eddies [Contributor]
Nov 13, 2015
Writing Feedback / Out of country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to prevention [3]
In this globalization era, many people argue that charge of country's health should be spent for treatment regarding health educations and preventive measures in immense portion. In my personal view, I believe healthy determent will bring wide range of advantages in life, although directed treatment is precise way for mankind.
Intro:
Building a culture of health is not a night effort. As such, some people argue that government should allocate more funds on health education and preventive measures so as that society lives under health conditions. While this notion is utterly acceptable, I would argue this way will raise dire consequences
Conclusion:
To sum up, society should be supported with good healthcare system to have a better life. This can be only done if government sets up more funds. Yet, some thoughtful consideration must be taken into account.
Intro:
Building a culture of health is not a night effort. As such, some people argue that government should allocate more funds on health education and preventive measures so as that society lives under health conditions. While this notion is utterly acceptable, I would argue this way will raise dire consequences
Conclusion:
To sum up, society should be supported with good healthcare system to have a better life. This can be only done if government sets up more funds. Yet, some thoughtful consideration must be taken into account.