Writing Feedback / Diarrhea and methods to prevent and cure it! [2]

This critical summary provides a background of why people suffer from Diarrhea and what is Diarrhea in the first place. Numerous ways of avoiding and curing Diarrhea for both adult and children will also be discussed in the summary. Watery feces many times per day, feel like vomiting and cramping, that is Diarrhea. Although, Diarrhea is not a dangerous symptom when it lasts for a short period of time, however, it can be hazardous if Diarrhea does not disappear after week 4. More than 100 types of diseases can cause Diarrhea, but most of the time it is because of the poisonous virus.

According to the article, there are two types of Diarrhea, which are acute diarrhea and Chronic diarrhea. Acute diarrhea is when the diarrhea lasts for approximately 1 to 2 days. On the contrary, Chronic diarrhea can last for 4 weeks or more than that. The second type of diarrhea is usually an indication of a serious health problem. Both types of diarrhea can severely dehydrate one's body. Dehydration can make us have dry skin, headache, constipation, dizziness, low blood pressure, rapid heartbeat, rapid breathing. Diarrhea can be caused, as a result of, consuming certain medicines, not being able to digest some specific foods, some colon issues or it can be created because of the diseases, which impact stomach, small intestine. Fortunately, there is an abundance of preventative measures for diarrhea such as having wonderful hygiene, always cook the meat before consuming it and so on. When it comes to children and babies specifically, they tend to bite their toys which can lead them towards diarrhea. Most of the time, diarrhea of children is associated with the rotavirus. It is quite a usual virus and it can multiply quickly. Rotavirus vaccines are the only remedies which can truly defeat the virus, even though this vaccine is for eliminating the virus not for curing or preventing diarrhea. Aside from the rotavirus diarrhea, traveler's diarrhea is the common symptom for travelers who decide to travel to developing countries. A few actions can be made to avoid this type of diarrhea, which are to not drink tap water or use it to brush your teeth, restrain oneself from consuming unpasteurized milk and its product, to not eat raw vegetables, food junkies. In case if a certain person, especially an adult, already has diarrhea, then one should try to compensate the water which one's body has already lost by drinking water, fruit juices, sports drinks, non-caffeinated sodas, salty broth. Children, on the other hand, should eat simple and soft foods, some of which are bananas, boiled potatoes, toast. In addition, caffeinated drinks, greasy or oily foods, high-fiber foods and sweets should be forgotten by the person who suffers from the diarrhea.

This trustworthy study was last modified on the 28th of January 2013 and it belongs to Abdullah bin Abdulaziz Arabic Health encyclopedia, which was created on the 10th of May 2010 by the King Saud bin Abdulaziz University for Health Sciences (KAAHE) with the help of the Saudi Association for Health Informatics (SAHI). The importance of the report is to outline the basic understanding of diarrhea and methods which can be utilized to protect and cure themselves from diarrhea. Therefore, everything that is related to diarrhea is discussed.

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Grammar, Usage / Heartbroken and in a state of deep shock [6]

The statement, made on behalf on unnamed family members, said his relatives were "heartbroken and in a state of deep shock".

I am not sure about the meaning of this sentence, especially the middle part!
i wish someone could interpret it for me.

Grammar, Usage / Sentences interpretation; Facebook and its aftermaths [2]

At their inception social networking sites were largely the province of the computer savvy young.

If you have an online bank account, your executors will be able to close it down and claim the money on behalf of your estate.

A virtual space station has been sold for $330,000 on a game called Project Entropia - though whether that kind of asset could be passed on would depend on the game's terms and conditions.

And how do we ensure that the people we want to inherit them, our loved ones, actually do?

I have some troubles understanding those sentences above!

I need a thorough interpretation for each one of them!

Grammar, Usage / Deaths of innocent people; meaning of those aforementioned sentences [2]

Students attacked in their classrooms while preparing for exams.

Gunmen believed isolated in the female dormitories.

Angela Merkel, Francois Hollande and Mariano Rajoy were briefed on the rescue and thanked the workers.

I really need someone to thoroughly explain the meaning of those aforementioned sentences.

Grammar, Usage / Future perfect continuous tense and its usage! [5]

By the time when you have been singing for 7 years, she will have been singing for 14 years!

I wonder whether it is a congruous sentence!

Writing Feedback / Growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries - it has its detractors [2]

Nowadays, education overseas has become more accessible and growing numbers of people send their offspring to study in other countries. However, this trend has its detractors.

I strongly believe that the pros far outweigh the cons, and will examine both below.
You should write at least 250 words.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Education has always been the way for parents and other people to ensure themselves that their kids will be provided numerous knowledge. Having said that, studying abroad also helps children be mature swifter. Even though it has some disadvantage, such as having a nostalgia feeling. The cons can never exceed the advantages. Therefore, I am personally convinced that studying abroad's cons are no way near its benefits.

The vast majority of people now have a tendency to send their children abroad since most of their countries cannot satisfy their demands regarding the education. This phenomena force their child to be exposed to the real world, which should expedite the maturity process of their children. The knowledge that is imparted by a specific country, in which the child moves to is abundant. It is reasonable because their parents usually vigilantly choose the country, of which contains lots of knowledge before sending their children to a certain location. Envision yourself, being a kid who has the opportunity to study in England. Obviously, your English will be enhanced once you live there as well as your maturity due to living alone and encountering a tremendous amount of people. As a result, the benefits of studying abroad are enormous.

Along with the advantages, the only disadvantage is the loneliness. You might not be able to make friends in a certain country, loneliness would overwhelm you. It does not always apply to every single human being because not everybody suffers from the same issue. However, there are some individuals who possess a strong bond with their families and thus, fail to survive in a foreign country. For instance, I have an elder sister who has been residing in Australia for 5 years. She used to keep in touch with our family because no one understood her personality there. It was a huge obstacle for her to concentrate on studies. She eventually overcame it, but it was quite a process and not everybody might end up that well. Briefly, missing home is the only disadvantage of studying abroad.

The aforesaid evidence insinuates the number of benefits people receive when they study abroad exterminate its insignificant setback. Taking all the points intro account, I tally with the community, in which people believe in studying abroad and its lucrativeness.

Writing Feedback / Growing up in a big city can have lots of benefits, such as schools, experiences; City vs Rural area [3]

It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city.
Do you agree or disagree?
Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
You should write at least 250 words.

Growing up in a big city can have lots of benefits, such as schools, experiences. While living in a countryside can protract your child life expectancy. Notwithstanding, children should have the best education since as they become older, it will be more arduous for them to comprehend any knowledge. We also have to force children experiencing the cruel society. This helps them get accustomed to living in a big city earlier. Therefore, I am personally convinced that children should grow up in a big city.

Searching for a proper school might be complicated in the countryside. This is because not many people live in the rural area, and thus, it is pointless to build numerous schools here. The problem can easily be solved by living in an urban area or move to it. The big city usually possesses an abundance types of schools, which can satisfy your demand. Imagine yourself, dwelling in a city. Obviously, you will have endless choices regarding schools. As a result, it is quite a benefit for a child to harbor in a city.

Aside from a wide range of schools, one might be mature swifter, than those which live in a rural area. This is reasonable because an urban chill will be able to encounter a variety of people from different ethnicity. Even though, it does not always apply to every single human being because it might turn out that your child will stay at home all days. However, the vast majority of children now are dissuaded by their parents to entertain outside their home, playing with other kids. For instance, city is the place in which your child live and it has an enormous amount of personalities which live there. Briefly, your child will develop faster because of the numerous interactions.

The aforesaid evidence alludes that dwelling in a city is much more wonderful for children. Taking all the points into account, I tally the community, in which people believe in the city.

Writing Feedback / IELTS task 1: Unpaid works and people who squander time on them! [2]

The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)

Describe the information presented below, comparing results for men and women in the categories shown. Suggest reasons for what you see.

You should write at least 150 words.
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram provides a breakdown information of the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people, of which carry children from 1 to 2, 3 and older and without children. The diagram is measured in hours.

It is noticeable that the married women have a tendency to spend more time on unpaid works, whilst the married men possess the opposite story.

A closer look at the data reveals the three types of married women, which allot an ample time to the unpaid works. Married women with 3-year-old and older child ranked as the highest with their roughly 60 hours a week. The second candidate with the lower hours is the married women with a child from 1 to 2 years old. Their hours reached 50. The last type of married women spent only 30 hours on unpaid jobs.

In regards to married men, obviously, they cannot distribute their time for the unpaid works as much as their wives. The data suggest married men with 3 years old and older child worked for 15 hours per week. The gap between all types of married men is about an hour. As a result, married men, who do not possess offspring spend 17 hours for unpaid works, more than married male with kids from 1 to 2 years old by an hour.

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Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2: Government alone cannot defeat the climate change! [3]

Scientists and the news media are presenting ever more evidence of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage.

What are your views?

Climate change has always been a polemical topic since it first appeared. It makes our planet warmer reach day. This can lead towards numerous consequences that need to be eschewed. The government cannot solve all these issues on its own because government is human after all. Even if the government could handle the problems, people will still have to back the government. This is because everyone is responsible for the climate change. Therefore, I wholeheartedly agree the statement, which asserts that we have to alter the way we live to hamper the upcoming aftermaths.

Government was created by human beings themselves. We as human beings sometimes find it arduous to fix every single hassle. It is reasonable because other issues, such as deflation and inflation overwhelm us. That is why, people should step in and change their actions in lieu of constantly relying on the government. For example, the government now has lots of troubles regarding money, so it cannot allot any second to climate change. We as the loyal citizens should fix the climate change ourselves. This can immensely benefit our planet. As a result, people must participate to the battle when it comes to solving the climate change's issue.

Aside from the responsibilities, it is imperative for any person to understand the danger of the climate change. This phenomena can ruin the planet as well as the people who dwell on it. It can be the end of our existence. We must step it up and fight back the climate change alongside our government. Assume yourself living under the dangerousness of the climate change. Obviously, we need to worry about the surviving. Hence, we have to defeat the climate change no matter what it takes.

The aforesaid evidence insinuates that humankind must be enthusiastic in regards to the climate change. Taking all the points into account, I have a robust belief that every folk need to take care of the Earth.

Writing Feedback / There are some huge gaps between male and female regarding teaching - IELTS [4]

The graph chart provides a breakdown information of the six distinguishable types of educational setting, in the UK in 2010. The chart classified teachers in both genders and measured in percentage.

It is noticeable that there are some huge gaps between male and female regarding teaching.

A closer look at the data reveal that the female teachers preferred Nursery/Pre-school, the primary school and the secondary school. If the story is about the Nursery, females were almost the only type of teacher, and thus, 98% out of 100%. The primary school had the similar story, the vast majority teachers were females. The percentage of the female teachers were 95%, whilst the rest was obviously male's one, a 90% difference. Secondary school, female teachers were still leading with its 56% and the male teachers took the rest 46%. The college had both genders, each with 50%.

Male possessed highest percentage in the private training institute and the university. The first place, which is the private training institute contained more than half male teachers. The percent was 56 compared to the female's roughly 46%. In the university, it is conspicuous that men outnumbered female. This is because 70 % teachers in the university were male, whereas 30 % was the percentage of the female teachers.

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Writing Feedback / Choosing the custom of the place you live, and your own custom, has always been a polemical topic. [3]

When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country.
Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices.
Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
You should write at least 250 words.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Choosing the custom of the place you live and you custom has always been a polemical topic. Numerous people consider it is right to follow the custom of the new country since you need to find your feet in that society. On the contrary, keeping your own custom is also reasonable because after all, you are a citizen of a specific country. Notwithstanding, I support the community, which adjusts to other custom.

When you lived in another country, it would be arduous for you to not get accustomed to its custom. It is understandable because you would be reckoned as an outsider. People would treat you differently or even discriminate. It does not always apply to every single human being. It is because not many individuals would behave that way explicitly. However, you still have to show them your gratitude. Otherwise, you would most likely to face repercussions. For pragmatic instance, I used to dwell in Russia once. I did not follow its custom. After a while, there were some horrible consequences, which happened to me. As a result, you always have to prioritize an unfamiliar custom when you live in a specific country.

There are some folks who would rather guard their own customs because they think it would be plausible. Those people have a tendency to neglect other customs because of their obsolete belief. They simply do not understand how priceless every custom is. We should never believe that way. Every custom is identical. We are born from the same god. There should be no such thing as superiority in regards to the customs. Hence, it is not the best idea to carry your custom with yourself, while living in a foreign country.

The aforesaid evidence insinuates that these days, people hold various beliefs. One might consider that it is imperative to protect their custom, others might be against it. Personally, I advocate people who are flexible and get used to the custom where they live.

Writing Feedback / IELTS: ASDA supermarket and its reasons! Close to home, good reputation, 24-hour shopping, etc. [2]

The table provides a breakdown information of the reasons of why people choose ASDA supermarket. The reasons are close to home, good reputation, 24-hour shopping, parking facilities, friendly staff and competitive prices.

It is noticeable that the two underlying reasons are close to home and parking facilities.

A closer look at the data reveals that close to home was voted by 25 men and 20 women, 45 in total. In the meantime, only 17 men and 22 women voted relatively regarding the good reputation. Parking facilities were also one of the main three reasons, the number of male votes was 21 compared to female's one which was 20.

The last three reasons, which are competitive prices, friendly staff and 24-hour shopping shared the same fate. The competitive prices obtained 14 guy's votes and 17 from the opposite gender. Friendly staff, on the other hand, got 12 votes from both genders, each with six. The least favorite reason was the 24-hour shopping because it attained zero votes from females and 4 from the opposite sex.

The data suggest that people visit the ASDA supermarket mainly because of the convenience.

reasons for shopping at ASDA supermarket no. of men no. of women
close to home 25 20
good reputation 17 22
24-hour shopping 4 0
parking facilities 21 20
friendly staff 6 6
competitive prices 14 17

Writing Feedback / IELTS: multinational companies are supporting our life, in lieu of ruining it. [2]

In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?

Multinational companies are always wonderful to have in any society. It is reasonable since they often produce for us a variety of products. This can help us have more choices when it comes to considering buying any items. Another reason is that, they will advocate us to not to be obsolete compared to other places. Therefore, I am personally convinced that the multinational companies are not destroying the quality of our life.

The items that we get from the multinational companies are really different from the rest of the company. Sometimes, it is almost impossible to choose any products in the national company because the choices are so limited. That is the point when the multinational companies step in. They usually offer us with a wide range of products that can satisfy our demand with ease. It does not always apply to every single multinational company since there are some multinational companies out there, which are even worse than the national company. Notwithstanding, the number of that type of company is quite modest. It is understandable because the vast majority of multinational companies will only emerge when they truly believe that they can entice many clients. For pragmatic instance, I have recently purchased a laptop from the foreign company because our companies do not have any powerful laptops as other countries' companies do. As a result, the multinational companies really benefit our lives.

Aside from the huge amount of choices, they bolster us regarding keeping up with other countries. It would be absolutely unfair for our people if we did not have those companies. Envision yourself a society with the national companies only. This can be a disadvantage for our people if they yearn the products that only the multinational companies possess. This can render our society to be out-of-date in comparison with other societies. Hence, thanks to the multinational companies, we now can stay updated in some sense.

The aforesaid evidence insinuates that multinational companies are supporting our life, in lieu of ruining it. Taking all the points into account, I am against the community, which asserts that the multinational companies are spoiling the quality of our life.