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Narrative Essay: "Mother's heart is infinite like the Pacific Ocean overflowing"

3 - Dear EF_ Kevin, Although I handed in the essay to my professor, your advice is very useful for...

Writing Feedbacktrthanhthao109 - Oct 14, 2009trthanhthao109 - Oct 17, 2009
Looking for advice on one sentence of admission essay

7 - The top reviewer's revision makes the sentence much more concise and less confusing/wordy. I started to edit it, and...

UndergraduateJason51224 - Oct 14, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 16, 2009
UIUC Essay Help?-Psychology

3 - its very generic to say you wanna help beter lives. i think you should be specific abt what you...

Undergraduateheyimbecca - Oct 14, 2009senioryear - Oct 15, 2009
Undergrade Advice (contribute to diversity + meaningful event)

2 - Be honest, but do it in a tactful way. never put anything that will detract from the admissions office...

UndergraduateCollegeBoundKid - Oct 14, 2009Mariam892 - Oct 14, 2009
Toefl essay:: Studying abroad, advantages and disadvantages.

8 - hi, in essay or any academic writing should avoid using some pronoun such as you, we, i as possible...

Writing Feedbackerfan222 - Oct 14, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Oct 16, 2009
"just go back in the cage..." - An extracurricular activity essay

6 - Your new version is better, but still falls short. What you need to do is to elaborate on this:...

Undergraduatebythe_Secoast - Oct 14, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
descriptive argument essay about anything?

4 - It needs to be an controversial issue that you can take a stance on, and refute other stances. Good...

EssaysRaa - Oct 14, 2009worldbound10 - Oct 16, 2009
"Bump in the road", Hide and Seek - for Central Florida Application

4 - thanks for the advice, im working on the essay now=]...

Undergraduatedkinny23 - Oct 14, 2009dkinny23 - Oct 15, 2009
"The most delicious meal I have ever eaten..." - Descriptive Essay

3 - This is called a dangling modifier. It implies that your girlfriend was coming home from work, because that...

Writing FeedbackHugcr84001 - Oct 14, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
"Last summer" - Common Application Short Answer

2 - Why is functional cure in quotation marks? When I see something in quotation marks like that, I see it...

Undergraduatenpirwa4 - Oct 14, 2009Kev - Oct 14, 2009
"I am the Beast" -Lord of the Flies Essay

6 - It's often a good idea to go back and rewrite your introduction after you are finished, because that's when...

Book ReportsKev - Oct 14, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 18, 2009
UPenn Essay Prompt - Common App - "Writing has always been a therapy"

4 - Maybe I'm not understanding the last few sentences correctly. I really like the "the chance to be part... for...

Undergraduatesupermodella - Oct 14, 2009A Sizzle - Oct 14, 2009
How films have influenced my life :)- fsu essay

2 - You can cut your first paragraph completely. It says nothing of interest. Your second paragraph can go too....

Undergraduateacat6332 - Oct 14, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 14, 2009
elaborate on one of your activites in 150 words or less (football)

5 - The second one is much better. I don't think that 'eclectic' is the right word, though. 'Accessible' might be...

Undergraduatemetrostars25 - Oct 14, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 15, 2009
Why essay ----- why Hamilton ---- thanks!

3 - harzel ok thanks...I think you are right. I haven't understood the school spirit enough...It's more than teach writing. I...

Undergraduatezealzou - Oct 14, 2009zealzou - Oct 14, 2009
I just wanted to share my latest extension of 100 word prose

4 - Thanks, Kevin! I have a lot of need for advise! This time, however, I was just sharing my babblings....

PoetryJeannie - Oct 14, 2009Jeannie - Oct 14, 2009
Personal statement describing the applicant's objective, aspiration.

2 - At first, thanks for reviewing my essay!... Wow...you have a unique angle telling the story...but I think you...

Undergraduateeternal flame - Oct 14, 2009zealzou - Oct 14, 2009
government should spend as much money as possible on developing technology

3 - Your have some grammar errors in this essay, but I would do some revision before I worried about that....

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 13, 2009mikesperry79 - Oct 14, 2009
I do not have excellent English skills; COVER LETTER for postdoctoral position

NEW - Studying Immune Cells Function Dear Prof. OOO I am writing to apply for the postdoctoral position at...

LettersEunkyung Kim - Oct 13, 2009 -
"I want to study in the multicultural environment" - APU admission essay

5 - oohh, basic mistake :) . thank you for ur help Damon1570 :)...

UndergraduateRavie - Oct 13, 2009Ravie - Oct 18, 2009
"the oldest of 8 kids" - Personal Statement Law School

NEW - Tell ME what you think Being the oldest of 8 kids, I had thought that tutoring 3 middle...

Graduateracasen88 - Oct 13, 2009 -
Is it a good thing to have children employed with paid jobs?

4 - the consciousness of earning money seriously by their own effort to cover their education tuitions and personal expenses...

Writing Feedbackmaybien_bk - Oct 13, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Oct 15, 2009
"City vs. Countryside" - English class essay

4 - Your essay is based on your personal experience. It's good however the overuse of these experiences makes your essay...

Writing Feedbackkokujampo - Oct 13, 2009maybien_bk - Oct 13, 2009
ethnic diversity essay- i need help with first paragraph

3 - Oh... alrighty! Thanx!...

EssaysSelina22 - Oct 13, 2009Selina22 - Oct 13, 2009
Common App essay - a new approach to an old prompt

4 - Um. You are aware that the point of this essay is to show what a *good* candidate you are,...

UndergraduateA Sizzle - Oct 13, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 15, 2009
FSU "Vires, Artes, Mores".. artistic pursuits.

3 - You can just write another draft and post the new one below. Let me give my ieas for this...

Undergraduatebpyk - Oct 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2009
Florida State Essay - Latin terms used correctly?

2 - This is great! The poem is great, and the inspiration you draw from your brother is, too. I think...

Undergraduatedatagirl - Oct 13, 2009EF_Kevin - Oct 14, 2009
I am Vampire Slayer (not Dracula or the coven of the Twilight series type)

4 - No problem. Yeah the length is hard, especially when the piece you have written is already very concise....

Undergraduatedramacratic - Oct 13, 2009samcguff - Oct 14, 2009
Maria and father - FSU Essay.

3 - I think you are off to a good start and this a great paragraph. However, I do not think...

UndergraduateAGilberti1 - Oct 13, 2009mikesperry79 - Oct 13, 2009
"living more and more" - FSU ESSAY i need help

4 - Suspended for ignoring the thread title rules. EF...

Undergraduatehellomello15 - Oct 13, 2009EF_Team - Oct 13, 2009
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