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Picture of Dorian Gray literary essay; Dorian's Internal Suicide

5 - Thanks, essay is handed in. I hope it receives a decent mark. Kevin thanks for your comments....

Book ReportsDariusVassel15 - Nov 1, 2009DariusVassel15 - Nov 6, 2009
Stanford Supplement Essay: Personal Narrative on career decision

2 - You know, what my first thought was? I thought, I would not want my surgery to be performed by...

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"The Fusion of Psychology and Music In My Life" - Cornell Prompt

3 - try phrasing this differently. perhaps be more specific on what achievements your motivation has led you to. ...

UndergraduateILUxpssh - Nov 1, 2009angie127 - Nov 1, 2009
interesting or amusing story about yourself - UGA prompt

8 - The first response is a little formal, you want to make sure the colleges get to know you, not...

Undergraduatealam889 - Nov 1, 2009mle2010 - Nov 12, 2009
Obsession with time - Stanford Roomate short essay response

5 - This can sometimes become problematic, as I find just relaxing extremely difficult. Lots of people find relaxing difficult....

Undergraduatekart00cj - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
Arguementative/Persuasive essay on camping

2 - How about "camping can take many forms" instead of "definitions?" Camping to one person can mean seclusion in...

Writing Feedbackbrianw - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"My Mission Trip" - UF prompt

3 - Graciously , I walked over to ... I think you should also talk about the part time job...

Undergraduatelilminkzmayb - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 4, 2009
"The non-athletic guy" - Common App Personal Essay

2 - I think its very conversational which is always a plus in a essay. It's witty and really does talk...

UndergraduateSignifica - Nov 1, 2009sopheebliss - Nov 1, 2009
a six month old embryo in a jar...? personal statement

7 - Bravo!! The revised version is very good. im not the smartest cookie but ill try hah:) The only things...

Undergraduatejpg_76 - Nov 1, 2009damnsam - Nov 24, 2009
My answers for some application profile questions

5 - Thanks you three, I'll get to tweaking my first statement...

UndergraduatetheAbraham - Nov 1, 2009theAbraham - Nov 6, 2009
"More than meets the eye" - essay for Chicago U.

4 - ^Because...that is a unique ability, as most people fail to make eye contact during a conversation? Overall,...

Undergraduatelisandrag - Nov 1, 2009Liebe - Nov 4, 2009
Chinese Chess - Stanford Intellectual Vitality Essay. Currently overlength )):

3 - fifteen instead of 15. Don't say "under me," because it sounds a little haughty. I think you...

Undergraduatezhangyitao - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'Project WORTHY'. I need to cut some of this UIUC essay down, can you help?

9 - The first paragraph is identical as is the last. The second paragraph is better served by the second version...

Undergraduateanuj1450 - Nov 1, 2009Mustafa1991 - Nov 3, 2009
How to write an Essay Proposal?

2 - Well, if your class requires you to write this proposal, probably a rubric is provided with grading criteria... right?...

EssaysOptical24 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
UF Admissions Essay- continuity and grammar questions..

4 - My first impression of your essay was defined by the second word that you chose: aberrant. It sounds a...

Undergraduatejwatson - Nov 1, 2009abutler5 - Nov 5, 2009
Singapore food - Your roommate to be - Stanford Roomate Essay

7 - Hi Zhang Yi! Great work on this essay! There is something that is so refreshingly effortless and authentic...

Undergraduatezhangyitao - Nov 1, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 1, 2009
"what to gain from diversity"-UM prompt 2

3 - I think a lot of people would agree that those first sentences are not necessary. But... I really like...

Undergraduatebmore1991 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Meaingful interest- UM prompt #5

3 - This is an idea I had: Off in the distance, the world around me seemed to have stopped....

Essaysbmore1991 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
"a helping hand" college essay

10 - You might want to explain this meningitis encephalitis. Maybe it's just me, but I have no idea what kind...

Undergraduatebecca3924 - Nov 1, 2009HelpPls - Nov 16, 2009
My Cello - playing on it is my most challenging, but most rewarding personal activity.

3 - Playing the cello is my most challenging, but most rewarding personal activity. Sometimes, I practice anywhere from thirty minutes...

Undergraduatebyflash - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
World of knowledge, digital art

4 - Sorry I did not get here in time to help. I think you should not, in the future, use...

Undergraduatehdirt1 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Common App Short Essay about Tennis help

4 - I really love tennis and have played for my town's team since I was 11 so I can understand...

UndergraduateJKarma14 - Nov 1, 2009linmark - Nov 12, 2009
Duke Supplement: Why Duke?

3 - Hi there! I actually love this essay! Paragraph 1 feels honest and authentic (esp. the 'I play golf!'...

Undergraduatecdrappi - Nov 1, 2009ivyeyesediting - Nov 2, 2009
Bringing attributes of Determination and time management to UF

2 - Oh, this part is very good!! ----> As the youngest child, I had the advantage... I think you...

Undergraduatepenutsmurf - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Two Statements - life experiences, perspectives, talents, commitments

2 - Write a sentence about what you were doing instead of focusing on school. If you were passionate about something...

Undergraduateohmygoodness - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Common Application Volleyball essay; My family is notoriously terrible at sports

4 - In the last paragraphs, reflect on experiencing moments of extreme focus, meditative, similar to your other passion, which is...

Undergraduatesmallfry320 - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
'Immigrant to the United States'; I did my best to avoid alienating from my American peers

5 - Don't end with that "good tings come in small packages," because it weakens your essay. Your essay is very...

Undergraduatemadmadiah - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
The View out my Widndow and what it means

2 - If you want to talk about meandering, use commas: As I meander into the kitchen, I glance through...

Writing Feedbackperejdam - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Diversity Essay-Illustrating the value of diversity in my life.

3 - In the beginning, I think it is impressive that you talk about globalization as something that makes out fates...

Undergraduateperejdam - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
Common App Essay: Choose your own topic: Poker as a conceit to life

2 - I think it might be more powerful without putting " " marks around "play a hand." "His heart...

Undergraduated3adma - Nov 1, 2009EF_Kevin - Nov 3, 2009
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