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Applying to Mays Business School at A&M - Business School Admission Paper

3 - Thanks so much! Have a good Thanksgiving! :)...

Undergraduatecmschlatt - Nov 26, 2008cmschlatt - Nov 27, 2008
"International Relations" UC prompt 1. Europe gave me a hunger and passion for new knowledge

3 - Good morning and thank you for your critique! I just have one question. Can you be perhaps a little...

UndergraduateGautama - Nov 26, 2008Gautama - Nov 27, 2008
[UC Transfer prompt #1, major: film] Is it focused enough?

NEW - i feel my essay is not focused enough, also it seems to have some ESL problems. can anyone give...

Undergraduategua - Nov 27, 2008 -
To adapt in a multicultural environment - need help profreading my essay

3 - thanks so much for your help ^.^...

Undergraduatecoriimon - Nov 26, 2008coriimon - Nov 27, 2008
New York Table Tennis Club - NEED HELP WITH UNDERGRADUATE ESSAY

2 - Good morning :) In regards to mechanics, avoid contractions in formal academic writing. For instance, "wasn't" should be...

Undergraduateitzkevinn - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
'in front of a microscope' - UC personal statements #1!

2 - Good morning :) Mechanically, make sure you are capitalizing only proper nouns and the first words of sentences....

Undergraduatenutellalove08 - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
the relationship between arts and the society - another music essay

2 - Good morning :) "Um...hii." Silence. "Okay...well...I will play a piece called ...uh..Arabesque by Debussy. I hope you like...

Undergraduatepianogirl_5 - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
UC application #2 (describing activities in limited space)

2 - Good morning :) Let's see: 1. "in" should be "to." 2. "them" should be "it." ...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
my activities list - UC application

2 - Good morning :) Sure! Avoid using "we." That makes it sound like more than one person is...

Undergraduatefabxx - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
"emos" University of Michigan; grammar check

2 - Good morning :) In regards to mechanics, a few suggestions. 'emo'. should be "emo." Make sure you...

Undergraduatepianogirl_5 - Nov 27, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
"to push myself to be in top classes" - NEEDS REVISION PROMPT 1

2 - Good morning :) Mechanically, some suggestions: "Partying, drinking, and cussing; I knew this was not me." ...

Undergraduatejunioreib - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
UC prompt #1- "lived in one town my whole life"

2 - Good morning :) First, make sure that you really are writing what you mean to say. For instance,...

UndergraduateRye347 - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
"The special interest group"; what do you think? - considering civil engineer B.S

12 - Thank you so much (:...

UndergraduateFYI - Nov 23, 2008FYI - Nov 27, 2008
'success has lost its intrinsic meaning over the years' - mission trip

5 - I think this fits better, personally. I didn't include explain about the paradigm because Im assuming that the readers...

Undergraduatemyidisthis - Nov 26, 2008myidisthis - Nov 27, 2008
UC personal statements 1 and 2 (transfer student, anthropology)

7 - Sure; post them here and I'll take a look at them!...

Undergraduatekaylearner - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
Presentation on Pepsi advert speech

2 - Good evening :) Your post is seeking course specific answers, and as such my free assistance will be...

SpeechesVaughany100 - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
I intend to major in communication studies. I have become extremely fascinated by mass media.

5 - Good evening :) While this piece is also good, I prefer the first piece. It seems to fit...

Undergraduatehmirza - Nov 24, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 27, 2008
Runners in my school - Prompt 2

2 - Good evening :) In regards to mechanics, watch run-on sentences. For instance, your first sentence is a run-on....

UndergraduateZephyr003 - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
From Los Angeles to a small, rural town - UC Prompt #1 Essay

2 - Good evening :) In regards to mechanics, avoid beginning your sentences with conjunctive/transitory words such as "but," "so,"...

Undergraduatekeli - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
I am shy - what I did to overcome this trait?

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, one change: except: hi, bye, yes, and no. Should be "except "hi,"...

Undergraduated0ntkn0w - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
Essay about the environment and how we can improve it

2 - Good evening :) In regards to mechanics, make sure you are capitalizing only proper nouns and the first...

Undergraduated0ntkn0w - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
"Service Above Self" - UC Prompt #2

3 - Good evening :) In regards to mechanics, replace the hyphen with a comma in the sentence "...kindhearted, determined...

UndergraduateVaheM - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
A stem cell and genetic biologist - UC prompt 1

4 - Thank you dasani, and thank you Gloria once again....

UndergraduateTosyl1051 - Nov 23, 2008Tosyl1051 - Nov 26, 2008
"I have no idea what world I come from" - UC prompt #1...again

5 - Thank you very much for taking the time!...

Undergraduatethomasobrien99 - Nov 26, 2008thomasobrien99 - Nov 26, 2008
'study group' - aspiration for my life - UC Prompt #1#2

4 - Good evening :) In regards to the first piece, please see my comments on it previously. In...

Undergraduatedrtick - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
"I want to be the president of the United States" -UC Personal Statement

4 - Thanks Gloria! Sorry but just a quick question.. do you think this is "personal" enough??...

Undergraduatelolabola - Nov 26, 2008lolabola - Nov 26, 2008
UC Prompt 1 - Art (freshman applicants)

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure your sentences really say what you mean. For instance, did you mean...

Undergraduatefruitdrops - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
'My dealing with depression' - University of Washington Personal Statement

3 - Good evening :) Wow. What an important piece. Congratulations for having making it down the path far enough...

Undergraduatethomasobrien99 - Nov 26, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
UC prompt #1 - trouble figuring out the topic about the world I came from

7 - Good evening :) Excellent changes! I think this is ready to submit; I wouldn't change anything. I think...

Undergraduatelyndn21 - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
UC Prompt #1: "Unconditional Love" - my separate, idealized world

8 - Good evening :) I think that the subject is definitely a rare one. The prompt opens it up...

Undergraduatejacjac - Nov 25, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 26, 2008
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