Pahan
Jan 25, 2013
Undergraduate / Style of Studying; MPACT of my personal weakness on PA program [5]
This is a very important sentence because its the beginning of your essay. I feel as if this sentence is a little too long. Breaking it down would be a good idea.
Ummmm... I'm not sure I understand what you are trying to say here. :/
Throughout my medical study, I used to focus on my final exam scores and grades for each year, pushing myself vigorously to achieve my goals, but while behaving in such a tough way, I have missed the enjoyment of being going through all of that and even my personal life.
This is a very important sentence because its the beginning of your essay. I feel as if this sentence is a little too long. Breaking it down would be a good idea.
I am convinced now that my life would always be on the line of fire so better I must teach myself to enjoy my time during that.
Ummmm... I'm not sure I understand what you are trying to say here. :/