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Fr. Julian: Common App- influential person essay.

3 - Thank you for your time and revisions. Andrew...

Undergraduateacorbett19 - Nov 14, 2008acorbett19 - Nov 16, 2008
(moved to Florida - bump in the road) + why UCS (campus and stadium)

2 - "My self" is one word: "myself." Avoid using the pronoun "you" in formal academic writing. Try using "me,"...

Undergraduatetheblackmaria6 - Nov 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
Short Answer-extracurricula activities

NEW - Please write between 250 and 500 words to describe a special interest, significant experience or achievement, or anything else...

Undergraduatehelenalqy - Nov 14, 2008 -
'Helper and people lover / procrastination' - two UCF essays

2 - Good afternoon :) Mechanically, only three suggestions: first, make sure when you are making a list to include...

Undergraduatebeccaboo3290 - Nov 14, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
Common App Short Essay - Extracurriculars

NEW - Could someone please read the following essay for content (does it show enough personality), correct usage of words, and...

Undergraduatevaibhav2614 - Nov 14, 2008 -
Describe a personal service experience in your high school or community

2 - Good afternoon :) Your essay is a bit technical; perhaps you can counter this by shifting the focus...

Undergraduatepixiegirl - Nov 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
Fort Lee school, Rutgers undergraduate essay

2 - Make sure you are using proper linking verbs and article adjectives, such as "is," "the," "a," and "are" to...

Undergraduatembhong - Nov 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
cohesive, successful, and supportive campus community? Essay for LU

3 - Thank you very much for your help....

Undergraduatevpro - Nov 13, 2008vpro - Nov 13, 2008
UC Santa Barbara Application: Prompt #1

4 - this piece is nicely done. it is a touchy story...

Undergraduatebwood - Nov 13, 2008cielov - Nov 24, 2008
Compare and contrast two poems or songs focusing on sound and rhythm

4 - Hi Danielle, I'm not really sure about the format that you should be following for such an assignment,...

PoetryCharter1 - Nov 13, 2008Athena - Mar 8, 2012
What makes you different and how do you stand out? - Topic of My Choice

NEW - as for topic of my choice, i decided to write on how i was different from everyone else ...

Undergraduatevkwang - Nov 13, 2008 -
Stonybrook Essay - Rising Stars

3 - Thank You so much. I'm sorry for not stating what i needed help with but i was just basically...

Undergraduatenybabygrl - Nov 13, 2008nybabygrl - Nov 13, 2008
Footnote/endnote - citing internet source

4 - nd.edu/~sheridan/AmerAntiquitCitationStyle.pdf I wish I could help you more! Citation styles are hard to learn. I know MLA, APA...

Grammar, Usagebip - Nov 13, 2008EF_Kevin - Nov 18, 2009
I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion

4 - Good afternoon :) I'm not sure I understand, but I'll give it a try. How about: "Official...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
Children should grow in big cities

3 - Thank u very much!!!...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008Asselya - Nov 14, 2008
"cars in the 1950's" - i need a push start with this paper

2 - Good afternoon. I suggest you begin with a rough outline, not right off with the introduction. After all,...

Research Paperspokerchip - Nov 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 13, 2008
Travel is in a group led by a tour guide may be expensive

2 - Good afternoon :) Because you did not describe what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 13, 2008
Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not

NEW - good morning. could you help me to assess this essay, please? Thank you so much. Topic in details;...

Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 13, 2008 -
"think of the children." - Issue of Importance to You -- UT Essay B

3 - Thanks so much Gloria! I really appreciate it....

UndergraduateDarthrosenberg0 - Nov 13, 2008Darthrosenberg0 - Nov 13, 2008
The best advance of the twentieth century - college essay prompt

4 - Thanks for clearing that up :) This topic sounds like it just wants you to explain why you...

Essaysluv4evr - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
'Like the milk' - common app essay-- diversity topic draft

NEW - Needing feedback on draft of Common App Essay topic "Given your personal background, describe an experience that illustrates what...

Undergraduateatiedemann - Nov 12, 2008 -
Describe interests, their evolution and what makes them exciting (college)

NEW - Hi...I'm sorry for posting another essay...but i need some advice and help with editing it--mechanically and whether or not...

Undergraduatepixiegirl - Nov 12, 2008 -
UMich - Engineering short answer

2 - Good afternoon :) As you did not describe what kind of assistance you were seeking, I have made...

UndergraduateBeast53 - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 13, 2008
'diagnosed with leukemia' -Common App: Person who has impacted me.

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, avoid using contractions in formal academic writing. In regards to content, I think this...

Undergraduatemurf5 - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
'Italian families / Mother's cancer' - UCF Admission Essays

3 - Thank you so much for your positive feedback! Sincerely, Knightgirl...

UndergraduateKnightgirl - Nov 12, 2008Knightgirl - Nov 12, 2008
Libby applies to FS University - FSU Undergraduate Essay

2 - Good evening :) I suggest you begin with a rough outline, not right off with the introduction. After...

UndergraduateLibbystidham - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
"I'm smart, because I'm Asian" - uc prompt #2

NEW - Hi again this is the 2nd prompt and I need help proof reading it (grammar, spelling,etc) and does it...

Undergraduateim1dork - Nov 12, 2008 -
Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?

NEW - Good day to you. Could you please help me to assess my essay? Thank you very much! Topic...

Writing Feedbacklayaili - Nov 12, 2008 -
"just do it because it's best for you"; My intended major - UC personal statement (transfer student)

2 - Good evening. "Growing up I always challenged my mother when she said her infamous line, "J ust do...

Undergraduateim1dork - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
Invisible Children (sociology essay)

2 - Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the Invisible Children"...

Writing Feedbackbgibson8708 - Nov 12, 2008EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
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