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Home - there is always my heart - and it is everywhere. Common App Essay

7 - I think you should seperate this sentence. There was nothing alluring in the orange-gray field. Not even the...

UndergraduateSkittleRose - Dec 26, 2009Rowa - Dec 28, 2009
introduction paraghraph about equal numbers of male and female in universities

3 - In paragraph 1, You should begin with what do you think about the prompt, then write opinions of the...

Writing Feedbackmona80 - Dec 24, 2009Keng - Dec 28, 2009
"My interest lies in science" - MIT World I come from

3 - This one describes my world more. The daily hours of imprisonment were over. Discarding my backpack at home,...

Undergraduatewhitepolarbear - Dec 26, 2009whitepolarbear - Dec 28, 2009
Computer is useful tool - has many functions

3 - Keng Thank you Keng so much! I still remember that you instruct me how to post essay into essay...

Writing Feedbackautumnwave - Dec 26, 2009autumnwave - Dec 28, 2009
Toefl essay Image that you have received land

4 - Thank you for your feedback, Kevin...

Writing FeedbackKeng - Dec 24, 2009Keng - Dec 28, 2009
Why Yale - short ans (passion in cultural studies)

8 - its great you mentioned what you intend to do with Yale resources! besides that it is vague any college...

Undergraduateswuvvy - Dec 24, 2009ace - Dec 28, 2009
mathematics, Wellesley-Describe your intellectual interests....

5 - Read the prompt again. What are your interests? How have they taken shape? Why are they your interests (i.e....

Undergraduateace - Dec 23, 2009Mustafa1991 - Dec 28, 2009
SOP PhD in Molecur Biology/Genetics

10 - This is the final draft. Any suggestions are most welcome. The structuring is as follows: 1st para- Overall...

Graduaterajeev - Dec 21, 2009rajeev - Dec 28, 2009
"attraction towards Mathematics" - MIT admission essay

12 - It is excellent! It does show all the passion you have for mathematics. I am also applying for MIT,...

Undergraduatemjellma - Dec 26, 2009molecule - Dec 28, 2009
Human Biology and Community Health, Brown Academic Fields Supplement

2 - firstly I think they count the spaces when they do the character count don't they? your essay is...

Undergraduatesbdaiquiri - Dec 28, 2009zowzow - Dec 28, 2009
[Rice] What will I bring to diversity? [I need some guide!]

6 - Well friend, The things you have mentioned are really good but you really need to show how you...

Undergraduatejoonghoon5 - Dec 26, 2009molecule - Dec 28, 2009
U of Illinois transfer application essay: Academic interests

6 - lol thanks for that. put a smile on my face that you actually felt compassion for me. I'll look...

Undergraduatefightingillini - Dec 27, 2009fightingillini - Dec 28, 2009
Parasailing accident- commonapp essay

3 - Thanks a lot for the review. I was having trouble deciding which esssay to use for the commonapp but...

Undergraduatel3goals12 - Dec 23, 2009l3goals12 - Dec 28, 2009
autobiography/ why you want the job (summer adventure camp)

5 - This is what the completed essay would look like (roughly): My name is Jereme Carpe*ter. I play the flute,...

Letterssekiu98381 - Dec 20, 2009KeyJewel - Dec 28, 2009
IELTS: Television has changed the way children spend their leisure time.

5 - Hi, I'm Seong and I am also studying IELTS course of english. When I learned introduction of IELTS,...

Writing FeedbackROKO - Dec 26, 2009Seong - Dec 28, 2009
Poverty and lack of education in Kosovo - personal, local, international concern

2 - Kosovo, a tiny dot in any geographical map, is the country I come from. As the newest country in...

Undergraduatemjellma - Dec 27, 2009luminousx - Dec 27, 2009
"Short Answers + Best Advice" - Brown Supplement

2 - I actually really like it. I think that it sounded really great.. but it did sound a little cliche...

UndergraduateiRunShow - Dec 26, 2009joosunggrace - Dec 27, 2009
Why Brown Essay (no personal connections with Brown)

6 - Revisions: Please tell us more about your interest in Brown: Why does Brown appeal to you as a...

Undergraduatetimeturner36 - Dec 20, 2009timeturner36 - Dec 27, 2009
nyu supplement - gatsby and summer

6 - Eh, I mean, I personally think NYU will get it. They asked what I did over the summer and...

Undergraduateowls - Dec 27, 2009owls - Dec 27, 2009
Statement of purpose-PhD, Economics

4 - I agree that this is a very well written piece... i am definitely convinced of your passion for the...

Graduatesishuiwe - Dec 5, 2009SP10 - Dec 27, 2009
Brain first and Heart second; Common App- topic of choice

6 - Don't use the USA This I Believe prompt for your essay. I remember someone saying to avoid "This I...

Undergraduatetchonis05 - Dec 23, 2009Masterus - Dec 27, 2009
Northwestern essay: unique qualities of Northwestern....

3 - This is a bit long. I remember that the NU essay has a 500 word limit. The essay is...

Undergraduatesckergrl101 - Dec 27, 2009Tictac8 - Dec 27, 2009
Common App Activity Essay-----FBLA; 'The ten of us intently traded glances'

5 - that compels me to participate in my school's Future Business Leaders of America your paragraph is well written. i...

Undergraduatertgrove123 - Dec 27, 2009demuredelight - Dec 27, 2009
page 217 - man on the plane

8 - oh, that part is actually 100% true. my grandmother tells me that story like, once a week. i'm not...

Undergraduateowls - Dec 27, 2009owls - Dec 27, 2009
"born in China 16 years ago" - MIT world you come from essay

3 - In the face of change and turmoil, familiarity beckons like the grain-o-plenty during famine. (Right here, explain what you...

Undergraduatelakerkobe - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
"Learning to balance one's social and academic life", personal essay, common app

4 - This does not mean anything to the reader, because it only tells that you believe you are strong...

Undergraduatecherubk - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
Infinities of Chess - U of I at Urbana Champain Essay

8 - qomoco hey para is the short form for paragraph^^...

Undergraduateqomoco - Dec 24, 2009demuredelight - Dec 27, 2009
"art has become a passion of mine" - CommonAPP main essay suggestions?

3 - Yes! The influence reaches far past what you can remember. I think you can write beautifully about the...

Undergraduatepiefacexd - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
"Freshman year at high school" - Common application essay

3 - My grades were perfect, I was playing sports, and the experience seemed like an ideal first year. ----> just...

Undergraduatemusashqa - Dec 24, 2009EF_Kevin - Dec 27, 2009
COMMON APP ESSAY FOR DARTMOUTH, UPENN, NORTHWESTERN AND OTHER SCHOOLS

37 - thanks, did you get a chance to take a look at my updated essay, it was on the bottom,...

Undergraduatesrandhawa - Dec 22, 2009srandhawa - Dec 27, 2009
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