Writing Feedback / Chinese Astronauts Back on Earth After Monthlong Stay in Space [2]

Two Chinese astronauts, Jing Haipeng and Chen Dong, went to space by Shenzhou 11 vehicle for monthlong stay which it is the sixth and longest crewed China's mission and the growing ambitions of advancing space program. They come back on earth with good condition and they spent 30 days aboard for conducting experiment and preparation of equipment. The space program has realized new progress and can contribute in the innovation and a world power of science and technology of the country. the reputation of the space program that China has launched two space stations, staged a spacewalk, landed a rover on the moon and is now considering sending a crewed lunar mission. The another country is funding the china's space program to Tiangong 2, which, at 60 tons when completed, would still be considerably smaller than the 420-ton ISS.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / Diverification of Monotasking and Multitasking Skill [3]

Monotasking and multitasking are the two things which defferent. Monotasking is skill which focusing only one things, but multitasking is another different skill which able to do or control many things in one time. For the example, mono phone which has one essential function or mono compas is device which has one feature on the adventure. Meanwhile, there is another of skill, supertasker, of the people who are able to manage multitasking field.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The wind turbine with its components and best locations to generate electricity effectively [3]

The pictures illustrate about the type of devices which be operated as wind turbine and the location where it can be applicated in the environment. Overall, the wind turbine has the same design in many locations, such as in the sea, lower mainland, or high place, and also this device has the same natural resource, mainly wind source.

The wind turbine consists of blades which made from fiberglass r wood, wind sensor that has function in measurement of speed and direction of wind resource, generator which will change the wind resource become electricity, the steel tower which will prop up this device, and the computer in the house will receive the data from sensor and adjust blades.

This renewable energy device can be placed in three places, such as in the sea, in the citizen place which is called domestic turbine, and in the high hell. The wind turbine which is placed in the sea has electric energy result between 100 kilowatts and 1.5 megawatts, but the domestic turbine can produce output electricity is 100 kilowatts and the turbine which is applicated in the high hill like mountain will generate 1.5 megawatts of electricity output.

Writing Feedback / The time when young people finished their school and before take a lecture in the college [5]

Some suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this

The time when young people finished their school and before take a lecture in the college that is opportunity time to take a job in the adolescence. Although there are some advantages to working in young time, I believe that many disadvantages too. The advantages are the enrich work experience and financial matters, meanwhile, the disadvantages are lack of the academic knowledge and also deficiency on finances.

One of two advantages is they who decide to work after school graduation will have enlarged work skill. For the first example, the fresh graduate who early has academic experience such as study oriented, working the task, and only reading or writing skill, in the next time in other places like industry or working area will more learn about keep on stay good process and also they can communicate with many people, so it will increase their new knowledge. For the second example, young people who take a job early after school and before enroll be the student of the university will increase the financial matters in their life. They will have self-income from their job and also it can help family economical in order to suffice with standard life matters.

However, there are many disadvantages of the adolescent who get work in early time before they study in college. Firstly, the young people will have the lack of academic knowledge because many their times has been wasted to focus on the job in the industry. They must review again many studying materials which they are gotten in school level. Secondly, the young people who decide don't to work in transition time, between school and university, will have the financial problem in their life because the need some necessaries to towards the life, but they don't have many ultimates to keep their necessity.

Finally, I can conclude about the decision of the graduate school which will take a job has many advantages to increasing their knowledge and work skill, but it also has many disadvantages in the academic knowledge . I suggest that the adolescent must envisage the two decision in order to appropriate with their life.

Writing Feedback / Jakarta's Governor Was Questioned for Hours by Police as Part of a Blasphemy Probe [2]

Basuki T. Purnama or Ahok, the governor of the country's capital, answered 27 questions which repetitive of the previous interrogation for 8 hours from Indonesian police because his case is blasphemy probe. His campaign brings a quranic verse, Al Maidah, that the position of leadership in Indonesia mustn't always from Muslims although Indonesia is a Muslim-majority country. He had apologized that he never intended to insult Islam or the Quran., but 200,000 Muslims protested Ahok in the Streets of Jakarta on 4th November 2016 and also they require Indonesian President "Jokowi" to endorse the governor in the upcoming gubernatorial election. The solving of this problem is meeting with leaders from mainstream Islamic groups, political parties, and also Prabowo Subianto as former presidential election rival and his party's chairwoman Megawati Sukarnoputri as well as military officials.

Source : TIME

Writing Feedback / A Next-Generation Digital Book [4]

Push Pop Press Team, Charlie Mecher, and Melcher Media create the first feature-length interactive book, which called "Our Choice" with the author is Al Gore that explains about solve the climate crisis. Many advantages of this electronic book which only touching the screen, like search the location where we are now which called interactive map, open and swipe through the chapters, the pages at the bottom can scrolled, open the page to zoom, lift off and open up have function to open the another page, the opposite that just fold the page is back up and put it back. Moreover, it shows the documentary footage and interactive animation in the page on the book which we can play it while we read a book. also, the video can be pinched and peaked back at the page and the video still playing. The other features illustrate the interactive infographics, like wind, geothermal, solar power potential that only takes the finger, it can be explored and seen state by state. On the other hand, the book can be blown by us and it shows real motion, also these books can run in iPad, iPhone.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / The connubial couple have twice more chances for happiness than single people [2]

The charts illustrate about the percentage of happiness ratings based on the number of people age and the percentage of the effect of the children who the marital couple has on the spouse life. Overall, the connubial people have twice more happiness rating than unmarried people, and also the children who married people have that is not effect in the happiness ratings.

Firstly, the percentage of happiness of married people is above 40 percent which the highest percentage at 45 percent in young age, between 18 and 29 years old, and also the lowest percentage in over medium, 50 to 64 years old. Secondly. The percentage of happiness of unmarried people is between 20 and 35 percent which the highest percentage at 34 percent in the old period, 65 years and over.

Another graph shows the happiness of marital couple who have children that above 40 percent and it is not effect to their happiness. The highest percentage at 44 percent in married couple life which have children under 18 years old and the lowest percentage in the spouse life which have only children 18+ years old about 41 percent.

Writing Feedback / Office clothes are important, but the quality of work is crucial to the existence of an organisation [2]

Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

One of the important things that must have many employees in the company in office-look clothes which they wear, but the quality of labor's working skill is important else than their appearance.

Nowadays, may organizations decide in order to their employees must have good-looking style because the labor's appearance shows the identity of the company, so it is right way if many companies have the certain rule which their employees must use smart dress in working area. However, I think it is not main feature to enterprise the identity of the company because the quality work of the labor is more important to show their name and work capability of the company rather than the suitable which they wear.

Some companies is entering the industrialization era, it means that the capability of work is more essential from other factors, like clothes-looking. The quality of labor's working shows more and less the rating of the organization because the skill can be measured and looked by other people who want to look job capacity of the industry. Some researchers illustrate that the identity of the industry can be looked from the work capacity of their employees and I think that it is right statement because the working style can determine the result of things which can be produced by the factory and also can be felt by the people who as their consumer in the real life.

All in all, I can conclude that the capability of employee's working as important as the suitable which the labors wear, while the quality of working is more essential rather than clothes. Finally, I just give suggest that it must balance between two factors above because it can improve the name of the organization and also it can be the right way towards modern industrialization.

Writing Feedback / Eight Easy Ways Lead to Success [6]

There are eight ways to create success in the life according to seven years of research and 500 interviews. First of all is the passion according to Freeman Thomas who talk about passion can bring to the success because do it for love. Secondly, Rupert Murdoach said that the success must do with hard work because nothing comes easily. Thirdly, put the nose down in good something to get the success and practice it, based on Alex Garden's says. Then focus, in Noman Jewison's view who is think all with focusing on one thing. David Gallo. The next, Push the self, particularly physically and mentally, also pass the shyness and self-doubt. Then, Sherwin Nuland talked that the another way which can serve others something of value. The Ideas come from creativity skills according to Bill Gates's speak. Kraus says that persistence is the total one reason for the success which it gotta persist pass failure.

Source : TED

Writing Feedback / Fijian ants grow their own plant cities and farm tropical fruits [2]

The Squamellaria fruit plant is used growing media of the ant, Philidris Nagasau who enter in seeds of the fruit plant and eat flesh also collect the seeds for future farming. Not only the fertiliser is main feature of the growing of the plant, but also it dependent on the ant, so they can symbiotic relationship which it can be the history of the Fijian ant-plant interactions that when the plants developed roots that could grow in bark and the ants lost their ability to build nests and at the same time as finally this signals the beginning of the mutual relationship. Moreover, the ants also have smart ability to cultivate the fungi recently. The stagger teamwork of ants comes from their skill to develop such sophisticated food production

Source : New Scientist