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How you gained respect for social differences (University of Michigan)

15 - Share an experience through which you have gained respect for intellectual, social, or cultural differences. Comment on how your...

UndergraduateLlamapoop123 - Aug 6, 2009Liebe - Aug 8, 2009
Describe a setback. How you resolved it. How it effected you.

11 - After you corrected my essay i wanted to see how you wrote, and wow you are a great writer...

UndergraduateLlamapoop123 - Aug 6, 2009bboysmiles - Aug 18, 2009
[commentary on your academic goals] Transfer Admission Essay

26 - A title is not required but is always nice....

Undergraduatehonkytonkz - Aug 6, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 12, 2009
How to write a book on "The causes of the way you behave"?

5 - And you might mention whether publication is your ultimate objective, or whether you are writing primarily for your own...

Grammar, UsageDonsenator - Aug 6, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
A handwritten letter describing my family and educational ambitions - admission

11 - I think you are simply not understanding my suggestion, which is to creatively use the possibilities opened up by...

UndergraduateAlice_ - Aug 6, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 10, 2009
Who or what had an influence on you - about the common application essay

5 - your essay is too long...

Undergraduatepatty123 - Aug 6, 2009rosamond00 - Aug 7, 2009
Describe the world you come from (Korea, Hong-Kong) - UC ESSAY PROMPT

NEW - Hi This is my first draft of the UC prompt Describe the world you come from - for example,...

Undergraduatepatty123 - Aug 6, 2009 -
"A likable person" - Boston University Supplement Essay

11 - ^^ yup and think "does this suck? or does it suck not so much?" trust me, whenever i...

Undergraduatekcmama8 - Aug 6, 2009tal105 - Aug 7, 2009
The year 2050, movie of your life - NYU Personal Statement

7 - ahhh, okay. i see. im thinking i should maybee sorta tweak or redo what i wrote then. dammit....

Undergraduateananya - Aug 6, 2009tal105 - Aug 6, 2009
critique - facing problems sometimes in writing

6 - Why don't you post a sample of your work here? Your posts have not exactly been the epitome of...

Grammar, Usagestuti - Aug 6, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 8, 2009
My Favorite Flowers

5 - I think it is fine to use the flower, but I do have one concern. A flower is nature's...

Undergraduatetiantian12 - Aug 6, 2009Notoman - Aug 6, 2009
Saving money for future is more useful than spending on travel.

2 - Is that true? How do you know? Students often start essays with an assertion that whatever they are...

Writing Feedbackgh52km42 - Aug 5, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 6, 2009
Lesson learned from my ankle injury - 'nothing was missing from my experience'

8 - Dear. Shine and Liebe, Thank you so much for all of your comments. I think I comprehend your...

Undergraduatelimalex - Aug 5, 2009limalex - Aug 7, 2009
Essay on Urbanisation

2 - For what purpose did you write this essay? I see you've got it posted under undergraduate admissions essays, but...

Writing Feedbackkillerwind - Aug 5, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 5, 2009
I feel like an idiot writing this - Fashion Institue Essay

9 - yea, they're kind of corny lol...

UndergraduateCarter1700 - Aug 5, 2009Carter1700 - Aug 8, 2009
Paging Simone! What do addmission panels look for in essays?

7 - This was a very competitive graduate program for which hundreds applied for about a dozen slots. First pass:...

UndergraduateNotoman - Aug 5, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 7, 2009
A valid idea? [CommonApp Essay]

5 - Remember to focus on how this experience changed you. Don't write about how sad you are for the ppl...

UndergraduateJoek1282 - Aug 5, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 6, 2009
Cbest - Back to Basics

2 - One strength of this essay is your use of supporting evidence. However, you will need to work on your...

Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Aug 5, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 5, 2009
common app short (activities) essay: strict word limit??

10 - If no maximum is given, then in theory you can make it as long as you want. However, it...

Essayscecil - Aug 5, 2009EF_Sean - Aug 9, 2009
Are established rules too limited to guide people in real-life situations?

4 - I suggest that you can make the topic more specific. For example, confime it to a specific kind of...

Essayscheeryy_cake - Aug 5, 2009mathsam - Aug 8, 2009
An Undergraduate UF Essay (influance from my brother). Criticism and opinions.

4 - :D their like in cahoots :P...

UndergraduateShaun123 - Aug 4, 2009tal105 - Aug 7, 2009
To be elected as the country's president gives prestige and honor.

2 - Do you know Corazon Aquino? If so, you must say how you know her. If not, then you have...

Writing Feedbackelainedlcruz - Aug 4, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 5, 2009
Essay for a MAS in Basel, Switzerland

3 - ^Take Simone's point to consideration on the first sentence. What was it in those ten modules that made...

GraduateDindi - Aug 4, 2009Liebe - Aug 5, 2009
"Moral Strength" and real life confrontation - need help with FSU essay

7 - presence*...

Undergraduatediiaa36 - Aug 4, 2009diiaa36 - Aug 5, 2009
" The three concepts in my life" - Florida State University Essay

8 - This sentence is in passive voice with an absent actor. Who, exactly, emphasized these values to you? And,...

Undergraduatekma721 - Aug 4, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 7, 2009
"Lights, Camera, Action" - edit this admission essay for content, grammar

4 - "I have been acting for my whole life butandrealistically speaking I have only performed for five of those years."...

Undergraduatealyse - Aug 4, 2009Llamapoop123 - Aug 8, 2009
Stanford - a rich environment where ideas are cultivated. Edits for content and grammar

4 - I agree with Liebe and all the comments--I think that if you started with this sentenced you will be...

Undergraduatemia7 - Aug 4, 2009alyse - Aug 4, 2009
'How you can achieve this or that..' - How to answer such essay prompts?

8 - But the problem is how do I say that UPenn business program can help me do this? I mean...

Essaysprompter - Aug 4, 2009tal105 - Aug 6, 2009
Gay Marriage: Is It Right?

13 - Note: I deleted John6503's comment to which Llamapoop123 is responding, because it ran afoul of our guidelines prohibiting postings...

Writing Feedbackladiired3 - Aug 4, 2009EF_Simone - Aug 12, 2009
Queen elizabeth as a poet - thesis statement incompleted

5 - Here are a few places to get you started; elizabethan-era.org.uk/interesting-facts-about-queen-elizab eth-i.htm funtrivia.com/en/People/Elizabeth-I-8760.html I looked up 'interesting facts...

Research Paperslaustin18 - Aug 4, 2009EF_Susan - Jan 19, 2012
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