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BU essay- open-minded, diligent, and curious

4 - In the second and third paragraph I tried to connect diligence and curiosity. I was curious about my community,...

Undergraduateangie127 - Dec 24, 2009angie127 - Dec 29, 2009
Boston University-Me in 3 words

5 - Thank you guys so much!!...

Undergraduatedanielhe - Dec 24, 2009danielhe - Dec 28, 2009
"born in China 16 years ago" - MIT world you come from essay

3 - In the face of change and turmoil, familiarity beckons like the grain-o-plenty during famine. (Right here, explain what you...

Undergraduatelakerkobe - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Princeton Quote Essay---Engaging a troublesome child

3 - FAB! Very well written, short but adequate. a 100% winning essay! One of the best essays I ve read...

Undergraduatertgrove123 - Dec 24, 2009Wanderer_x - Dec 27, 2009
"new experiences with an open mind" - emory supplementt im applying ED

6 - One of the many outstanding elements of Emory is the caliber of its students. Both in and out of...

Undergraduateolivia611 - Dec 24, 2009olivia611 - Dec 30, 2009
'aeronautical engineer' - Common app. main essay: character in fiction!

7 - Can someone give me a feedback about the content of htis essay? Please!! It will be really appreciated!...

Undergraduatehern255 - Dec 24, 2009hern255 - Dec 30, 2009
Stanford's students are widely known to possess a sense of intellectual vitality

2 - it seems much to general. im guessing your essay is about the experiment and how its related to curiosity...

Undergraduatedaisyx3 - Dec 24, 2009anhammond - Dec 25, 2009
Amherst applicants, do we have to refer to the quote in the essay?

4 - I'm writing the same essay. I didn't exactly plan to include the quote in the essay. I think that...

Essayssportybluei - Dec 24, 2009cucciola21 - Dec 27, 2009
"Learning to balance one's social and academic life", personal essay, common app

4 - This does not mean anything to the reader, because it only tells that you believe you are strong...

Undergraduatecherubk - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
"art has become a passion of mine" - CommonAPP main essay suggestions?

3 - Yes! The influence reaches far past what you can remember. I think you can write beautifully about the...

Undergraduatepiefacexd - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
a liberal arts education anchored in Christian values - Pepperdine's common app

4 - It's a christian school so I thought you had to talk about an education integrated with religious faith because...

Undergraduatejuesewang - Dec 24, 2009caisson22 - Dec 26, 2009
Engineering and Applied Science, Northwestern supp. Why northwestern/mccormick?

2 - Wow this essay is really focused and that is great! But by the time I get to the third...

Undergraduatepowdaskier - Dec 24, 2009Tictac8 - Dec 26, 2009
Common Application college essay-- Tennis

3 - No, the varsity team has 3 singles, two doubles. The JV team has 5 doubles. Yeah, I was...

Undergraduateparadoxymoron - Dec 24, 2009paradoxymoron - Dec 25, 2009
"dreams drive men of purpose" Personal_Statement_PhD_Mech engineering

2 - Use the active voice: I spent my entire educational career has been spent in the most prestigious organizations and...

Graduatemerinadica - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
Common App Short Essay- My experience in FIRST Robotics!

3 - yes, i think that makes the statement more concise....

Undergraduatezain12qa - Dec 24, 2009zain12qa - Dec 24, 2009
Williams "Looking through a window" Essay

3 - The essay would read more interestingly if you have dialogue that would be between you and your friend about...

UndergraduateEkooo - Dec 24, 2009zain12qa - Dec 24, 2009
Overcoming the Peer Pressure... [Common App Essay]

2 - you have got to be kidding...no pun intended here? or..you being funny... about an ending, im not...

Undergraduatejoonghoon5 - Dec 24, 2009meisj0n - Dec 25, 2009
Common app short answer; teaching assistant

2 - Interesting read that is interesting to read. Add more specific events, don't talk about things such as the main...

Undergraduatesportybluei - Dec 24, 2009zain12qa - Dec 24, 2009
Common Application: A Historical Figure, Richard Feynman

4 - Gauss's law for magnetism can be put in many ways: "the divergence of the magnetic field is everywhere zero,"...

UndergraduateAbhijeetS - Dec 24, 2009codelieb - Dec 27, 2009
"Growing up and the medical field" - UIC GPPA essay

2 - But work on rewording this essay, it could be written in more, eloquent language. I'd also say that emphasize...

Undergraduateumrily181 - Dec 24, 2009Juniper_Jumper - Dec 24, 2009
My passion for learning and science - Cornell Engineering

15 - I m acutally heartbroken. Your essay shares some stark resemblance with mine as well. :`( I liked your...

Undergraduateekfoong - Dec 24, 2009Wanderer_x - Dec 30, 2009
"Stepping out into the world" - NYU SUPPLEMENT POEM

5 - yeah yeah yeah...

PoetryDanielle123 - Dec 24, 2009Danielle123 - May 8, 2012
"Why don't you try something your own league?" Brown best advice essay.

4 - i dont really buy your story of how just the advice of do something in your league suddenly made...

Undergraduatebrowngirl123 - Dec 24, 2009srandhawa - Dec 26, 2009
"collaboration with the minitry of health": page 217 of my autobiography

2 - Very good essay and creative idea. But please take another moment to think of a autobiography, the language should...

Undergraduategemma2345 - Dec 24, 2009dingpx - Dec 25, 2009
"The focus and dedication" - George Washington University Common App. Supplement

2 - That first sentence is a strong one! You should follow it with a sentence that gives an example of...

Undergraduatejuesewang - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 26, 2009
'The final football season' - NYU: how you spent summer vacation: 500

4 - I'm applying to NYU too! good luck!! but anyway i didn't think it was bad...but i agree with Mellzzer......

UndergraduateWrestlingnba - Dec 24, 2009dizzydaydreams - Dec 26, 2009
SOP - PETROLEUM ENGINEERING

5 - Thank you guys so much for the replies. Below is the edited version and your views will always be...

GraduateMaryann - Dec 24, 2009Maryann - Jan 6, 2010
My intro of Hamlet essay - Why did so many characters die

2 - hamlet hamlet... is this a book report summary? analysis? depends what the assignment you have to do. if it's...

Book Reportslegendz - Dec 24, 2009meisj0n - Dec 25, 2009
Williams essay; looking through a window at a significant environment

7 - I think elaboration would be helpful. It would make second to third paragraph transition more smooth if there was...

Undergraduatesportybluei - Dec 24, 2009Ekooo - Dec 24, 2009
"Freshman year at high school" - Common application essay

3 - My grades were perfect, I was playing sports, and the experience seemed like an ideal first year. ----> just...

Undergraduatemusashqa - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
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