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International Youth Leadership Forum travel - UC Essay prompt #2

3 - Good afternoon :) I believe you have answered the prompt effectively. You describe the experience as well as...

Undergraduatejedijessy91 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
WPI Short Answers-Need revise & critic

3 - Well, I forgot that I have already paste my second essay before. Anyway, thank you very much for...

Undergraduatehelenalqy - Nov 20, 2008helenalqy - Nov 21, 2008
"my life is prepared for all methods" - UC Prompt #1

3 - Great thanks, u've helped me a lot :) I was just wondering my passage was a little bit irrelevent...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Nov 18, 2008hallelujah - Nov 21, 2008
'self respecting male' - common app essay for princeton

4 - WOW THATS A REALLY GREAT ESSAY, UR DEF GONNA GET INTO PRINCETON :] GOOD JOB!!!!!!!! to the...

Undergraduateaktanuku - Nov 20, 2008quack09 - Nov 20, 2008
'recognized by many coaches' - the world you come from. UC prompt #1

NEW - hello, I was wondering if you could help me with fixing up my introduction paragraph, as well as editing...

Undergraduatejedijessy91 - Nov 20, 2008 -
'looking to become a computer engineer' - Rutgers University Admission

5 - I am planning on applying to Rutgers New Brunswick, and I don't know what to do for my essay....

UndergraduateBlackPhoenix - Nov 16, 2008RutgersGirl91 - Nov 20, 2008
"Born in Peru" - Need Help On Personal Statement Prompt #1

9 - thanks i was thinking like to add a little bit of detail bout my fear of public speaking but...

UndergraduateFatalKid91 - Nov 17, 2008FatalKid91 - Nov 20, 2008
"6th grade incident" - UC transfer. Prompt #2

2 - I don't think it's a bad example to use; on the contrary, it obviously made an impact, causing you...

Undergraduatemusiklover - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....

Writing Feedbacksadie0910 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
I need strategies in writing an analogy

2 - Good afternoon :) An analogy is the thinking process of transferring characteristics of your source item to another...

Grammar, Usagetanty - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
A successful college campus - Lehigh Second Supplement

2 - I think this is a great response. You answer all facets of the prompt thoroughly, and your example is...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
For UC transfer essay, some questions.

4 - Sounds great! Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Undergraduategalz - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
to expand my knowledge - FSU essay, opinions and suggestions on improvement

2 - You have a very good essay here; a few structural/mechanical suggestions, but you answer the prompt effectively. You discuss...

Undergraduatelps227 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 20, 2008
What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange

NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....

Writing Feedbackmissy7187 - Nov 20, 2008 -
Realism Essay - the readers choice

NEW - Had to write an essay on realism/romatacism. Please give any grammer corrections and content suggestions you may have. ...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Nov 20, 2008 -
Master in Advertising - my true passion and my hard-working spirit is strong enough

NEW - I am very grateful for your help on my essay - regarding structure, grammar and spelling etc. Requirement:...

GraduateTarlGis - Nov 20, 2008 -
"Mi casa es tu casa" - Common Application- Personal Statement

3 - Good evening :) I think you have done a fantastic job answering this prompt. You have described the...

Undergraduatejdsams02 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Family, qualities - UCF Admissions Essay: #2 + #4

NEW - 2. How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are? For Centuries, America has been...

Undergraduatejumpydrummer - Nov 19, 2008 -
Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:

2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
"to even graduate" - PROMPT #2 PERSONAL STATEMENT

NEW - I am the first person in my family to even graduate from high school; when my father was not...

UndergraduateBARBAKAREN - Nov 19, 2008 -
"The alphabet I know consists of only seven letters." -UC statement pr 2

2 - Good evening :) I have edited one section of your piece and then provided some general comments in...

Undergraduatecuecomeber - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
International student to apply Tesol - Statement of Purpose

2 - I'm not really sure about the content of your essay. Have you been to college already and majored in...

UndergraduateMinJung - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
UCF essay about family dinner

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then made some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduatefruban - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
"Playing with my Yoshi doll and making new friends" - UC Prompt #1

6 - In regards to content, I'm not sure really where you are going with it. In the introduction you talk...

UndergraduateXegonyv - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
UC Prompt 1, My life at a boarding school

6 - Good afternoon :) Thank you for clearing that up; if I made that error, it is probable that...

Undergraduatethagg - Nov 17, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty

5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...

Writing Feedbackscash - Jun 6, 2007Lex - Nov 19, 2008
The Freedom to Choose Death

NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...

Writing Feedbacksearch4gk - Nov 19, 2008 -
Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me

3 - thanks for your help, Gloria. tony...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 18, 2008tonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008
"trying for the best university in the world" - Uc Prompt #2

3 - thanks a million:)...

Undergraduatehallelujah - Nov 18, 2008hallelujah - Nov 18, 2008
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