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Deciding on a subject for my Informative Speech

2 - Personally, I know nothing about the political theories. I am a kid who likes to learn, but I gotta...

Speecheskvcc - Sep 28, 2009Notoman - Sep 29, 2009
"family members around me" - FSU essay Vires Artes Mores

3 - I just think that you can touch on all your points without going into the details you did and...

Undergraduatesuzieeet - Sep 28, 2009ryanthelion - Sep 29, 2009
Common App essay for UVA, criticism appreciated!

4 - I've said this on other threads too. It's always a good idea to keep in mind and remember who...

Undergraduateclassfyed - Sep 28, 2009EF_Stephen - Oct 9, 2009
Essay for Penn - page 217 of your 300 page autobiography

9 - It's a good idea. Keep in mind this is page 217 of your autobio, it's not exactly an essay....

UndergraduateMoog - Sep 28, 2009samcguff - Oct 4, 2009
"my memories" - Help revise my UC personal statement!

2 - If you know it sounds cliche, why don't you think of more original phrasing. And yes, it is...

UndergraduateKitkate - Sep 28, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 29, 2009
Narrative + Descriptive Essay feedback

2 - I will try and help as much as I can, but I am far from an expert writer. With...

Writing Feedbackjm22 - Sep 28, 2009mikesperry79 - Sep 29, 2009
'Mount Everest' - COMMON APP - Main Essay. Using for Harvard.

NEW - Please give some feedback! -------- There I sat, starting the the beige walls lined with motivational posters. Success....

UndergraduateMoog - Sep 28, 2009 -
IvySelect Scholarship Personal Statement

8 - Ok, thank you....

ScholarshipOhboi - Sep 28, 2009Ohboi - Sep 30, 2009
'Passing storm' - MY FSU APPLICATION ESSAY

9 - Got you im going to work on it latere today maybe in school a little bit and it would...

Undergraduatemugengangsta - Sep 28, 2009mugengangsta - Sep 30, 2009
"Being normal is overrated" - FSU essay. I need help on this...

2 - ^Errr...I would like to think that I also have creativity. ^Unless you were in my kindergarden...

Undergraduatecheetosboy5 - Sep 28, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 28, 2009
"the death of my beloved grandmother" - UCF Essay - Bump in the road

4 - Hey, I'm also applying to UCF.. I think this is really good!...

UndergraduateBrandonArnet - Sep 28, 2009alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
Descriptive Essay A Memorable Place

3 - I agree. I've never been in Vietnam, so your descriptions are helpful in making me feel what it is...

Writing Feedbackteoster4o9 - Sep 28, 2009Stephen McGuire - Sep 28, 2009
Identity - Law School personal statement

3 - Thank you greatly for your insight. I will certainly take that into great consideration when I sanitize the essay....

Graduateethiam - Sep 28, 2009ethiam - Sep 30, 2009
'outgrown my hometown' - UChicago Lichtenberg Essay

2 - Closing could be a bit better. I think you're fine on sticking to the topic. A bit long...

UndergraduateSesmo - Sep 28, 2009Moog - Sep 28, 2009
MSU personal statement "How has your environment influenced you?"

4 - ^This is way too broad. I don't think that there is one person out there who does not...

Undergraduatepapasmurf - Sep 28, 2009Llamapoop123 - Sep 28, 2009
Personal statement; Question about the way this question is formed?

5 - Hey, this is going to be 3 pages, with maybe 9 paragraphs of 100 words each. The 3...

Essaysrebeccasayshey - Sep 28, 2009EF_Kevin - Feb 13, 2011
Michigan LSA Essay: academic interest

4 - Have you ever texted while driving, knowing it increases the increased risk of an accident? Apart from...

UndergraduateMsSsSs - Sep 28, 2009efesach - Sep 28, 2009
Common App essay, rough draft (needs work) tennis

7 - This is what i have now Starting something new with people who are already experienced can be difficult....

Undergraduatecac - Sep 28, 2009cac - Sep 28, 2009
My two life accomplishments fedback

2 - You might wish to add some background information about yourself to the beginning of your essay. Apparently the incident...

Writing Feedbackmirianlandi - Sep 28, 2009EF_Sean - Sep 28, 2009
"My future job" - revise an essay; I allways want to be a designer

5 - Also, there is no excuse for making really obvious spelling mistakes. Run your work through a spellchecker, which will...

Writing FeedbackKorh - Sep 28, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 2, 2009
Exercise for upcoming final exam: How to be a good manager?

2 - Be careful with word choice. I'm guessing you mean "shrewd" rather than "shrew." I wonder if you really...

Writing FeedbackRosejoker - Sep 28, 2009EF_Simone - Sep 29, 2009
Modern Technology & Single World Culture; Specific Reasons/ Examples

2 - dmittedly, there are many good opportunities for who wants to expand their knowledge about other countries' cultures on the...

Writing FeedbackMinnie - Sep 28, 2009khoctham - Sep 29, 2009
Managerial or Technical? (Admission Essay--Masters in Information Technology)

4 - Just to be clear (since I may have not stated clearly in the above post): The essay question...

Graduateusamah82 - Sep 28, 2009usamah82 - Sep 30, 2009
Reader response of 2 short stories

3 - Sorry, it is meant to be questions! And I fixed the apostrophe there thank you:)...

Book Reportsafterhhours - Sep 28, 2009afterhhours - Sep 29, 2009
academic essay for the important assessment of the English Curriculum.

3 - Thank you for your feedback. Your advice help me a lot to evaluate my writing skill. For...

Writing FeedbackKeng - Sep 28, 2009Keng - Sep 29, 2009
Risk Management Thesis paper idea

6 - The fact is, my paper is going to be written for my senior thesis project. I am not trying...

Research Papersmetalicsteel - Sep 28, 2009metalicsteel - Oct 5, 2009
ielts: academic module task 1 (Underground Station Passenger Numbers)

3 - yeah...sorry for that. i tried to copy the graph but it seems that the program can't follow the command....

Writing Feedbackdinky - Sep 28, 2009dinky - Sep 29, 2009
University of Texas Statement of Purpose - "my career in the halls"

2 - Your essay altogether is well-written, but I would try to add more about how you became interested in film...

Undergraduateandrew4038 - Sep 28, 2009vickaay - Sep 28, 2009
Live, Laugh, Love

8 - Good essay. Very cheerful. Shows alot about you....

UndergraduateTheDreamer - Sep 28, 2009shahindian2009 - Oct 1, 2009
A Thousand Splendid Sun literary Analysis

3 - Thank you for the in sight. It is greatly appreciated. I have missed the many mistakes that you have...

Book Reportscrash_report - Sep 27, 2009crash_report - Sep 28, 2009
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