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Should teachers permit to teach if they don't have teacher's certification

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4 - No, I only know about editing. However, I know some Native speakers of English who do not write as...

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3 - He once said: "Personal business must yield to collective interest." He respected his superiors and learned a lot...

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About an activity: the magazine Young

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4 - Instead of, "Here are my reasons," try: My reasons include the following: Oh, all the corrections that...

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'change must come from the top' - written for English CLEP

3 - Kevin, Thank you so much! This helped and I hope I'll pass the CLEP.. :)...

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Arumentative Essay(MLA Style) Is Spanking the Right Way to Discipline

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Essay about "what I would do with some land"

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TOEFL essay: Apartment Vs dormitories at university.

3 - Thank you so much. very helpful. it is a great thing to be able to get feedback for my...

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help with essay for aboard

4 - With the enormous population in Beijing it has various ethnic groups, races and tribes. I am currently taking...

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Members of a group can learn from each other, and it will help compensate one's weaknesses.

3 - well, the essay I am practicing is time-impromptu writing, which means I am not allowed to reserch something on...

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"the Tenth Man" - Simple Essay

2 - Good questions! Are you using APA or MLA? If it is MLA, you don't need to use commas... Just...

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Polar bear essay - I could really use on what i've written so far

2 - Great! I made some minor changes below. It will be good if you have a good intro paragraph and...

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Personal Response -The Wars

3 - Made substitutions of war with its synonyms. Thanks for the feedback. :)...

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the crucible-how is John Proctor presented (paragraph about him&elizabeth)

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A four-paragraph essay about The True Meaning of Courage

4 - Dear Gloria, Thanks so much for your suggestions. They were helpful! :)...

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Computers have made life becomes easier or difficult? Discuss

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Research paper on Poe's "Ligeia"

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"My father" - pls. help revise part of my P.S.

NEW - My father works as a senior IT researcher in RICOH, a prestigious Japanese company. Under his influence, I learned...

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IELTS; COMPUTERS REPLACE MAN POWR IN JOBS

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Report on whether to diagnose a 6 year old boy who may have autism

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Telling the truth is not a best option always

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Cumulative class essay about supervisor

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'traffic jam, noisy neighborhood' - New movie theater may be built

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Biology Creative Essay

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help with essay #1: experience with soup kitchen

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ADVANTAGES OF CITY LIVING AND COUNTRY LIVING, can you help me with this?

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'I was two months pregnant' - A decision that has changed my life

2 - Make sure you are capitalizing the first words of every sentence. "so" should be capitalized. At this point...

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Paper about ISA. My teacher said my paper is unorganized.

2 - The main thing about organization is that each subject you want to talk about should have its own paragraph....

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Essay about bad effects of the internet on students

2 - Good afternoon :) In regards to meaning, there is no difference between "internet" and "the internet." "The" is...

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What is Conrad's definition of evil from heart of darkness and the strange

NEW - What is conrad's defintion of evil from heart of darkness and The Strange Case Of Dr. Jekyll and Mr....

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Realism Essay - the readers choice

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Teenagers and alcohol essay - help revise or offer suggestions:

2 - Good evening :) First, avoid contractions in formal academic writing; for instance, "It's" should be "It is." ...

Writing Feedbacktonydengcnu - Nov 19, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 19, 2008
Cause and Effect Essay-A Family of Poverty

5 - Don't tell the reader, that you're going to tell him something. Like, " I will describe what my poverty...

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The Freedom to Choose Death

NEW - The Freedom to Choose Death Euthanasia has become one of the most controversial topics nowadays. Euthanasia means "mercy...

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Pls. help revise essay: The person who has great influence on me

3 - thanks for your help, Gloria. tony...

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Taking action against moral injustice - English Essay Gr. 12 Level

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Persuasive Essay Abu Graib Prison Camp-Need Help

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research essay on novel "monkey beach"

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'Gillian and Mum' - Creative Writing - help needs to be proof read

6 - I see. I've edited the first section and then made some general comments in regards to the rest of...

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Writing is the basis for all education and is too often overshadowed in schools today

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People have different job expectations for jobs - essay help

NEW - Good day to you, would you mind to rate my essay, please. Thank you very much Topic in...

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Studying at traditional schools or via computer or TV

2 - I think your response is a very thorough response to the prompt. It is organized, well structured, and explains...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Nov 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
Nurture has only limited impact on early human development compared to Nature

2 - One of my main concerns with this piece is that none of the research/statistics/data is cited. Where did this...

Writing Feedbackdude91 - Nov 16, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 16, 2008
Literature response- writing like a child, need reviews

NEW - I had to write something similar to a "My Name" fragment by Sandra Cisneros. The Format was ...

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Essay about "Better communication types"

NEW - Here is another essay. It will be a very great help if you give me any suggestion or comments...

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(prepare for future job/increase knowledge) Why people attend college or university?

3 - Thank you, Gloria :)...

Writing Feedbackfranklamparden - Nov 15, 2008 / franklamparden - Nov 15, 2008
How the internet has improved your academic experience.

5 - Good evening. This website is to assist students with their academic writing. We help with editing, proofreading, grammar,...

Writing Feedbackjnix612 - Oct 14, 2007 / EF_Team5 - Nov 15, 2008
I prefer working in the large company - more chances of promotion

4 - Good afternoon :) I'm not sure I understand, but I'll give it a try. How about: "Official...

Writing FeedbackAsselya - Nov 13, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 14, 2008
Children should grow in big cities

3 - Thank u very much!!!...

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Travel is in a group led by a tour guide may be expensive

2 - Good afternoon :) Because you did not describe what kind of assistance you are seeking, I have edited...

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Traffic and housing problems can be solved by decentralisation.Agree or not

NEW - good morning. could you help me to assess this essay, please? Thank you so much. Topic in details;...

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Invisible Children (sociology essay)

2 - Good evening. Mechanically, only one correction; make sure you consistently refer to the group as "the Invisible Children"...

Writing Feedbackbgibson8708 - Nov 12, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 12, 2008
Being involved in or witnessed a trouble situation - Essay Help

2 - Good evening :) As you did not describe what type of assistance you were seeking, I have made...

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Senior executives encouraged to leave at the age of 55. Agree or not?

NEW - Good day to you. Could you please help me to assess my essay? Thank you very much! Topic...

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Prevention is better than therapy-Correct my mistakes in this brief article

3 - Hi Gloria . thanks for your feedback . actually i didn't want to focus on details . my intention...

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Hypothesis essay on the book, Out of This Furnace

2 - Good evening :) I have some general comments about the piece. First, mechanics. Make sure you are...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Nov 11, 2008 / EF_Team5 - Nov 11, 2008
Essay Comparing 2 poems with the theme of "Women"

2 - Good evening :) I suggest beginning with an outline. List all of the topics you absolutely want to...

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