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Motivation Letter for embedded systems master program ...

3 - @Holt thank you for your help .. I will take this into consideration while rewriting the letter....

Lettersaseilattia - Dec 26, 2022aseilattia - Dec 27, 2022
Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum for MSc in Agricultural Biotechnology

5 - @tuanb2610 Thank you! Your words give me strength....

LettersFR8899 - Dec 26, 2022FR8899 - Jan 3, 2023
Without Economics - my UK personal statement. How can I improve it?

2 - This is nota thought that just pops into one's head. You should go back further into establishing this....

Undergraduatetenebris - Dec 26, 2022Holt - Dec 26, 2022
Motivation Letter for MS Data Science & AI (Specific Instructions)

3 - Hi, Thank you for comments. I have done courses from Coursera & Udemy though I couldn't go for...

GraduateBlackBeard31 - Dec 25, 2022BlackBeard31 - Dec 26, 2022
[Writing Ielts Task 2] The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress.

3 - I am also studying for the IELTS, and I can hardly imagine a candidate who can write a 440...

Writing FeedbackABC2519 - Dec 25, 2022Sunny0629 - Jan 7, 2023
Master Robotics - Statement of purpose for Graduate Schools

2 - This should be expanded in the presentation. Use this reference to explain your possible thesis and how doing...

Graduatehomeless131 - Dec 25, 2022Holt - Dec 26, 2022
Loss of plants and animals vs other major environmental issues

3 - Thank you for the feedback. Will definitely work on identified mistakes. Could you please provide me with a band...

Writing Feedbackumers - Dec 25, 2022umers - Dec 26, 2022
Letter of Motivation for Hydrology and Geological Risk Engineering

2 - Since this is a motivation letter, the information it provides should have a backward flow. Present the information in...

Lettersnaqvisyed - Dec 24, 2022Holt - Dec 25, 2022
New experiences versus daily routines

2 - Good work on the restatement using 2 topic sentences. These were very clear reinterpretations that showed accurate English comprehension...

Writing Feedbacklong_hoangeiu - Dec 24, 2022Holt - Dec 24, 2022
Life today is unhealthier than in the past century. Do you agree or disagree? (IELTS)

3 - Grammatical errors and wrong word usage No defined thesis statement The point in your paragraph three is not well...

Writing FeedbackZhani - Dec 23, 2022Exceptional - Dec 26, 2022
GKS-U Medicine Study Plan - 2024

3 - In fact, I'm lost as to the fact of what is considered appropriate to put in a study plan....

Undergraduatebvalkyrianzz - Dec 23, 2022bvalkyrianzz - Dec 23, 2022
Childlish dreams - mathematics

4 - @elanour65 @Holt thank you very much...

Undergraduatenschaakk - Dec 22, 2022nschaakk - Dec 23, 2022
[Writing Task 1] Statistics about branches of banks and financial institutions in Nepal in 2019

2 - I must point out an evident error that has appeared twice now in your task 1 writing presentations. You...

Writing Feedbackhanablaaaa - Dec 22, 2022Holt - Dec 23, 2022
The percentage of population in cities IELTS Writing task 1

4 - - You use some words many time. + increase : rise / a rise, climb/ a climb, grow/ a...

Writing Feedbackyenvoo - Dec 22, 2022nataliely - Dec 29, 2022
Global Issues - ACADEMIC OBJECTIVES AND INDICATE HOW THESE ARE APPROPRIATE TO YOUR LONG-RANGE GOALS.

4 - Try to be a little more genuine. Although it is very well written, I think you do not need...

Scholarshipanaluglii - Dec 21, 2022bvalkyrianzz - Dec 22, 2022
LETTER OF MOTIVATION for Water and Geological Risk Engineering

3 - @Holt Noted sir. Could you find any other mistakes in it?...

Lettersmunimjaffer - Dec 21, 2022munimjaffer - Dec 23, 2022
Learning languages but Participating - study plan - Korea scholarship

2 - While the essay is freeflowing and easy reading, it does not really relate clear information in relation to the...

Undergraduateminhhanhkcm - Dec 20, 2022Holt - Dec 21, 2022
Concentrate on only a single skill - IELTS Wrtiting TASK 2

3 - they had no income from offline classes for several weeks, and the reason is that the only job they...

Writing FeedbackDuyPham - Dec 19, 2022Thaithao47 - Dec 21, 2022
Power generation (IELTS writing task2 2 part question)

2 - Incorrect statement. It is not implied but rather stated as a fact in the original prompt. Try to...

Writing FeedbackThaithao47 - Dec 19, 2022Holt - Dec 20, 2022
Leadership Essay Chevening - Sustainable Fashion

2 - I would not refer to modern slavery in this discussion. The screener is not interested in controversial topics. most...

Scholarshipdalrashid - Dec 19, 2022Holt - Dec 19, 2022
Oman and Spain population age ratios in 2005 and predictions for 2055 - IELTS Writing Task 1

3 - - "Predictive data accurately half a century later " this phrase is so long and vague => You should...

Writing FeedbackHanNguyen4869 - Dec 19, 2022nataliely - Dec 29, 2022
Do I have to introduce myself in study plan?

2 - You have to introduce your possible masters thesis topic in the study plan. If required, you may also discuss...

Essaysbvalkyrianzz - Dec 18, 2022Holt - Dec 19, 2022
Bachelor's degree in computer science - scholarship essay for UK universities

2 - There are 2 aspects of this essay that need to be addressed. The first is the section about the...

Scholarshipitachi99 - Dec 18, 2022Holt - Dec 18, 2022
Advantages of reading books

4 - You could proofread with a grammar checker online to frame your sentence structure correctly. Would also suggest paragraphing your...

Writing FeedbackChouchou292 - Dec 18, 2022Exceptional - Dec 20, 2022
NTU Scholarship Essay - Personal Importance - Belief systems

3 - Beware of the negative sentences you put in your presentation. Remember that an essay is a descriptive interview, a...

ScholarshipExceptional - Dec 18, 2022bvalkyrianzz - Dec 18, 2022
The Students' Union Council (SUC) - an ethical dilemma - TAMU prompt

2 - You are not applying for admission to an undergraduate course. That is the tone that this essay carries. As...

Graduateyshuks - Dec 17, 2022Holt - Dec 17, 2022
Passion for Fashion - GKS U Personal Statement 2023

3 - Thanks for your advice.I will try to write another personal statement ....

ScholarshipAlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022AlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022
Serving and Nurturing People as A Journalism Student

3 - What I see most in most of the essays of this forum is that people believe that writing sensationalist...

Undergraduatechelseaanasts - Dec 17, 2022bvalkyrianzz - Dec 18, 2022
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Computer Programmes for Teaching Purposes

2 - The total discussion approach to the given prompt is not based on the expected discussion format. For starters, the...

Writing Feedbackadriennguyen - Dec 17, 2022Holt - Dec 17, 2022
Reference letter for Swedish institute admission

2 - What you have written is an incomprehensible paragraph. It will confuse a native speaker who will notbe able to...

Lettersto be - Dec 16, 2022Holt - Dec 17, 2022
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