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I have studied intensively, especially maths and physics for the past twelve years - scholarship

38 - "This scholarship will allow me focus on a career that no other university in Vietnam can do." Um, I...

Scholarshipthaihanguyen74 - Jun 13, 2009 / EF_Sean - Jun 26, 2009
Scholarship Essay on How High School Sports Influenced you

8 - Congratulations! Don't forget to spread the joy by helping others with their scholarship or admissions essays!...

Scholarshipshupirate2013 - Apr 7, 2009 / EF_Simone - Jun 18, 2009
Scholarship Essay: Graduate Education in Chemical Engineering

7 - Thank you Sean...

Scholarshipcalyx - May 28, 2009 / calyx - Jun 1, 2009
Personal Essay - Something I've learned through a personal experience

6 - Great essay. I love the way you cross-cut your experience learning the bass guitar with your volunteer experience. The...

ScholarshipTheAnswer - May 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - May 27, 2009
"A Latin-American" - Scholarship/college essay

8 - Since I was a child Good job. Now, go through and remove excessive words that clutter your message....

Scholarshipmishmon - May 24, 2009 / EF_Simone - May 27, 2009
Contributions to the Field of Sonography

10 - Guys, I wanted to thank all of you millions! I have received the scholarship. Could not have done it...

Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 22, 2009 / fuzzy - May 16, 2009
Scholarship Essay - My Perseverance Goal

8 - Your answer is excellent. Good job. It can't have been easy cutting down that much when you had so...

Scholarshipbabydoll - Apr 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
The Scholarship Jacket

3 - "Throughout the course of life, individuals work towards a goal to reap its benefits. This reward is self explanatory...

Scholarshippatellio94 - Apr 26, 2009 / EF_Sean - Apr 27, 2009
My own engineering firm; Scholarship (Educational Goals)

6 - Thanks for the help I'm going to make the corrections you suggested....

Scholarshipgb9570 - Apr 16, 2009 / gb9570 - Apr 19, 2009
Scholarship Essay - Effect of Presidential Election

4 - Yeah, don't use the forum quite that way. It should not be a resource the enable students to avoid...

Scholarshipcali - Apr 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Apr 13, 2009
Scholarship Essay, goals for myself in the future

9 - Thanks Sean. I'll let everyone know if I get the scholarship....

Scholarshiparbennett - Feb 17, 2009 / arbennett - Apr 11, 2009
What is the biggest obstacle that have had to overcome in Life?

10 - Very powerful and thought provoking. thanks again...

Scholarshipjoalex7 - Mar 23, 2009 / joalex7 - Apr 1, 2009
Samoan Govt Scholarship - Information Technology Course

4 - Up at the top, you said to me, "I really appreciated." That's a common mistake, but you are supposed...

Scholarshipambster - Mar 28, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 31, 2009
Expanding my knowledge; Scholarship (the United World Colleges)

6 - "This college offers me many different opportunities and resources to take the road of success." You might want to...

Scholarshipstefan - Mar 25, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 28, 2009
Scholarship application essay for review (UK university)

4 - Working at this forum, I have something in common with admissions officers. I see enough of these essays to...

ScholarshipKhalil - Mar 23, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
I hopefully graduate suma cum laude in Cinematography

5 - For the sake of making that first paragraph well-structured, I think you should find a way to add one...

Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 15, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 23, 2009
The final input came from my brother-in-law, cardiologist - why did you choose this career?

8 - I came to the United States as a n new immigrant in 2005. In my home country, Romania, I...

Scholarshipfuzzy - Mar 7, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
NUS Scholarship App Essay - Achievements & academic interests

3 - My interests in economics, business and finance have been long standing. Since youth , I have always been particularly...

Scholarshipkids_jessy - Mar 21, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 22, 2009
Explain why you feel you merit consideration as an applicant for an award or scholarship

11 - hey molly! Not once, in my whole high school career, have I said to myself, "Self, what you...

Scholarshipmolzeeee - Mar 1, 2009 / sharkbait09 - Mar 17, 2009
Career Goals Essay for scholarship -- Love of numbers leads to accounting

NEW - I need help with a scholarship essay... I need to know what one thinks of this essay.. What can...

ScholarshipWritersBlock - Mar 16, 2009 / — -
Philip A. Hart Scholarship

4 - I agree with kevin, follow that and it will sound great...

ScholarshipJohnBabyDoe - Mar 14, 2009 / isgluska - Mar 15, 2009
'The perfect way of voicing my opinion' scholarship essay (everyone has an opinion)

3 - Thanks so much for the feedback and peer-editing, it really helped, and yep it's for questbridge, so wish me...

Scholarshipmila_girl - Mar 8, 2009 / mila_girl - Mar 13, 2009
"Education is an admirable thing" - Scholarship Essay

3 - The pain of discipline was tough, at times, but it was more welcoming than the pain of regret I...

Scholarshipsharkbait09 - Mar 12, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Mar 13, 2009
In my own words: Why is a scholarship important to you?

5 - Ok thank you all very much. This was a great help!...

Scholarshipneonnelson - Mar 1, 2009 / neonnelson - Mar 10, 2009
Scholarship Essays - Volunteer job and Education. (Deadline March 09)

8 - The dream sequence was really very well done -- you should be proud of it. Good job, and good...

Scholarshipkofpower2411 - Mar 7, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 9, 2009
Scholarship Personal Statement (my dream of becoming a doctor)

9 - Just remember that you need to convey the idea that you desperately need the scholarship while simultaneously showing the...

Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
Scholarship Essay - degree vs a positive contribution to society

5 - Sounds like you have a clear vision of what you want to do with your life. Good job. A...

Scholarshipscholargirl - Feb 11, 2009 / EF_Sean - Mar 2, 2009
Scholarship Essay, a love of writing and education

4 - Your writing involves a high level of diction, which is good, and general grasp of grammar and appropriate academic...

Scholarshipmckyle - Feb 20, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 21, 2009
Scholarship application essay - demonstrating outstanding ability to lead

3 - No, don't trash the first part! But get rid of that weak first sentence. Then, start by telling: ...

Scholarshipsweethypnotic - Feb 8, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 9, 2009
Scholarship essay, person I admire (my dead Uncle)

6 - Ha ha, I was going to say that is a cool idea, because the most influential person could indeed...

Scholarshipsuehatesyou - Feb 6, 2009 / EF_Kevin - Feb 8, 2009
Short write-up on internship application Qn

7 - Excellent. That solves the problem quite nicely....

Scholarshipultraman365 - Feb 2, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 5, 2009
Scholarship Essay: education and experience at OIT and my goals.

3 - You have a fairly strong first draft here. Revising for conciseness is always a good idea. Of course, that...

ScholarshipJay - Feb 1, 2009 / EF_Sean - Feb 2, 2009
'calculus and statistics analysis' - Scholarship essay for Babson College

5 - thank you. I am going to revise these parts!...

Scholarshipmingzhuliu - Jan 23, 2009 / mingzhuliu - Jan 25, 2009
'I listened to the lyrics' - 100th page of my autobiography

8 - this is a really good essay, beautifully written. it gives the reader a good sense of who you are....

Scholarshippiggytails626 - Dec 30, 2008 / jh3492 - Jan 3, 2009
"Dream specialist" - Scholarship essay, experience at OIT

3 - Thank you Kevin. I really appreciate your help!...

Scholarshipamaranta - Dec 28, 2008 / amaranta - Dec 29, 2008
I've been constantly instilled the idea that one should make use of what he/she has learned.

5 - Well, for the first one: "Chinese education is wrongly viewed as consisting mostly of theoretical, rather than practical instructions"...

Scholarshiprayc0702 - Dec 21, 2008 / EF_Sean - Dec 22, 2008
Need explanation on a scholarship question?

3 - Thank you I'll consider to answer those questions in my response :)...

Scholarship4ever2bleed - Dec 19, 2008 / 4ever2bleed - Dec 20, 2008
HEOP ESSAY SCHOLARSHIP

6 - you can make it flow better by reading your essay out loud to yourself...it removes any awkwardness and make...

Scholarshipfelixs07 - Dec 11, 2008 / fastracker91 - Dec 15, 2008
I hope I could help the poor in Indonesia - Singapore Scholarship

4 - I always think that my parents are huge contributors to my environment and that they play a meaningful role...

Scholarshipangann29 - Dec 12, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 13, 2008
'economics and business complete' - Jp Morgan scholarship essay

3 - Hi! I know it's hard to get an essay to "flow." The trick is to link one idea to...

Scholarshipmetsfan2044 - Dec 10, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
Major in either psychology or Pre-Medicine; VCU Scholarship- educational goals

2 - My primary educational goal is to exceed standards while majoring in ... I currently study Psychology in high...

Scholarshiplasershot91 - Dec 7, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 7, 2008
Extracurricular Activity Essay for CommApp- Scholars' Bowl

2 - "Let's get this question", I thought. My team's stoic attitude was immediately replaced by pure exultation, and I...

Scholarshippartooz - Nov 30, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 1, 2008
"VCU scholarship essay" - Compose Page 87 of your autobiography

3 - Thank you Gloria. I appreciate your assistance....

Scholarshipskaterkane - Nov 22, 2008 / skaterkane - Nov 29, 2008
How Will This Scholarship Help Me Attain My Career Goal essay.

2 - Good evening :) Mechanically, make sure you are only capitalizing proper nouns and the first words of sentences;...

ScholarshipBenunu - Nov 25, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 25, 2008
Important activity+motivation for making application-UT Honors Short Essays

NEW - I have two essays that I have completed and I want to make sure each are grammatically correct and...

Scholarshipbully - Oct 30, 2008 / — -
The National Merit Scholarship Essay - UF Essay Help

7 - Congratulations on National Merit. Oddly enough, I just applied to National Merit and I'm writing my UF letter...

ScholarshipAlbo - Oct 12, 2008 / Liist - Oct 14, 2008
Essay for scholarship - Master of Architecture in Deakin University in Australia

6 - I have one more question. I need some kind of heading. What do you think about: "My motivation...

Scholarshipsabrina - Sep 20, 2008 / sabrina - Sep 25, 2008
Essay for fulbright scholarship in computer science

2 - Great job! A few subject/verb confusions, but other than that you've got a pretty good draft. Your content is...

Scholarshipdjellel - Aug 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Aug 19, 2008
Application - why you think you should get a textbook scholarship

2 - Excellent work; I almost found myself applauding at your conclusion! Just a few mechanical errors, but I think you've...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Jun 27, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Jun 27, 2008
ESSAY ON PARTIAL SCHOLARSHIP TO STUDY PUBLIC HEALTH

3 - Thank you so much for a great job done.Ma I have made necessary adjustment but I need to edit...

Scholarshipajayemisi - May 2, 2008 / ajayemisi - May 3, 2008
Arts Administration Internship Essay

3 - You have been a great help! Thanks so much, really appreciate it....

Scholarshipalic - Apr 28, 2008 / alic - Apr 28, 2008
Pencil and Paper - Scholarship Essay

4 - Thank you very much...

ScholarshipPheonix - Apr 20, 2008 / Pheonix - Apr 21, 2008
unique learning experience/ independence; What this scholarship would give me?

4 - Greetings! I think you've improved it! Here are some more editing tips: Receiving a scholarship would give...

Scholarshipxdarkr0se - Mar 24, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 26, 2008
'a job as a construction manager' - career goal essay for scholarships

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a good essay! I made some changes for you; see what you think:...

Scholarshiprneff - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Jan 31, 2008
Malagasy culture and traditional family - SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you very much for your advices and corrections...

Scholarshipstreetracer - Dec 15, 2007 / streetracer - Dec 20, 2007
Personal Essay for Scholarship... is it too funny?

2 - Greetings! I think it's a very good essay! I just have a few editing tips: Everyday life...

Scholarshipswimfin - Dec 2, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Dec 3, 2007
Impact Essay (significant experience, achievement, risk)

2 - Greetings! Annoying? No way! That's why we're here! Your excellent essay needs very little work; just a few...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Oct 1, 2007
Chilean /Steady Grades; Personal life&Aspirations - Biography(SCHOLARSHIP)

2 - Greetings! You've written an excellent essay! I have just a few editing suggestions: "Study my girl, or...

Scholarshipbizkitgirlzc - Sep 29, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Sep 30, 2007
Eligibility, financial need background, community involvement - Scholarship Essay; Graphic Designer

10 - Great! Thanks...

Scholarshipkmendez - Jun 27, 2007 / kmendez - Jul 10, 2007
SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY ABOUT WHAT I WANT TO DO with MY EDUCATION!

3 - can you tell me the web address for it please...

Scholarshipflorezstephanie - Jun 19, 2007 / mikeyearof08 - Jun 27, 2007

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