/ TOEFL: A/G It is better to do work by machine than by hand.
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s to be much more optimal in working than by handhumans, because itthey surpasse s manual labor in speed, accuracy, and quantity.
The invention of
was indeed a great invention (two invention in a row? not a good start. The topic sentence should include your precise idea. It needs to tell the reader what the paragraph about.)
. Possessing the capability to perfectly operate in a fixed timing and pace,
the ideal gadget in factories, replacing impassionate???
workers who often
to meet their quotas.
achines are faster, cheaper, and easy tooperate, overcoming all the obstacles that made manual labor difficult to control and manage. Perhaps the greatest characteristic machines
have that surpassesthat has made them superior to
human is the ability not to make any mistakes. With its precise accuracy and calculated movements, there is no human that could par to the perfection machines reach during work. The typewriter is
perfect example. Not a single human can write asymmetrically, writers are bound to accidently misspell a word, forget a comma, or even spill some ink. The typewriter has the ability to write in perfect symmetrical lines, correct fresh mistakes, and even adjust the place if the writer forgot to add a word. As anyone can see, machines surpass every human weaknesses which is why I assert work could be done much more efficiently than my hand (redundancy is still seen in your work. You do not need to repeat yourself over and over using different words. One topic sentence, one strong supporting sentence (an example), and one concluding sentence are enough)
On the contraryMoreover
, if work is done
, many companies will have trouble to meet their quota on supply and demand. With the era of
shopping, international shipping, and media advertisements, demand is practically everywhere and unpredictable. If all work is done by hand,repetition
the amount of work to be done manually would be next to impossible to supply the incessant demands coming from all over the worldredundant
. People would have to work literally all day and night, just to reach their daily goal
before the next day begins. Stress and exhaustion will dominate the workers, completely obliterating the work moral which will additionally hinder the company's progress. For example, various clothes companies like GAP and Banana Republic used to produce their products through manual processes
. However, as their reputation rose in the US domestically
and internationally, their demands skyrocketed to the point they had to open factories completely based on machines and operators to meet up to everyone's expectations. As a result, their patrons were satisfied and were impressed by their mass productions that they are now herald as one of the most reliable clothing companies. Therefore, machines can allow companies to reachrepetition
' faster and more
efficiently compared to work done by handrepetition
Despite the fact we created machines, we cannot deny the fact machines are far more superior in operating difficult tasks that once were done by hand
more effectively and efficiently
Thanks to the machines,Now we live in a world where machines are able to meet the high rate of demand worldwide, what which would not have been possible without their contributions we can supply who demands and without machines, it would be impossible to do so.
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