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"I had to reach the finish line." - Help with Prompt 2

2 - Good evening :) I think you've got a good start here, but the focus is in the wrong...

Undergraduatelilibeth91760 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
questions on UC personal statement

2 - Good evening :) I think that answering an essay prompt with a complete sentence to begin with is...

Undergraduateskjw25 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Biology Creative Essay

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Writing Feedbackmonee2 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Gastronomy is much more than just a hobby for me - extracurricular mini-essay

4 - Good afternoon :) As I stated before, watch what you start your sentences off with. Avoid beginning your...

Undergraduatemichel92 - Nov 18, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"our district championship" - Common App Elaboration--150 words.

2 - Good afternoon :) This is a very good short response. The only thing I can see is to...

Undergraduatebhangra369 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen

4 - Since you asked for corrections, that was all I provided in the first posting :) I think it...

Writing Feedbackdatanator - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
My Undergraduate essay to FSU

2 - Good afternoon :) I think your content answers the prompt well, and it is organized, but there are...

Undergraduatelivefromthe850 - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
Why Energy Engineering? - Will you review my admission essay

2 - Good morning :) As you didn't include the prompt/assignment for this piece, I have edited the first section...

Undergraduateawaazdev - Nov 22, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
"Helping Sebastian" - UC Prompt #1

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UndergraduateKaytee17 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
'art in my life' - Florida State .."Vires Artes Mores"

2 - Good morning :) Your opening is very strong; it works well. The quote highlights your meaning well; I...

Undergraduateavalleau1 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
The Indian society, help with prompt #1....

4 - That sounds like it will be an effective addition; make sure that you include enough detail to tell the...

Undergraduatedatanator - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 22, 2008
ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?

NEW - Some people, say that living in the countryside is the best choice, because is better for your heath. But...

Writing Feedbackjavier5555 - Nov 22, 2008 -
USC Short question - swimming activity

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UndergraduateFYI - Nov 22, 2008 -
Grandparents had spent great portion of their hard earned saving to buy house and car for their son

3 - Thank you so much for your advice. I will definitely work harder for more improvement....

Undergraduatelayaili - Nov 20, 2008layaili - Nov 22, 2008
The book Ishmael - An Idea on a thesis and introduction

8 - You're welcome :) "In the book Ishmael, written by Daniel Quinn, Ishmael consistently shows how our civilized society...

Book Reportsboonster - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
essay about experience

6 - I think it's great in regards to content and readability; your organization and structure look good as well. The...

Undergraduatem5456 - Nov 20, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
The Super Student, a person who had an influence on me - admission essay

4 - Michael Driscoll is my name. I thought I would put a little twist on the essay by writing it...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008eagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008
Cross Country; most exhilarating experience; Extracurricular Activity

2 - Good afternoon :) "For me, Cross CountryThese are not proper nouns and shouldn't be capitalized. has been one...

Undergraduateeagle6002 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life

2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...

Writing FeedbackTMcGee - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Jackie essay - Demolish my essay or work with it.

3 - I think if you explain to your audience that responsibility is reflected in your life now, that will be...

Undergraduatejenchow1992 - Nov 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Graduate Essay-Why do we need a Semiotic Methodology of Theatre? UNFINISHED

2 - Good afternoon :) As this is not within my area of expertise, I have made comments in regards...

Graduatecarlajayne - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
UC prompt 1---multiculture in school and my contribution

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Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Columbia / prudent adventurer ~~~I need suggestion~

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Undergraduateester1213 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"striving to major in a certain area" - UC prompt 1 - i need help

2 - Good afternoon :) First, a mechanical suggestion: avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "wouldn't" should be...

Undergraduatekewlliljethro - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
"MC in Valentines Day event" - UC transfer applicants prompt #1

2 - Good afternoon :) I have edited the first section and then provided some more general comments in regards...

Undergraduategalz - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
My Team, This is who I am. Prompt two.

2 - I have edited the first section and then given you some general comments in regards to the rest of...

UndergraduateAndrewessay - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
I had my first experience in sales and merchandising ; FIT App

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Undergraduatesaemilee517 - Nov 21, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Global Warming Phenomenon- Research Paper

5 - I really like your introduction; it is catchy, and it lays out a path for the rest of the...

Research PapersSergioc1 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
'Curiosity in mathematics and science' - University of Rochester

2 - "The education facilities there provide stellar academic programs related to the sciences in a cordial environment. Should I decide...

Undergraduatequack09 - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
Field of Linguistics, anyone?

6 - I absolutely do. Try to get as much English exposure as you can. Do you have anything like a...

Dissertationsmikitung - Nov 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 21, 2008
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