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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: The reasons of migration to capital city in a particular country (2000 - 2015)

2 - While the writer wrote more than the expected word count, he did not properly format the paragraph presentations. A...

Writing Feedbackdungphuong - Sep 6, 2022Holt - Sep 6, 2022
IELTS: WRITING TASK 1. THE TOTAL VALUE AND SOURCES OF FISH IMPORTED TO THE US

2 - This report presentation will immediately receive a failing score due to the incorrect response format. It is missing the...

Writing Feedbackjxss - Sep 6, 2022Holt - Sep 6, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : THE BENEFITS AND RISKS OF WATCHING TELEVISION FOR CHILDREN

2 - As there are several practice essays related to the topic of television and its effect on children, it would...

Writing Feedbacksofianur23 - Sep 5, 2022Holt - Sep 5, 2022
GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT - DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION.

4 - I feel English is not your first language. Please get it reviewed by some professional whi can help you...

ScholarshipOlisan19 - Sep 4, 2022Tan18 - Sep 9, 2022
Finding Insight, Purpose and Potential in Chaos_QuestBridge Biographical Essay

2 - The camper van lifestyle should be held together by a beginning. How did the family end up that way?...

Undergraduatecmakenna - Sep 4, 2022Holt - Sep 4, 2022
The line graph gives data about four sectors in terms of the amount of acid rain emissions in the UK

2 - The writer uses long sentences with combined information presentations too often in this essay. It creates a cluttered presentation...

Writing Feedbacklinhkn - Sep 4, 2022Holt - Sep 4, 2022
IELTS writing task 2 - Pros and cons of taking a gap year; give reasons and relevant examples

2 - The prompt restatement is acceptable and serves its purpose of delivering an originally worded version of the original topic....

Writing Feedbackngori - Sep 4, 2022Holt - Sep 4, 2022
TOEFL Writing Essay: 'young people to follow and obey' - I'd really appreciate if you rate my essay

3 - you make a lot of redundant in certain worlds such as early and life. Try to use paraphrase it....

Writing FeedbackNegarsf - Sep 3, 2022sofianur23 - Sep 5, 2022
Write a letter in reply to the tourism office advertisement

2 - The writer has mostly problems with writing sentences in English. He often loses track of who is speaking and...

Lettersntminh720 - Sep 3, 2022Holt - Sep 4, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 1 . The process details the process of making smoked fish

2 - The summary overview should be composed of at least 2 sentences. The presentation lacks a proper diagram identification which...

Writing Feedbacknataliely - Sep 3, 2022Holt - Sep 4, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Industrial area maps

2 - The writer is confusing the image references. First he indicates the plural form of maps, which is correct since...

Writing Feedbackjiminpark - Sep 2, 2022Holt - Sep 2, 2022
"My life the way i want it" GKS-U Scholarship Personal Statement

6 - @Opeyemichristy Hello!! thank you for your advice! I will work on it! do not have many extracurriculars about my...

Scholarshipleo0528 - Sep 2, 2022leo0528 - Sep 7, 2022
The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers in Mauritius from 1985 to

2 - The summary overview is based on individual sentence requirements. That means, it follows the one sentence, one idea structure....

Writing FeedbackHarry26 - Sep 2, 2022Holt - Sep 2, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Housing and accommodation - buying or renting?)

2 - The writer has a fixation on referencing a time frame although none is mentioned in the first topic version....

Writing Feedbackbadiep0710 - Sep 1, 2022Holt - Sep 2, 2022
Strong people - GKS-U personal statement, major- cse.

4 - The guidelines has already told what to writes in the essay, if you can't really grasp what the guidelines...

ScholarshipMansii - Sep 1, 2022Olisan19 - Sep 3, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 (Environmental problems from human harmful activities)

4 - I think you miss the task achievement because the requirement is to discuss the two views given but you...

Writing FeedbackTuandepzai - Sep 1, 2022sofianur23 - Sep 8, 2022
Personal Statement for Graduate Enrollment (Astronomy Major)

2 - You are asking me to do the impossible here. I need to know what the writing instructions are for...

Graduategoldeniseu - Sep 1, 2022Holt - Sep 1, 2022
Essay on social responsibilities that organisations have (beside generating profit)

2 - Do not exaggerate the prompt restatement. There is no argument presented so it is incorrect to refer to the...

Writing Feedbacklucynnnn - Sep 1, 2022Holt - Sep 1, 2022
WT1 process: the diagram illustrates how sugar is generated from sugar cane

2 - The essay is too short to be considered for full scoring considerations. Providing only the minimum word count will...

Writing Feedbackcongpvppro - Sep 1, 2022Holt - Sep 1, 2022
Motivation with which you apply for this program / GKS U 2023 / Economics major

2 - This is a good start. The presentation is on track with the motivation aspect and the reason why the...

ScholarshipPrity03 - Sep 1, 2022Holt - Sep 1, 2022
Fascination by hardware and software. Motivation Letter for applying to a master proramme

2 - The writer has developed a friendly letter of introduction. It does not reflect the necessary information requirements for a...

Lettersaseil - Aug 31, 2022Holt - Aug 31, 2022
I am interested in Kpop. 2023 GKS-U language study plan to improve foreign languages.

6 - I agree with @Mowa. The mention of Kpop might be a phrase/ statement used by so many applicants. I...

ScholarshipHannakei - Aug 31, 2022Pettypet - Sep 22, 2022
The Association - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP ESSAY

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback! I will definitely try to use a progressive leadership focus. One...

ScholarshipIPKAT - Aug 30, 2022IPKAT - Aug 31, 2022
Ielts writing task 2 - Technology (The question is be written below)

4 - On the other hand, expeditious internet dissemination will be a fertile breeding ground for gaining knowledge if all the...

Writing FeedbackPear - Aug 28, 2022jacquelinearriz - Sep 11, 2022
Accessing news - [IELTS writing task 1] - pie chart

2 - The first thing you have to note about a task 1 essay is that it is unnecessary and actually...

Writing Feedbackwonderws - Aug 28, 2022Holt - Aug 28, 2022
Participation in education and science - Writing task 1 - Bar chart

2 - The writing instruction can be vague aboutthe image reference. It can give oonly a general description since the examiner...

Writing Feedbacktuiladoanh - Aug 28, 2022Holt - Aug 28, 2022
Research Proposal for Sociology Master Degree in Japan University

3 - @Holt Thanks for your suggestion, it's really helpful to me to notice some critical point....

Research Papersjane_g - Aug 27, 2022jane_g - Aug 28, 2022
IELTS - Writing task 2 - Allow children to make their own choices will turn them into selfish person

2 - The first error that must be addressed in this essay is the over-writing. 402 words is 102 words over...

Writing FeedbackDolia - Aug 27, 2022Holt - Aug 28, 2022
More and more people tend to obtain knowledge at home instead of going to schools or extra classes

2 - The prompt restatement is confusing. It incorrectly implies that children and adults both benefit from attending school online. '...

Writing Feedbackllkngocc - Aug 27, 2022Holt - Aug 28, 2022
People are living in a 'throwaway society' using things for a short time and then throwing them away

2 - This is only a 4 paragraph essay that the writer has opted to try to (unsuccessfully) expand to a...

Writing Feedbackchanyeol2711 - Aug 27, 2022Holt - Aug 27, 2022
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