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Duquesne University essay; You never know what event in your life is going to change your life.

4 - You could think about a way to tie the pharmacy career with your desire to be a minister. Do...

UndergraduateSturz15 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 29, 2008
150 Word essay about violin learning is 154

2 - Good evening. Mechanically and grammatically the piece is clean; the paragraphs are well structured and nicely organized. You...

Undergraduategokhalea09 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
Finding the college of my dreams is not a simple task; why transfer?

2 - Good evening. I think your response is truthful while still being respectful, a very good response to their...

Undergraduatelburgess88 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
MIT World I come from essay - a whirlwind of emotions and cultures

2 - My first encounter with change was at age four. Born and brought up in Nagoya, Japan, I learned the...

Undergraduatejangoc44 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
Mrs. Lois Hirshkowitz, my principle for nine years; Inspirational Figures

NEW - hii!! here is another essay that i wrote that i was wondering if needs some revision and correction.. the...

UndergraduateTLaw88 - Oct 25, 2008 -
Thanksgiving experience, the coming of fall - Common essay

NEW - Please give your comments on this common essay Thanksgiving experience When I sit by the window and...

Undergraduatesamamani1965 - Oct 25, 2008 -
'Tears falling from eyes' - common--personal essay: my own topic

2 - "...often say this to awaken us students. I would then look more closely on the music piece in an...

Undergraduateahpahf723 - Oct 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 26, 2008
Common app personal essay: selecting a topic for significant experience

8 - Start by making a couple of lists for me. List the five most important things that have happened...

EssaysNaj127 - Oct 25, 2008jkjeremy - Jun 19, 2013
Brown Early Decision Essay-any advice and constructive criticism welcome

3 - Thank you so much! I'm going back to correct my mistakes now~...

UndergraduateScannerDarkly - Oct 25, 2008ScannerDarkly - Oct 26, 2008
Key Club international; Extracurricular Short Essay (COMMON APP)

2 - "As an officer of Key Club international, I learned integrity and compromise . Integrity is always with me, except...

Undergraduateshc4ever - Oct 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Essay question: Why do People Buy?

6 - I think you need to make your question more specific. Why do people buy instead of bartering or instead...

EssaysDennyRistie - Oct 24, 2008EF_Sean - Jan 3, 2009
Do these sentences make sense? Can I change the wording?

2 - Let's see: 1. Fine as it is. 2. Nurses ...fine from there out. 3. Fine. ...

Grammar, Usagehunnybun39 - Oct 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Classical Essay - Abortion The Right to Choose

3 - Thank you very much, I will rewrite it now....

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 24, 2008taiyaki - Oct 27, 2008
"realistic or optimistic" + "hardship and misfortune" -- essays edit help

NEW - Assignment: Do people truly benefit from hardship and misfortune? As an old saying in my hometown goes,"Adversities are...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 23, 2008 -
my first two years of high school - Another UF Essay

2 - Good afternoon. This is an excellent essay. Mechanically it is clean; it is well organized, with tightly structured...

UndergraduateLiist - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Current events for American Federal Government Term Paper

4 - You may start with that famous American information leakage case. A young contractor of FBI named SXXX....

EssaysLiist - Oct 23, 2008cshcara - Feb 3, 2014
Undergraduate dissertation about the Scottish Oil Industry

2 - Good afternoon. From your posting, it seems that this prompt requests specific information from specific material that you...

DissertationsSergioGB - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Encounter with myself; Florida State University - "Vires, Artes, Mores"

NEW - For almost one hundred years, the Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State...

Undergraduateroger chavez - Oct 23, 2008 -
Sunflower-yellow rice,green peas,red peppfood&black shells of mussels; Culture UC

2 - Good afternoon. I really like your essay, but it is somewhat disconnected. I am not sure what the...

Undergraduatevivalamariani51 - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
One Character (C. Jefferson) from 'The Body In The Library' by A. Christie

2 - Good afternoon. Your post is quite confusing. If you are looking for information on the character of Conway...

Essayshayaletinizi - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
'Young people are no longer interested in religion.' What is your view?

6 - ThuyChi, You are a very good judge of character, as I have been a teacher and am currently...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
PS for Common App: Breaking Out. or cont. father's influence on me

2 - Good afternoon. I think your first essay is a good one. It's a good story that illustrates your...

Undergraduatejamieex - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
I wish to pursue my graduate studies at your esteemed university; my draft of SoP (Computer science)

2 - ... excelled in programming-related subjects like System Programming, Computer Theory, Information Systems and Programming Languages.None of these should be...

Graduatenickee_th - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Essay to gain sponsorship for Honours degree in Business Studies

3 - Thank you so much Gloria. I hope I get them to pay for it ;)...

UndergraduateTizzy - Oct 23, 2008Tizzy - Oct 23, 2008
Short Essay Answers: Books, Interests, Why Occidental

2 - Good morning. Just a couple of mechanical corrections, all to do with capitalization. Remember to only capitalize proper...

Undergraduatedocument1 - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Diversity to me is an intrinsic part of life; a lifelong learning essay

3 - Good afternoon. It seems a bit disorganized. Are you trying to explain these events in the order in...

Writing Feedbacklilveni - Oct 23, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 24, 2008
Do you think policemen should be paid more or less money in Turkey?

4 - Congratulations! Good work! See, you can do it, no problem! Keep up your hard work. Regards, Gloria Moderator,...

Essayshayaletinizi - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 23, 2008
Essay: What dish holds a strong associative power for you?

5 - Thank you for your help. Now i have more words to work with so i can elaborate more on...

Writing Feedbacknikokoskinas - Oct 22, 2008nikokoskinas - Oct 23, 2008
Fall of Rome - history essay

2 - Good evening. I think you're off to a great start. Because you state in your thesis that the...

Essaysjhg - Oct 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 22, 2008
Toefl Essay - increasing the price of gasoline and electricity

4 - Hi Prakash, I found a similar topic in the part of integrated writing. The topic discusses the rising gas...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 22, 2008camellia2008 - Dec 8, 2008
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