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A world where I would not have anything to worry about - UC prompt 1

3 - I have always lived in a world where I had nothing to worry about. When I heard that our...

Undergraduatesiku - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Buddism, Christianinty - UC prompt #2

4 - Yes, you write without errors! Here is something I can improve: The decision to get baptized was...

Undergraduatejobanana - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Elaborate on Extra Curricular Activity: "Ace Mentor Program"

4 - Awesome, the admissions people could not ask for more. Good luck!!...

Undergraduatedrman54 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
UC Prompt #1 [Transfer] "Untitled" Major: Linguistics

3 - It was not until I entered adulthood that I realized just how well my father had prepared me for...

Undergraduatexxkari - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"A Conflict of Nations" - UC Prompt 2. Need help revise!!

3 - Thanks Neva, for the excellent revisions. You made my job easy! WKLUI, I think you should use these...

Undergraduatewklui - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"Is that shadow mine?" UC #2...

3 - Brilliant essay, I found no real errors. I am happy to be able to help a little, here: ...

UndergraduateTsunamela - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Common App Personal Essay~"I could not swim competitively ever again?"

2 - The unbearable experience of swimming that race has had a profound effect on me. Not only did I...

Undergraduatenyczxgemii - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
'Angela did not like the school very much' - Homeschool supplement

2 - I understand that homeschooling is a very special way of learning and I know this is the method for...

UndergraduateAngela629 - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
MONOPOLY VS. PERFECT COMPETITION (research paper feedback)

3 - Thank you! I'll make some changes and will focus on MLA citation; it's not due until next week so...

Writing FeedbackAndrew - Dec 1, 2008Andrew - Dec 1, 2008
'Budget cuts' - the leading problem facing our eduactional system today?

2 - Budget cuts have been the leading problem facing our educational system today. When the state of California announced a...

Writing Feedbackmavictoria - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Passion for a subject or cause? UD Essay Help

2 - Over the past sixteen years of doctor visits, ... I was too young to understand why Sam was...

Writing Feedbackameretouch - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
US Space Project - English CLEP essay (space exploration!)

2 - Space exploration has made information available to us that previously unimaginable. Issues like hunger, disease, global warming ......

Writing FeedbackRacheli - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Research Paper (Argument)-Reflections of Society in Children's Literature

2 - I thought the opening paragraph was fine, and your intention clearly stated in the last sentence. Though still...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Dec 1, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"to America from Ethiopia" - uc prompt #1

2 - was propelled by my mother's willingness to patiently answer all my questions. I am not a five year...

Undergraduatebk23 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"Emotions are useless" - common app topic

5 - Thank you all so much!...

Undergraduatepsycheycho - Nov 30, 2008psycheycho - Dec 1, 2008
Haitian immigrants and their choice to struggle for better life-essay check

2 - The lives of immigrants are very difficult and filled with many hardships. In "Brother I`m Dying" Edwidge Danticat...

Writing Feedbackkichikov22 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
qualitative and quantitative methods - Need help on a thesis statement

2 - The purpose of this research project is to explore the ways in which fear of terrorism has changed the...

Research Paperspsadair - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
words contrasting the way in which people live their lives

3 - This essay will investigate the contrasting ways in which people live has changed in the current financial crisis. The...

Essayssinaraneto - Nov 29, 2008sinaraneto - Dec 1, 2008
Extracurricular Activity Essay for CommApp- Scholars' Bowl

2 - "Let's get this question", I thought. My team's stoic attitude was immediately replaced by pure exultation, and I...

Scholarshippartooz - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
UC #1: Caring for my grandparents

2 - She taught me morals at a young age. As other teenagers spent their Friday nights at the movies,......

UndergraduateTsunamela - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Smile and the World Smiles With You ut a essay

2 - In the first paragraph, the name Stacey was used five times. I think you should change three of them...

Undergraduatecmx09 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Self-Reliance Common App Essay; team leader for Safe Rides

2 - Quickly, I learned that reading Self-Reliance itself, would not and did not change me. To be self-reliant meant...

Undergraduateegetzshef - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Prompt #1 [transfer] different majors for 2 different schools only 1 prompt

2 - my interest is more directed toward how individual behavior is affected by its influence. I do so with...

Undergraduateccbythec - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
" extraordinary young man" ;recommendation letter by homeroom teacher

2 - Several times , his language teachers celebrated his essays and stories as the best in the class. He...

LettersPing2008 - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
UC Gaining study skills for success

2 - I had not known about or developed the study skills that I needed for the college success. One...

Undergraduatekatacyklsla2ny - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
College Essay: experience or achievement, Revise Needed!

2 - My most significant achievement has been becoming a member of Best Buddies International club at John A. Ferguson Senior...

UndergraduateAlexisuhloser - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
Should teachers permit to teach if they don't have teacher's certification

2 - Teacher education has always played an important role in determining student outcomes. To be certified in Illinois, teachers must...

Writing Feedbackxiulyu - Nov 30, 2008EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"I experienced Guatemala this summer" - issue of importance UTb essay

5 - thanks for the help! i'll change it! :)...

Undergraduatecmx09 - Nov 30, 2008cmx09 - Dec 1, 2008
Which Professor offers faculty and research opportunities? Essay...

6 - assist! yes! that was the word I was looking for! I knew it began with an "a" Thanks...

Undergraduaterandomzm - Nov 30, 2008randomzm - Dec 1, 2008
student government - CommonApp EC Activity SHORT!

4 - great recommendations! Thanks!...

Undergraduaterandomzm - Nov 30, 2008randomzm - Dec 1, 2008
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