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Time in Terelj - descriptive essay

4 - Greetings! I think your opening paragraph lacks cohesiveness. It's rather "all over the place." The first sentence sounds...

Undergraduateokuna - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
'My Friend Moni' - this is my first descriptive essay for grade

4 - Greetings! Sometimes when we have been working intensely on a piece of writing, it can be difficult to...

Writing FeedbackMagstar0202 - Feb 20, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 21, 2007
William Osler - Can someone edit my introduction

10 - Greetings! I know it is difficult when you have an instructor who sees things entirely differently from you...

Writing Feedbackaznpoo - Feb 17, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"Swimming or Floating" - need help to locate my comma splices and fused sentences.

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting and engaging essay! You're right that your sentences could use a bit...

Writing Feedbackcsneed1677 - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
Monetary Policy Paper - Is this okay... thank you

3 - Greetings! I'd be happy to give you some feedback: First of all, while there's technically nothing wrong...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 19, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
parenthetical citing help

4 - Greetings! How parenthetical citations are formatted depends on whether you are using APA, MLA, or some other form...

Grammar, Usageeltron - Feb 18, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 20, 2007
"The Bargain" ; John strikes a bargain with a beggar to replace each other

3 - Thanks for the help. I'm currently taking a break to celebrate CNY(i'm singaporean, and i don't think american/british english...

Writing Feedbackyongen_92 - Feb 18, 2007yongen_92 - Feb 19, 2007
Essay about the disappointments you faced in life

3 - The first disappointment which I faced was when i first knew that my mother had cancer. Tears welled in...

Writing Feedbackaysha - Feb 7, 2007aznpoo - Feb 18, 2007
I know personally how enriching studying abroad can be.

4 - Thank you so much Sarah. Having a pro review my essay and give me feedback is absolutely priceless. ...

Undergraduatepash_fashion - Feb 17, 2007pash_fashion - Feb 18, 2007
Summer in a Mongolian place

3 - What you need is a motivator to capture the reader attention, sure it is great you went to all...

UndergraduateSergelen - Feb 11, 2007aznpoo - Feb 17, 2007
What specific goals do you hope to achieve? - Scholarship Essay

NEW - The question is, What specific goals do you hope to achieve at Western Oregon University to help you succeed...

Scholarshipedtrussell - Feb 16, 2007 -
A constant topic among political discussions is the extent of Gvt Responsibility

2 - Greetings! You have written an interesting essay! I have just a few editing suggestions to offer: Change...

Writing Feedbackkendra - Feb 15, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 16, 2007
The Last Minute: How to Write Good Essays When Time is Short?

NEW - Almost everyone who has attended high school or university has found themselves staring down a deadline that approached them...

EssaysEF_Team - Feb 15, 2007 -
What is needed in an analytical essay?

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! Here are some elements normally contained in the analytical essay: 1. Summarize...

Essaysjesusalreadywon - Feb 11, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
8-paragraph compare & contrast essay

5 - Thanks so much for all the help. KingTiger...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Feb 10, 2007KingTiger - Feb 12, 2007
[working in series, painting] - SAIC statement of purpose

2 - Greetings! I think you've written an excellent essay here! I think you do a fabulous job of describing...

Undergraduatevegetablenazi - Feb 12, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 12, 2007
The Majestic Camping Trip; Narrative essay

NEW - Need a little feedback on narrative essay please The Majestic Camping Trip To this day when I...

Writing Feedbackjhogan - Feb 10, 2007 -
College Journal - English Class / Society Living

NEW - Plz Help to Revise These Two Journals. Thank you! 1) The English-121 is my first course that taken...

Writing Feedbackryan - Feb 10, 2007 -
The big difference - book report

2 - Greetings! First of all, take a de-e-e-e-p breath!! You're going to be just fine! :-)) The difference...

Book ReportsMarieBee - Feb 8, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2007
China, Mexico, USA - "what culture do I identify myself with?"

NEW - I once said to myself, "what culture do I identify myself with?" I never knew the answer to that...

Writing Feedbackasianbm - Feb 4, 2007 -
Comparison of past thirty years of special education

5 - Fantastic!! I'm so glad!!! You are very, very welcome! Sarah...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jan 30, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
My most recent discovery is Japanese music, J-ROCK

5 - Greetings! OK, let's take these questions in order. First of all, yes, "abnormality" is a word, and you...

Writing FeedbackMissHiwatari - Feb 3, 2007EF_Team2 - Feb 4, 2007
Paper on Immortality

3 - HI I really need help, I am just no good at essay writing, and its due Monday, our assignment...

Essayshelpme101 - Nov 16, 2006pamurphy - Feb 3, 2007
Describe a potential classmate you believe you could learn from

5 - Actually, it would be better if you create a new topic - either way, we'll be able to assist...

Writing Feedbackrang555 - Jan 31, 2007EF_Team - Jan 31, 2007
Looking for alternatives. 6-paragraph cause & effect essay

2 - Looking for alternatives Oil production in the United states peaked in 1970. when will it peak world wide who...

Writing FeedbackKingTiger - Jan 30, 2007KingTiger - Jan 30, 2007
Application to The University Of Mary Washington 250-500 words

3 - thanks a ton for the quick feedback Sarah, I really appreciate it, and the changes you suggested are being...

UndergraduateAzap - Jan 29, 2007Azap - Jan 30, 2007
struggling with admission essay question.

2 - Greetings! These are good questions! I think a paragraph on your strengths, with examples to back them up,...

UndergraduatejimmyD88 - Jan 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Genocide Essay

2 - Greetings! Well, you certainly make some valid points here! You don't say what the exact assignment was. I'm...

Writing Feedbackanf3rnee - Jan 28, 2007EF_Team2 - Jan 28, 2007
Essay on out-of-town shopping centres

3 - thank you, I will change that....

Writing FeedbackTheGeek - Jan 28, 2007TheGeek - Jan 28, 2007
History Paper on Revolutions

3 - Thank you, Sarah! The points were very helpful!...

Writing Feedbackrollagasper - Jan 27, 2007rollagasper - Jan 28, 2007
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