduatewall86 - Feb 11, 2009Abby002 - Feb 23, 2009
Common App Essay - about me (special cakes)

3 - And In the 16 years I've lived in Beijing I have seen changes of a magnitude that one would...

Undergraduatehannahaltheakay - Feb 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2009
Letter of Intent (banal? right to the point?) - Israel student

3 - These subjects led me to realize that my main interest lies in moral and political philosophy. Later I...

Graduaterawlsian - Feb 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2009
PSEOP Admission Essay - post secondary essay (every ounce I have)

8 - The ending is fine. Good luck in school! :)...

Undergraduatemedgirl44 - Feb 19, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2009
American University in Cairo (what's best for me)

2 - Moreover it's the premier English language university in the region where students from different segments of Egyptian society can...

Undergraduatearwa - Feb 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 23, 2009
People are Living Longer (causes of this phenomenon)

2 - The list can be interminably long but here are some of the most important ones: Discovery of red blood...

Writing Feedbackoto - Feb 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2009
Help to form a research topic (ethical dimensions)

6 - Sean, I need to based on my research question and write a report based on the following points: ...

EssaysAbby002 - Feb 22, 2009Abby002 - Feb 22, 2009
Question about Citation (multiple cites for 1 author)

4 - Awesome, and that site also provides examples of how to format your reference to a website on your Works...

Grammar, Usagedboyd435 - Feb 22, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2009
Math is Crucial for Society

6 - The title suggestion isn't bad. Perhaps you could try "Let my experience of the world be my best source...

Writing Feedbackligfsing - Feb 22, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 22, 2009
Midsummer Night's Dream Character Essays

5 - Better. Now, take all of the references you make to specific passages [Act 2 scene I line 30-35 ,...

Writing Feedbackicemaster2340 - Feb 21, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 22, 2009
Research paper on Commercials on TV (ideas).

12 - "The effects of compulsive consumer buying tendencies on attitudes toward TV ads. " This is another great topic to...

Research PapersPr0blumz - Feb 5, 2009Abby002 - Feb 22, 2009
"Freedom is like air", UT Austin, statement of purpose

4 - "Upon graduation, I will strive to help my fellow man and improve our communities." I would try changing...

Undergraduatesoultrang9 - Feb 20, 2009shan00ts - Feb 22, 2009
Arguments for a Persuasive Essay (quote by Browning)

4 - Hey, I agree with your disagreement with the quote!! Good job. Remember to be very clear about your thesis...

Essaysjadebook - Feb 21, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 22, 2009
I longed to do a Sport Management Major; UT Austin- SOP

6 - You should not make your essay too long, because it would make the admissions tired... Also they may look...

Undergraduatetsumlakers88 - Feb 18, 2009yasin391 - Feb 22, 2009
Essay on non pecuniary sex tourism

3 - Thank you Sean, I will post later for further feedback...

Essaysstanny - Feb 21, 2009stanny - Feb 22, 2009
How is school meeting your needs? Columbia transfer essay.

14 - Thank you so much for your help...

UndergraduateYuta - Feb 18, 2009Yuta - Feb 22, 2009
Georgetown - Somalian Pirates

8 - Pirates are indeed criminals, and not terrorists, when they carry out their activities for financial gain. The mistaken nomenclature...

Undergraduatemissingfeet - Feb 20, 2009EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
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