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Writing a summary on 2 news articles about obesity

4 - some of your minor mistakes: and I haven't written in years: there is a wrong preposition usage here. Replace...

Writing FeedbackDts007 - Sep 30, 2022Gabriell - Oct 5, 2022
Books on online platforms or traditional, paper books (ielts essay)

2 - The essay properly responded to the discussion question. It created a very strong restatement and personal opinion. The personal...

Writing Feedbackhgthng1010 - Sep 29, 2022Holt - Sep 30, 2022
Scholarship essay for M.A Learning Science

2 - The discussions provided are relevant but does not highlight anything special about the applicant. Since this is a scholarship...

ScholarshipChukwuagozie - Sep 29, 2022Holt - Sep 30, 2022
(WT2) Children spent hours on their smartphones every day

2 - This is a failing essay that will not receive a passing score based on one specific reason. The writer...

Writing FeedbackHoang Minh - Sep 28, 2022Holt - Sep 28, 2022
The given diagram interprets the cyclical procedure of reprocessing plastic bottles. (IELTS TASK 1)

3 - Well, in my opinion, you should mix the Introduction part and the Overview together so that the essay will...

Writing FeedbackNammanly - Sep 28, 2022Hoang Minh - Sep 28, 2022
[IELTS WTITING 1] the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015

3 - Thank you som much sir @holt...

Writing Feedbackchillout - Sep 28, 2022chillout - Sep 28, 2022
TASK 2: THE GAP BETWEEN RICH AND POOR

2 - It will be difficult for me to provide a proper assessment of the writer's opinion making abilities with this...

Writing Feedbackvnguyen248 - Sep 28, 2022Holt - Sep 28, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 2: TENDENCY TO BE SELF-EMPLOYED.

3 - In your third paragraph, when you said " to begin with, if someone does not have enough" This statement...

Writing FeedbackGabriell - Sep 27, 2022Chukwuagozie - Sep 29, 2022
The gender distribution of Australians doing regular physical activities in 2010

3 - I think your should do your Overview more clearly. Well, I mean that in an Overview, people usually overview...

Writing Feedbackhoangtubongdem - Sep 27, 2022Hoang Minh - Sep 28, 2022
The change in Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas - IELTS Task1 - Table

4 - 1st paragraph: UK => the UK (remember to add "the" in front of some countries such as: The Philipines,...

Writing Feedbackclancylins - Sep 27, 2022Gabriell - Sep 27, 2022
Using what you know about Edtech in Africa and Arizona State Uni, why are you interested in this?

3 - Thank you very much for your feedback...

ScholarshipChukwuagozie - Sep 26, 2022Chukwuagozie - Sep 27, 2022
The bar chart provides information how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 & 2018

2 - Incorrect use of a conjunction. This can only be used when the topics being discussed are connected in...

Writing Feedbackancle21 - Sep 26, 2022Holt - Sep 27, 2022
Personal Statement for Masters Application - TU Munich

2 - I see the first 2 paragraphs as throw aways that spend too much time on an unnecessary backstory when...

Graduateedutta1999 - Sep 26, 2022Holt - Sep 27, 2022
IELTS WRITING TASK 1: BAR CHART ABOUT WEEKLY EXPENDITURE.

2 - There are a few things that the exam taker can do to improve the scores for his summary overview...

Writing FeedbackGabriell - Sep 26, 2022Holt - Sep 27, 2022
GKS - Study plan Language Before and after (Undergraduate); practice journal and Korean classes

2 - The prior to arrival activities for language development of both English and Hangul are good enough. It shows that...

Scholarshipmiesse - Sep 26, 2022Holt - Sep 27, 2022
Questbridge Short Answer Essay - Proudest Achievement/Moment; I led prayer at the Islamic center

2 - The essay feels under developed. While the first and second paragraphs are striking and somewhat memorable, there is a...

Scholarshipzamzap - Sep 26, 2022Holt - Sep 27, 2022
Names can determine one's destiny; the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspiration

2 - The context in which you grew up and formed your aspirations should not be focused on the name pronounciation...

Scholarshiphli6855 - Sep 25, 2022Holt - Sep 26, 2022
College prompt for the scholarhip essay on my proudest achievements happened so far

2 - Left what? Home? School? An organization? This sentence should set up the whole statement instead, it confuses the...

Scholarshipaytaiwo - Sep 25, 2022Holt - Sep 26, 2022
Ielts writing - Task 2 : Nowadays, many animal species are becoming extinct.

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your advice!...

Writing Feedbackhinguyn91 - Sep 25, 2022hinguyn91 - Sep 25, 2022
Some people believe that personal happiness is directly related to achievement in gaining wealth

2 - This is a sentence that strays from the original presentation. Nowhere in the prompt is the writer asked...

Writing FeedbackTrang Hanh - Sep 25, 2022Holt - Sep 25, 2022
[IELTS WT1] The Police budget for 2017-2018 in an area of Britain.

2 - The writer still has not shown an ability to create an informative report using less than 200 words. That...

Writing FeedbackHoang Minh - Sep 25, 2022Holt - Sep 28, 2022
[IELTS WTITING 1] The pie charts give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy

3 - I think the paragraphs need to be connected better, the sentences are way too simple, apart from that, the...

Writing Feedbackalex1 - Sep 25, 2022geovannafrra - Sep 26, 2022
Mastery Choir - QuestBridge National College Match Short Answer

2 - This essay is good in terms of narration. It delivers a strong connection between the accomplishment and the overall...

Scholarshiplt3737 - Sep 23, 2022Holt - Sep 24, 2022
Public Health methods - CAREER PLAN - COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP

3 - @Holt Thank you for the insights. I'll make improvements bearing in mind your inputs....

ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 23, 2022Pettypet - Sep 25, 2022
Some people argue that the juvenile offenders should be treated in a similar way as mature people

3 - Thank you so much...

Writing FeedbackJack Lee - Sep 23, 2022Jack Lee - Sep 23, 2022
Questbridge Personal Essay - Context in which you grew up - "Life in America"

4 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback, my teacher said the same thing. I'll be sure to edit it....

Scholarshipsaady1519 - Sep 23, 2022saady1519 - Sep 27, 2022
COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP: Development Impact statement

2 - We have a one essay per thread policy here so I can only provide advice on the first post....

ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 22, 2022Holt - Sep 23, 2022
"For the longest time I dreamed"- GKS- U Personal Statement

4 - Hi Mowa, I think you should delete that part where you talk about becoming a pediatritian, that part...

ScholarshipMowa - Sep 22, 2022kiale - Oct 2, 2022
Statement of Purpose - Master's in Cognitive and Decision Sciences, UCL, UK

2 - Remove the first paragraph. The mention of Netflix made the professional application amateurish and worthy only of an undergraduate...

Graduateclawdiia - Sep 21, 2022Holt - Sep 22, 2022
Digitally talented person. Chevening Scholarships: Leadership & Influence

2 - This is neither the kind of leadership nor influencing essay that will make it past the screening round. It...

Scholarshipinekeyuliam - Sep 21, 2022Holt - Sep 22, 2022
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