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Conflict at a personal level essay - Need help for opening para

6 - Good afternoon. If the assignment is to analyze the effects of these things on your life, there is...

Essaysrick02 - Jul 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Comparing a short story with a poem - about race, justince, power

4 - That sounds great. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Essayscaligyrl4lyfe - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
PhD admission - "outline of area of study". Research proposal?

2 - Good afternoon. It sounds like the institution you are applying to is trying to see what your goals...

Essaysrizi - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Aim to entertain using quotation and contrast - essay intro

2 - Good afternoon. As I am not sure what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited for...

Essayspinks1026 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
UF Essay - The Place I Adore

2 - ...lugar! (I will never go back to that place!)" ...Oaks Middle school that I... ...language, customs, traditions,...

Undergraduatecarompapale1 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Satire Essay on animal farm, a modest proposal and the TV show frontline

2 - Good afternoon. Your post is seeking course specific answers, and as such my free assistance will be very...

Essaysbenny332 - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
'Continuing to excel' - FSU Essay - Vires

2 - It looks like it answers the prompt efficiently. I would use the Latin word you wrote about in the...

Undergraduatetrewton - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
"Left Mom and Dad in China for California" - good for Common App topic 1?

NEW - Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on...

Undergraduatejunma314 - Oct 7, 2008 -
"The world I was headed for is more important" - admission essay

NEW - Describe the environment you come from - for example, your family, community, or school - and how this environment...

Undergraduatejunma314 - Oct 7, 2008 -
'making business successful' - Essay for MBA Finance program

NEW - My name is Yu-Chieh Li. I graduated from the University of North Texas and received my bachelor's degree in...

Graduatekevin75074 - Oct 7, 2008 -
"One more shot" - common application short question (150 words)

NEW - "One more shot. Just gimme another shot. Don't give up!" "Yes!" We win the game. Here I stood in...

Undergraduateendagu222 - Oct 7, 2008 -
Statement of purpose (graduate studies in chemical engineering)

NEW - Please provide your feedback on my SOP.Also please suggest if i could include more details(such as undergrad scores, gre...

Graduateguruyatra - Oct 7, 2008 -
Character of a Man - Essay

NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Oct 6, 2008 -
Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother

NEW - Hi, this is somewhat raw and i want to rework it, but it is due in 18 hours and...

Writing FeedbackAl44ex - Oct 6, 2008 -
Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word

4 - the essay is aiming at people to stop using the N word...

Writing Feedbackobama - Oct 6, 2008obama - Oct 6, 2008
my part in giving back and bettering the society - Proofreading and Advice

NEW - UF Admission Essay. Here's the prompt Describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how...

Undergraduatemikeg12 - Oct 6, 2008 -
The school has always been a dream of mine. fsu essay "vires, artes, mores"

9 - okay thanks...i guess ill sent it in then...

Undergraduatedandan09 - Sep 28, 2008dandan09 - Oct 6, 2008
North Dakota - Common app formatting questions and an essay

4 - You're welcome. I italicized that section because I referred to it in my bottom comments, and I wanted...

UndergraduateDamselfly - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Essay Based on an Essay You Read

3 - Very helpful response, especially the bits about the Crusaders Thank you as always!...

Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Oct 5, 2008FissionMailed - Oct 6, 2008
Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]

NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...

Writing Feedbackkorr2221 - Oct 6, 2008 -
Defining moments in people's lives - uc admissions essay

2 - Nice job; a good example and a great answer to the prompt. The essay flows well, good transitions are...

Undergraduatelaurenkill - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Intern in Washington D.C under Congressman Duncan Hunter - Common App Essay

2 - You've got a good subject idea here; this is obviously an experience that has made an impact on you....

Undergraduateprivater_ryan - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Gendering Children Based on Toys Essay Help- Is it good??

4 - Good morning. What are the specifics of the assignment? More details about what are expected will be helpful....

Research Papersshenz711 - May 22, 2007EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
UofM Book that impacted you essay - 1984 application essay

2 - As I have not read this book, I am unsure of the ending. It wounds from your closing quote...

Book ReportsLedPorcupineToo - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
"Dance is what I love to do" - Vires, Artes, Mores

2 - You do need a conclusion here to wrap this essay up; something to connect the end with the beginning,...

Undergraduateskrocki09 - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Jigsaw puzzles / Singaporean experience - Diversity Essays

5 - Sure; I think the flow of the two essays is fine, as well as the transitions between paragraphs. Both...

Undergraduatekids_jessy - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
SURGERY SCAR; Overcoming Hardships Essay

2 - Good morning. Well, you won't know how the piece will turn out unless you write it. I suggest...

Essaysdorkee - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.

2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...

Writing FeedbackFayFua - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Cross-country / Nano Research Facility - one of your activities Help

NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...

Undergraduateprivater_ryan - Oct 5, 2008 -
Moved from California to a humid town in Mississippi - UF Essay

NEW - I moved from a sunny city in California to a humid town in Mississippi when I was the awkward...

Undergraduatejkrusemark1 - Oct 5, 2008 -
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