dumi
Dec 6, 2013
Graduate / SOP/Master in Public Health:Infectious Disease and Vaccinology [3]
... I don't understand what you meant by " lots of rest if possible" :( Better rephrase this part.
.... are you referring to migrant Chinese living in America?
Well... you describe the background well, but very less is said about how your passion for this field developed. I wish you said more about that because you need to show them that you have a real interest in this field and you continued to pursue your interest.
The medications were always herbal remedies and lots of rest if possible.
... I don't understand what you meant by " lots of rest if possible" :( Better rephrase this part.
In addition, to everyone's knowledge doctors are similar to car mechanics back in China so they assumed likewise here in America.
.... are you referring to migrant Chinese living in America?
Well... you describe the background well, but very less is said about how your passion for this field developed. I wish you said more about that because you need to show them that you have a real interest in this field and you continued to pursue your interest.