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Essay: "There's no place like home."

3 - Thanks a lot Gloria!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008 / learningtowrite - Oct 15, 2008
Creativity is one of the highly concerned points to those aspired people

3 - Thank you very much! I will try my best to avoid these usage errors in my later essays!...

Writing Feedbackhelenalqy - Oct 13, 2008 / helenalqy - Oct 15, 2008
The Act of Revenge, The Cask of Amontillado Essay

4 - Good afternoon. "In pace requiescat!" (1) Is correct. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing FeedbackBradlays - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 15, 2008
Motivations of buying a product - Toefl Essay

3 - Thanks Gloria! Your comments are really helpful. Regards, Prakash...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 13, 2008 / toefl_guy - Oct 14, 2008
Should we celebrate Halloween? - essay help

NEW - Should we celebrate Halloween? Halloween has become the second most anticipated holiday for children after Christmas and Chanukah....

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Essay on the short story "Rock Springs" by Richard Ford

2 - Good afternoon. In regards to spelling, I suggest you run the piece through a program with a spell...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Oct 14, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Impacts of Senior Citizens in their Choices for Healthcare - essay edit

2 - Good afternoon. As the prompt and/or requirements for this piece were not included in the posting, I can...

Writing Feedbackkcbisslessi - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
A WONDERFUL CAREER - 'I am ready for my interview'

4 - Good evening. There are some main things I am concerned about in this essay. For instance, with the...

Writing Feedbackbadgrammer - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Observation paper for HRT 101 Benson

4 - Good afternoon. As I have previously commented, check for capitalization. Things that are not proper nouns (specific ...

Writing Feedbackbensonm - Oct 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 14, 2008
Lost And Found - Narrative Essay

3 - Thank you very much!!!! My teacher said if I had any Misplaced commas. My grade would be automatic D....

Writing Feedbackeeyore_lover29 - Oct 13, 2008 / eeyore_lover29 - Oct 14, 2008
"Zoo Rejection" - my essay

3 - Thanks for your help, Gloria....

Writing FeedbackTabor - Oct 12, 2008 / Tabor - Oct 13, 2008
"Teen Gangs: The World of Canadian Street Gangs" --- Does it flow?

4 - Good afternoon. This is a great essay. The content is good and well cited, the paragraphs are very...

Writing Feedbackjordanlee - Oct 2, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 13, 2008
We can guess the nature of a person according to there dress but we cant make opinion.

NEW - It is possible to know something about a person by the way of he or she dressess. - TOEFL...

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'The ability to learn makes us human' - Rubiks Cube Essay

2 - Good evening. As the requirements to the assignment were not included in the posting, I will focus on...

Writing Feedbackweezer878 - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
'This woman is my mother' - discuss a person and his or her influence on you

2 - Good evening. You've got a good piece here, but I have a couple of concerns. First, is...

Writing Feedbackzhangyi - Oct 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 12, 2008
"The Voting Age" essay

4 - Much nicer; much more believable. Regards, Gloria Moderator, EssayForum.com...

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative)

8 - That's a good start. What kind of examples can you think of that illustrate these three items? Regards,...

Writing FeedbackReinhardt - Sep 4, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Oct 11, 2008
Praising others - necessary part of life? Sat Essay

2 - Good morning. This is a great essay; your example of the experiment with the kids highlights your stance...

Writing FeedbackgodsendE - Oct 10, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 10, 2008
Summary On Pain Meds - paper

2 - Good evening. This looks like the start of a really great paper. You have solid information provided from...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Oct 9, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals

NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 / — -
which airplane flies the farthest- science report

NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....

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Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work

4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)

2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...

Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?

NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....

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"The Soldier's Duty" - Argumentive Photo Essay need help with more Ideas

6 - Sealion Please contact this member off-forum, via their email or other contact information provided in their membership information....

Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 22, 2008 / Sealion - Oct 7, 2008
Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?

4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...

Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Character of a Man - Essay

NEW - Please check for grammar and also for the use third person only. This essay was to evaluate the character...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
Proofread Essay on Innocent Erendira and Her Heartless Grandmother

NEW - Hi, this is somewhat raw and i want to rework it, but it is due in 18 hours and...

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Argumentative Essay: Its no ones word

4 - the essay is aiming at people to stop using the N word...

Writing Feedbackobama - Oct 6, 2008 / obama - Oct 6, 2008
Essay Based on an Essay You Read

3 - Very helpful response, especially the bits about the Crusaders Thank you as always!...

Writing FeedbackFissionMailed - Oct 5, 2008 / FissionMailed - Oct 6, 2008
Help starting and brainstorming history paper [essay question]

NEW - The paper is expected to be between 5-7 pages. I'm in the process of brainstorming for it. The instructor...

Writing Feedbackkorr2221 - Oct 6, 2008 / — -
Tattoos and piercings essay. Audacious Alterations.

2 - My main concern with this essay is that there is a lot of uncited information here, opening the door...

Writing FeedbackFayFua - Oct 5, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 6, 2008
Modern brigade de cuisine system..

NEW - I really think that writing is my weakness. Regarding this essay, I wanna explain the different kinds of chefs...

Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
Comparing Christine and Penny essay

NEW - Hi! I'm a new member of this forum. Please help me with my essay. I really suck in writing...

Writing Feedbackeng1 - Oct 5, 2008 / — -
"Designing a hero" - essay about Linda Segers, "Creating the Myth"

2 - Good afternoon. Because this essay deals with specific material that you and your classmates have exclusive access to...

Writing Feedbacksweetcherokee74 - Oct 4, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 4, 2008
My teachers and the teacher's day - essay

NEW - Students and teachers are always on the different bank of the lake. Just like how it goes in my...

Writing Feedbackzhaoyuyu - Oct 4, 2008 / — -
Choices that define us and Haunt Us Essay

2 - Good morning. The second essay is better constructed and more organized, so I have edited it here: ...

Writing Feedbacktomotomo - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
Writing an essay about essay - Revising

2 - Good morning. Since the prompt for this assignment was not posted, I can edit for grammar and mechanics...

Writing Feedbacksexy1984 - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Oct 1, 2008
Four ways to control stress, take up a hobbies, exercise regularly, set realistic goals, etc.

2 - Controlling Stress In other words, having fun with family and friends ...If this is the conclusion to the...

Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 30, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 30, 2008
Three main reasons that have inspired me to continue my education

4 - I think with the corrections this essay will answer the prompt easily. Your thinking and writing skills are illustrated,...

Writing Feedbackvaldezs - Sep 29, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 29, 2008
obstacles (definition essay)

2 - Good evening. What is/are the prompt/specifics for this assignment? I am afraid I will need more details to...

Writing Feedbackestherq0901 - Sep 28, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 28, 2008
Memoir - Analysis of how music changed my life for AP11 English

NEW - Sarah Joncas Nothing's Gonna Change My World Everyone has a favorite song, one that he or she...

Writing Feedbacksarahjoncas - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
"americanism means to be proud" - essay

NEW - American means to be proud. It means to stand up for what you believe in and to fight for...

Writing Feedbackrivoltaleandro - Sep 28, 2008 / — -
Naturalism in all of its naked horror - essay

2 - Good evening. Well, you've definately gotten a topic, haven't you? :) Don't be afraid, it's just a fancy...

Writing Feedbackkaytee - Sep 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 27, 2008
Speed essay - free interpretation

NEW - Hi, can you help me look through this? Thank you! Racing Speed Daemons The rain slicked down...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Sep 27, 2008 / — -
Becoming whistleblowers - Honesty and what we sacrifice

2 - Good evening. "What we sacrifice definitely reveals what we care about the most. I am living in Vietnam....

Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
Fear of Change - The Lottery Essay

3 - Good afternoon. Without having access to the lecture and notes, I have to say I think you've fulfilled...

Writing FeedbackBradlays - Sep 24, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 25, 2008
AODAI - MY NATIONAL COSTUME - description paragraph

3 - thanks u so much. I got an A on this one. nice day,...

Writing Feedbackglass2611 - Sep 23, 2008 / glass2611 - Sep 25, 2008
Essay about the effects of participation in a sport?

NEW - Hi, I have to write an essay about the effects of participation in a sport ( which i...

Writing Feedbackconchonho - Sep 25, 2008 / — -
Debate Essay: Human Cloning Research

NEW - Human Cloning Research The scene of this conversation takes place at Sacramento State University science clubroom. This is...

Writing Feedbacktaiyaki - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
"This is the worst economy I've ever seen." - Personal Essay

3 - Thank you very much for the critique :) Much appreciated! I would say this forum is really helpful for...

Writing Feedbackkids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008 / kids_jessy - Sep 24, 2008
Diego Maradona. When people succeed, it is because of hard work.

NEW - " When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success". Do you...

Writing Feedbackhifrens - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
Health promotion - Article Summary

4 - That depends on the citation style your instructor/institution requires. Once you find that out you can do a quick...

Writing Feedbackhunnybun39 - Sep 22, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
'Suicide / LA Diaries' - Essay On A Time In My Life I Felt Desperate

NEW - I have to write an essay for English on a time in my i felt Desperate and relate it...

Writing FeedbackMementoMori - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
Death Didn't Choose Me - THESIS

6 - I'm sorry you couldn't find the assistance you were looking for here; unfortunately, we do not rewrite or create...

Writing Feedbacklokitongue - Sep 23, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Sep 24, 2008
Rubik's cube - having trouble with a conclusion

NEW - Could you please give me any grammar mistakes in this essay. Also I am having trouble writing the conclusion,...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
Snippet Essay, Mita point, Okinawa, Japan.

NEW - Please review this essay for grammar and content. Its my rough draft. The main guideline for this essay is...

Writing Feedbackmichaelfrye1970 - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
The Good Sides of the Internet Invention

NEW - Internet good sides. "For me, one of the best moments of the 20th century is the invention of...

Writing Feedbackjerry - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
"Dear Joe" - an unhappy experience - essay help

NEW - Good afternoon, My teacher told me about this web. I think it is very useful for my study....

Writing Feedbackmonterosa - Sep 24, 2008 / — -
Two seasons winter, and fall - check if I ramble, and puncuation

NEW - Prompt: two seasons winter,and fall Note: My teacher wanted me to combine 2 of my paragraphs, without a...

Writing Feedbacktimka - Sep 23, 2008 / — -

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