Bams17
Nov 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / The graphs present information about the number of two kind of fish [8]
1. ... the number of two kind KINDS of fish which IS seized close to (...) during 4 yearsfrom 2008 to 2010 .
2. Overall, the number of two kind KINDS fish, tuna and swordfish ... (WHAT DO YOU MEAN IN THIS SENTENCE?
3. It was a slight increased,... Otherwise, swordfish ... The number of ...
( IN THIS PART DON TOO MUCH SENTENCES, ONLY PUT THE INTERESTING POINT)
4. ... number of two kind KINDS fish, between 2008 and ...
(BODY 1 AND 2 SHOULD LONGER THAN OVERVIEW)
1. ... the number of two kind KINDS of fish which IS seized close to (...) during 4 years
2. Overall, the number of two kind KINDS fish, tuna and swordfish ... (WHAT DO YOU MEAN IN THIS SENTENCE?
3. It was a slight increased,... Otherwise, swordfish ... The number of ...
( IN THIS PART DON TOO MUCH SENTENCES, ONLY PUT THE INTERESTING POINT)
4. ... number of two kind KINDS fish, between 2008 and ...
(BODY 1 AND 2 SHOULD LONGER THAN OVERVIEW)