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'the best of my life weeks' - Common App Essay (Evaluate a Significant Experience)

2 - hi... I think you need to be more careful about the punctuations , like 1-The greatest and most...

UndergraduateSome1 - Oct 5, 2009mina_sedaghatir - Oct 5, 2009
My house is a farm (UF college admission essay)

3 - That is just the definition I got offline so don't take it too personally. What i was meaning by...

UndergraduateKlaa5 - Oct 4, 2009Klaa5 - Oct 5, 2009
(expanding on the idea?) - ucf essay question about obstacle or bump

7 - Thanks so much! Yes, I would never think that those hardships are people's fault...I would definitely speak of the...

Essayspianogirl246 - Oct 4, 2009pianogirl246 - Oct 5, 2009
Satirical Essay (help with the humorous additions)

2 - This isn't satirical so much as vaguely bigoted. Part of your problem is that you are writing about illegal...

Writing Feedbackganz91 - Oct 5, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
Risk Management Thesis paper idea

6 - The fact is, my paper is going to be written for my senior thesis project. I am not trying...

Research Papersmetalicsteel - Sep 28, 2009metalicsteel - Oct 5, 2009
Advertisements makes people selfish and greedy for more and more goods

5 - Using more specific language would help, as vague language combines with grammatical difficulties to make sentences dull and difficult...

Writing Feedbackessay0405 - Oct 4, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
'Real people' - UT at Austin topic essay A. Important person

8 - Why wouldn't you want to make this more personal? The whole point of these essays is to let the...

Undergraduatezbennett10 - Sep 29, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
"the death of my beloved grandmother" - UCF Essay - Bump in the road

4 - Hey, I'm also applying to UCF.. I think this is really good!...

UndergraduateBrandonArnet - Sep 28, 2009alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
UCF Undergrad Essay on obstacle--how is my essay?

30 - Hey, I am also appyling to UCF and I think you definitely satisfied the prompt. And also, I play...

Undergraduatepianogirl246 - Sep 20, 2009alexabishop - Oct 5, 2009
help me with descriptive essay (on society or culture)

3 - thanks buglady, but ive been sitting at my computer for hours and only have a horrible paragraph. Anyone got...

Essaysandrewd16 - Oct 3, 2009andrewd16 - Oct 5, 2009
Common App - Influential Person (My teacher and the Humanities

4 - yes a little to wordy you need to be short and simple but overall good essay...

UndergraduateJulietTheSpooky - Sep 17, 2009queela09 - Oct 5, 2009
UCF personal obstacle; Life was good, money wasn't ever a problem

2 - For me, to improve this piece, it is important to develop the problems that your family had. It is...

Undergraduatescaremechelle - Oct 5, 2009rhutch - Oct 5, 2009
I find math amazing - UCAS mathematics personal statement

2 - and apply my mathematical knowledge to solve problems pertaining to those fields just a suggestion to gain...

Undergraduateacelight - Oct 5, 2009l3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009
My Florida State essay, my acheivements

2 - type of person who wants to get i am more than willing to......

Undergraduatepommell1 - Oct 5, 2009l3goals12 - Oct 5, 2009
He played the violin; The sound of music

11 - okay thanks everyone. III get the point that i didn't show enough strength/weakness. if you dont have any other...

Undergraduatepcvrz34g - Oct 4, 2009pcvrz34g - Oct 5, 2009
The pub, in which I bus tables at, named PJ Whelihans-Part Time Job/COMMON APP

2 - Ah. You have a very detailed and well-written narrative, which is good. My main concern would be that I'm...

UndergraduateWoolachee - Oct 4, 2009EF_Sean - Oct 5, 2009
causes and solutions for reducing the gap beween rich and poor nations

5 - hi tuan, i am not sure about that phrase. some people have talked to me like that; however, i...

Writing Feedbackthinhtvdhtm - Oct 4, 2009thinhtvdhtm - Oct 5, 2009
It is more important to reserve land for human beings than for endangered animal

5 - Thank all of you very much!...

Writing Feedbackruanxiaohang - Oct 4, 2009ruanxiaohang - Oct 5, 2009
Essay for Penn - page 217 of your 300 page autobiography

9 - It's a good idea. Keep in mind this is page 217 of your autobio, it's not exactly an essay....

UndergraduateMoog - Sep 28, 2009samcguff - Oct 4, 2009
Psychiatrist are doctors that deals with prevention, diagnosis, and treatment of mental disorders

2 - You need to break what is now your second paragraph into several shorter paragraphs. What is now your final...

Writing Feedbackmaking101 - Oct 4, 2009EF_Simone - Oct 4, 2009
BCC ESSAY on my academic life and career goals - I don't know what do I wanna do in future as my job

24 - I guess you could say, "I never had a paid work experience, but I did learn x, y, and...

Essaysnewsha31 - Apr 14, 2009EF_Simone - Oct 4, 2009
Rogerian Argument essay on "moonvertising?"

2 - Arguments for: Sorry, I can't see any. "Marketers will benefit" hardly seems like a strong argument -- an entity...

Essays21mm - Oct 4, 2009EF_Simone - Oct 4, 2009
'Moving to Texas' - achievement, risk or ethical

3 - Thanks a lot. I totally understand you....

Undergraduatejohnny2by4 - Oct 4, 2009johnny2by4 - Oct 4, 2009
'Sharing something in common' - Lehigh University Essay : Equity and Community

4 - Thank you both for your insight. The first sentence is the last sentence I wrote and I realize...

Undergraduatebob92 - Oct 4, 2009bob92 - Oct 4, 2009
"Brett, you're so fat." "Lose some weight!" - Experience; Common App

6 - Oh, wait, I take that back, I forgot about the difference between overweight and obese. :) But judging from...

Undergraduatebam1992 - Oct 4, 2009verily - Oct 4, 2009
A Mother's Influence (Common App Essay)

4 - I agree. it should be more direct...

Undergraduatecsmith11 - Oct 4, 2009vlatski - Oct 4, 2009
What I would pay for peace

6 - I think it's somewhat of a good opening, sort of. However, it is asking more extensively what you pay,...

Undergraduatevlatski - Oct 4, 2009csmith11 - Oct 4, 2009
""You what? You lived in China!" - Common App Essay. is this good enough?

3 - jajajajajajja i just saw that you were the one tht commented on my essay :) well i already told...

Undergraduatecatherineb - Sep 20, 2009acat6332 - Oct 4, 2009
'Acting like an adult' - Florida A meaningful experience..

4 - wow! great essay. it was definitely interesting, compared to some other UF essays i was reading a little while...

Undergraduatekma721 - Sep 13, 2009Lorena21 - Oct 4, 2009
"self-confidence in the hospital" - University of Florida Essay

5 - I'm getting help for my UF essay too, and mine started originally with a quote like yours. However, my...

UndergraduateJayp91 - Sep 27, 2009Lorena21 - Oct 4, 2009
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