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A new program to promote peace in our school -memorable experience...

NEW - A. Evaluate a significant experience or achievement that has special meaning to you. I was sitting at the...

Undergraduateroger chavez - Oct 29, 2008 -
My grandmother - Uf admission essay; 'I have always idolized my grandmother'

2 - Good afternoon. "citizen" should be capitalized, as it is a proper noun in this case. Avoid using...

Undergraduatesuraju91 - Oct 29, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
My parents receiving Citizenship of the USA - Admissions Essay

2 - ... of America was particularly moving and inspirational to me. Please see my comments as to mechanical errors in...

UndergraduateMIKERAND - Oct 29, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Essay: marry someone familiar or different?

3 - Good afternoon. Devotion has really great feedback, all of which I agree with. Since he/she has covered all...

Writing Feedbacksonali - Oct 29, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Voyage of discovery English essay - I don't know how to start it

3 - Good afternoon. What events or experiences are most memorable for you out of this class? Regards, Gloria...

Essaysbiggirl - Oct 29, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Check my sop and let it be hidden. (master of environment). Researches in Iran

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this assignment were not included, I can give advice for...

Graduateshadi - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
the horror of my dreaded alarm clock - Common App Essay

2 - Good afternoon. First, a few mechanical comments. 1. Avoid using contractions in your academic writing as they...

Undergraduateazianpinoy - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
PSU Schreyers Honors Essay. NEED HELP

2 - Good afternoon. Mechanically, watch your use of excessive and inappropriate use of commas. Perhaps a quick refresher on...

Undergraduatejusanglee91 - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Duquesne University essay; You never know what event in your life is going to change your life.

4 - You could think about a way to tie the pharmacy career with your desire to be a minister. Do...

UndergraduateSturz15 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Doodles - Undergrad Admission Essay for Cornell....not finished yet!

2 - Good afternoon. Just a couple of thoughts. First, avoid contractions in your formal academic writing, as they...

Undergraduatespazzed_azn - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Going to a public school - uf essay

2 - "Removed; this is too much background that really doesn't have anything to do with the rest of your piece....

Undergraduateccw_20 - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
U of Miami Getting Started on inspiration

2 - Good afternoon. A couple of mechanical suggestions. First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing, as they are inappropriate....

Undergraduateroger chavez - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
Rutger undergraduate essay - learning throughout life

NEW - please can someone help me with my essay this is what i have so far but i dont think...

Undergraduaterock07081 - Oct 29, 2008 -
I'm from Hong-Kong - common app essay!

4 - Indeed, the essay was a good one, one that is rare among the Chinese at my place. I am...

Undergraduateflickeringlight - Oct 28, 2008Devotion - Oct 29, 2008
I want to write a perfect essay about myself to go to USA

4 - Oh and, one thing good about writing something that you experienced is that you not only know it, but...

Essaysdanny ocean - Oct 27, 2008Devotion - Oct 29, 2008
School of Visual Arta - statement of intent

NEW - hello!! here is my statement of intent for the School of Visual Arts. I was wondering if you could...

UndergraduateGuinny - Oct 29, 2008 -
Learning from failure - CommonApp essay

7 - Oh, thanks! I didn't catch that! And I was wondering about the naive thing, too. I wasn't sure...

Undergraduatedocument1 - Oct 26, 2008document1 - Oct 28, 2008
University of Pennsylvania: most interest you / favorite Penn professor

2 - Good afternoon. First, a few mechanical concerns. Make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the...

UndergraduateAleksey - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
'the gruesome scene in summer' - Life Experience Common App. Essay

2 - Excellent essay. Very organized, good flow, very descriptive. You stay on topic and answer the prompt very well. You...

UndergraduateAleksey - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
My research project Common APP 150 words extra-curricular commitment

2 - Good afternoon. It is probably this browser, but I can't tell what is at the beginning of the...

Undergraduatecloudone - Oct 28, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Why I applied to Molloy - I need some help with my admission essay

2 - Good afternoon. I would discuss the specific aspects of Molloy that drew you to it. What is it...

Undergraduatennelson07 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Our volleyball team - Short Answer on Common App

2 - I think this is a good response to the short answer prompt. It is difficult to make an impact...

Undergraduatelinzroz18 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
Penn Admissions Essay - having a hard time finishing ..

2 - Good afternoon. I suggest focusing a bit on why you would fit into this school so well. You...

Undergraduatex3racha3l - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
How will college ed. help you achieve personal+professional goals? [Purdue]

8 - You're very welcome. Sure. "House Captain," "Annual Day, Sports Day," Computer Engineering." It's really up to you...

Undergraduatemrhohoha - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 28, 2008
holding my flute tightly - Common App: elaborate your activity

4 - Thanks for advices, I really appreciated them. I wrote my essay again but I'm still not sure whether I'm...

Undergraduateahpahf723 - Oct 27, 2008ahpahf723 - Oct 28, 2008
Drawing Guinness - 150 words or less work experience (common app)

6 - Good evening. It's really up to the admissions board. Some times they won't even consider something that exceeds...

Undergraduatelburgess88 - Oct 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
I owe everything to my family - it has greatly influenced who I am today. UCF essay

2 - Good evening. So from a young age I always would strive to get good grades and to be...

Undergraduatefawnbolak591 - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
Two children / Orlando Knight - Two UCF essays

2 - Good evening. You've got two good pieces here, so I'm going to give you some suggestions to help...

Undergraduatesaragreen - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
My Exchange Year--elaborate on one of your activities

2 - I like the conclusion of this piece, but I'm not sure the beginning and middle match it. For instance,...

Undergraduategracetm - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
choose a medieval villager - Historical essay

2 - Good evening. Well, as to the first, you should probably write a narrative essay. This is an essay...

Essaysbip - Oct 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 27, 2008
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