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AVIATION ; ACADEMIC INTEREST & CAREER GOALS; BSC

9 - If they don't specify a particular format, I wouldn't worry about it. And yes, as far as abbreviating the...

Undergraduateinck243 - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 31, 2006
What is the career that most appeals to you?

4 - Greetings! Please don't feel you have wasted my time in any way -- this is what I'm here...

Writing Feedbacklawenforcer - Oct 29, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
'The cynic is one' - UA Essay

5 - Greetings! I have to say, your writing is utterly enjoyable to read! I think BOTH your essays show...

UndergraduateViracocha - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 30, 2006
American Poetry question

2 - Greetings! When American poets are mentioned, a few standouts immediately spring to mind: Theodore Roethke, Edna St Vincent...

Poetryrania - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 29, 2006
Grad school admission - essay writing ideas?

3 - If you just need some general pointers, here they are :). Admission Essays should be a very straight...

Essaysrania - Oct 27, 2006EF_Team - Oct 27, 2006
Learning To Fly by Victoria Beckam; New way of writing

4 - Greetings! I'm a professional academic researcher and editor and a co-author/editor of this website, which is how I...

Book ReportsJeff Kelps - Oct 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 27, 2006
Graduate Studies - Disability Studies

2 - Greetings! From a quick internet search, it appears there aren't a lot of doctoral programs in disability studies...

Graduategoldencompass - Oct 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 26, 2006
An Example of a Written Response to a Dissatisfied Customer

NEW - Greetings! I am happy to respond to this customer! While we hate to have any dissatisfied clients, it...

LettersEF_Team - Oct 25, 2006 -
Did Somebody Say Genocide?; response/summary essay

2 - Greetings! You have written an excellent, informative essay which does a good job of explaining the complex factors...

Writing Feedbackcalvinphoon - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
'As America closes its eyes' - Grey Decay by The Sacrosanct College Essay

2 - Greetings! You make some good points here. The subject matter is one which can engender some strong emotions....

Book ReportsThe_Sacrosanct - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 25, 2006
Cause and effect paper - getting over abuse

2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with a strong, personal perspective. I do have some minor corrections...

Writing Feedbackjkolhagen - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
"military analogies" - UC Admissions Essay

4 - Greetings! I might suggest that the first two sentences are a little repetitive -- you use "describe" twice....

UndergraduateArmand - Oct 23, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 23, 2006
Looking for help - graduate school admission personal statement MSW program

2 - Greetings! Admissions essays can be a bit tricky because most people feel uncomfortable writing about themselves, especially when...

Essayslois - Oct 20, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 21, 2006
On the morning I've been waiting for all year!

2 - Greetings! Technically a "run-on sentence" is actually two complete sentences with no punctuation dividing them. I don't see...

Writing Feedbackfiguresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 19, 2006
Something Deeper - What am I looking for? Why am I here? Meaning of Life?

2 - Greetings! This is an interesting topic! I'll point out a few things I noticed that you might consider...

Writing Feedbackstarphyre - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 18, 2006
FSU Admission Essay (confidence and leadership)

4 - Greetings! Yes, it is better -- it is very good! (You may have overlooked "aggression" in the last...

UndergraduateConfusedmiamiboy - Oct 17, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 17, 2006
Do you like to smell the strong cigarette smoke at public places? NO!

3 - It seems like you worked very hard on this essay, but there are a few minor changes hat will...

Writing Feedbackjanice - Jul 21, 2006figuresk8tingchik - Oct 15, 2006
Story telling topic; essay based on an interview with a member of your family

12 - Greetings! Your story is definitely progressing and getting better every time you work on it! First, I'll answer...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 15, 2006
WW1 , the Treaty of Versalilles, WW11

2 - Greetings! You have an excellent start here! I agree that your paragraphs could use just a bit of...

Essaysjoshua_arebalo - Oct 14, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 14, 2006
Help, I'm new here. Is it okay to use parenthese around...

2 - Greetings! Sometimes it's a judgment call as to whether quotation marks are required or not, but I think...

EssaysChloeSong - Oct 12, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 13, 2006
How to Deal with a Difficult Dissertation Advisor?

NEW - How many of us have shown up to an advisor meeting with a stack of carefully acquired research and...

DissertationsEF_Team - Oct 12, 2006 -
'Woods Riding and The Dirt Bike' - Process essay review

2 - Greetings! You have done a wonderful job of describing the process of riding a dirt bike. I almost...

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Oct 11, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 12, 2006
The Difference Between Personal and Professional Relationship

3 - Greetings! While we do not write essays for students on this site, I'd be happy to give you...

EssaysPraveen - Oct 9, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 10, 2006
The damnation of the canyon is one man's account

2 - Greetings! You've done a good job of expressing your disagreement with the author's views. I'm guessing "The damnation...

Writing Feedbackarkaudio123 - Oct 4, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 5, 2006
Future of Media Conclusion - (High School)

5 - Thanks for pointing out those problems, I'll fix up as much as I can and then see if I...

Writing Feedbacknjbignell - Oct 4, 2006njbignell - Oct 4, 2006
Paper on an econ. concept that help u understand an issue in ur life

10 - Greetings! You are certainly working hard to improve your writing; that's great! I have to say, I have...

Undergraduateeconsangel - Sep 26, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 3, 2006
Doctor Faustus Essay

2 - Greetings! While I think you have a good rough draft here, I do have a few suggestions that...

Writing Feedbackjeffspears - Oct 2, 2006EF_Team2 - Oct 2, 2006
Who is a villain? Need help with essay on Villain of Canadian history

3 - Greetings! When you are looking for someone who is the "most" anything, it is often subjective -- that...

EssaysVlad - Sep 25, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
'Attack of the Bees' - essay bout a day I will never forget

3 - Greetings! Your essay does, indeed, have details and coherence! Just a few little things pop out to me....

Writing FeedbackBadAngel299 - Sep 24, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 25, 2006
Paper On Theologians.

5 - Greetings! While I can't give you a lot of information specifically on theologians since I'm not an expert...

EssaysVlad - Sep 16, 2006EF_Team2 - Sep 22, 2006
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