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"... becoming Superman" - FSU Essay..last one I promise

NEW - And last but not least the FSU essay. Like before, all help most appreciated. Thank you! As a...

Undergraduatebeckerb33 - Oct 9, 2008 -
passion for a particular subject or a cause Univerity of Delaware APP essay

NEW - Have you discovered your passion for a particular subject or a cause? I walked into the exhibit early,...

Undergraduateoxomelissaoxo91 - Oct 9, 2008 -
"An for an eye will make the whole world blind" - Method of punishing criminals

NEW - Topic: By punishing murderers with the death penalty, society is also guilt of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison...

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 9, 2008 -
"million thoughts to pressure me" - FSU essay intro comments/suggestions

2 - That's cool you're a Christian too! I'm applying to FSU as well. It's my top choice. :) That's so...

Undergraduatepilla2008 - Oct 9, 2008beccaboo3290 - Oct 9, 2008
"...constant fighting of my parents" - UCF essay number two

NEW - This is my second UCF essay on How my family history, culture or environment influenced me. As before, please...

Undergraduatebeckerb33 - Oct 9, 2008 -
Your activities - common app personal statement - 3 to choose from

NEW - In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words...

UndergraduateBD26 - Oct 9, 2008 -
which airplane flies the farthest- science report

NEW - This is my science report I just need to make sure the grammar and writing make sense. Thank you....

Writing Feedbackrnc3333 - Oct 9, 2008 -
"My mother's diagnosis" - admission essay --Vires

NEW - The Florida State University motto "Vires, Artes, Mores" focuses on strength, the arts, and tradition. Each of these values...

Undergraduatehannah45 - Oct 9, 2008 -
Compare two poems: Love Poems from Spain vs Raven, Annabel Lee

3 - Thanks! I am working on the presentation now and will send it to you for review....

Poetryirishcol25 - Oct 8, 2008irishcol25 - Oct 9, 2008
Argumentative essay - Rich and poor children - school work

4 - Good morning. You're welcome; good luck! I think it's a great idea for international students to study...

Writing FeedbackThuyChi - Oct 5, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 9, 2008
My moral strength: parents and my Catholic education -FSU application essay

3 - Thanks so much for your feedback. I really appreicate it!...

Undergraduatepencil - Oct 8, 2008pencil - Oct 8, 2008
"The Treble and the Bass" - No prompt, just me rambling

6 - I think it would be a good thing to hand in as an extra; I don't think it's appropriate...

UndergraduateJustJoshinbyJ - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
ARTISTIC TALENT; UCF- Unique characteristics and qualities

2 - Good evening. The beginning is difficult because right now it is confusing; it does not match up with...

Undergraduatehicckups - Oct 8, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Purpose in undertaking graduate study in a particular program - grad essay

8 - I'm glad I could help. Once you have revised, please note however, that per our TOS I can only...

Graduatehellsnyc - Sep 19, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
"swimming season" - FSU vires and mores

4 - You could add a couple of lines regarding this to the middle of the essay, but I would not...

Undergraduatemeganwhitehurst - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
Essay on what you read (Plato, Machiavelli)

2 - Your conclusion should be a wrap-up of your essay. You could quickly rephrase each of these three philosophies and...

Writing Feedbackwordlesstu - Oct 8, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
"Vires, Artes, Mores" each been reflected in my life ; Froeign student from Brazil

NEW - The Latin words "Vires, Artes, Mores" have each been reflected in my life in some way or another. These...

Undergraduatelecokr - Oct 8, 2008 -
Toefl Essay - approach to problem-solving- How it works for you?

NEW - What is your approach to problem-solving, and how does it work for you? Every problem will have a solution....

Writing Feedbacktoefl_guy - Oct 8, 2008 -
"Genetic influences" - i need help with my psychology essay

3 - Hi Gloria thankyou for getting back to me, i think you are right i will speak to my instructor...

Essayssusanjo76 - Oct 8, 2008susanjo76 - Oct 8, 2008
Education superiority,Cultural variety,Lively student life, Location; Why Lehigh U?

NEW - Question: As you researches and visited colleges and universitys, why did you decided to apply to Lehigh? Please give...

Undergraduatejunma314 - Oct 8, 2008 -
Museum Studies Admission Essay - Syracuse University

4 - Good morning. I don't know if it "lacks personality" but it is "purely business." These prompts are designed...

Graduateluskak96 - Oct 2, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 8, 2008
UC ADMISSION ESSAY: YOSEMITE NATIONAL PARK

2 - Thank You for fixing the grammatical errors. "hoping to find something closure" At first, I was trying to make...

Undergraduatealexteele - Oct 6, 2008alexteele - Oct 7, 2008
College application -brainstorming- advice

3 - Thank you very much for you help :) i will follow those suggestions and then submit it so i...

Undergraduatelilfred333 - Oct 6, 2008lilfred333 - Oct 7, 2008
UCF - Unique characteristic (perseverance and dedication)

3 - Thank you very much!...

Undergraduatelexoticstylez02 - Oct 7, 2008lexoticstylez02 - Oct 7, 2008
"The Soldier's Duty" - Argumentive Photo Essay need help with more Ideas

6 - Sealion Please contact this member off-forum, via their email or other contact information provided in their membership information....

Writing Feedbackbabydoll - Mar 22, 2008Sealion - Oct 7, 2008
Krushi- The Inspiration to Inspire - Common App Essay- Topic 1

8 - Hello, I like, "...seemed so unreal." That's probably the most apt word. And I think I will keep...

Undergraduatesreekar - Oct 5, 2008sreekar - Oct 7, 2008
"Bump in the road" for UCF

NEW - I was hoping you could look over this and tell me what you think, as well as making and...

Undergraduatebeckerb33 - Oct 7, 2008 -
Tattoos essay: Our Newest Problem?

4 - You will need to return to the places where you originally found the information. For each of the facts...

Writing Feedbacksilent - Oct 6, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
UCF essay - "the beautiful pieces of art set up around me"

2 - Good afternoon. You have a very organized, well written essay here. Your paragraphs are properly structured, you use...

Undergraduatemegan1407 - Oct 7, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
Conflict at a personal level essay - Need help for opening para

6 - Good afternoon. If the assignment is to analyze the effects of these things on your life, there is...

Essaysrick02 - Jul 15, 2008EF_Team5 - Oct 7, 2008
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