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Business Law Essay feedback (Stevens, Wiley & Co)

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Academic Interest (I like math, physics and economics)

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Account of Activities

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Essay comparing two Short Stories-Topic: Naive Narrator

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"the land of the east and west" - my personal essays

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"George Richman" - need revision help on writing a narrative

3 - During one summer day, Rich City was blooming with beauty. The trees are fully grown, everything is green, the...

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Essay on the Greate Gatsby novel

4 - ...and he also provides a contradictory view: "The whole town is desolate. You can take out the word...

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Duality of good and evil essay

5 - You might find it helpful to read other works that present philosophies of good and evil The Virtue of...

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notre dame essay! - look through and give any suggestions

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distance learning and online computer classes should replace classroom lear

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"Experience of Cultural Difference" essay (pls. help revise, thanks)

2 - For family reasons, I have visited New Zealand on many occasions, and have savored a distinctive cultural atmosphere. ...

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"The Healthy Americans Act" - essay

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Need revision with Humanity Paper on "is humanity good/evil"

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it is better to marry someone who is similar to you - essay

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Multilateral Aid is like water; it can float a boat but it can also sink a boat.

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"A Heart's Ruin" - Romeo and Juliet Essay

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what are some of the experiences that have shapped your outlook and the way

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"Scientific Creativolution: Are Evolution and Creation Sciences?"

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Essay: Preserve the old buildings; keeping distinguishing features of a city

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Charlotte Brontë: Jane Eyre Essay

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person's childhood are the the most important years of a person's lives.

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toefl: Why are groups or organizations important to people?

4 - Great work in this thread, I wonder if you have any involvement with that organization, Tzu Chi. This...

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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles - essay, change lives

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Essay on mandatory School Uniforms. Need revision help.

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"I love my friends" essay, help edit

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Writing Feedbackstef777 - Dec 10, 2008 / EF_Kevin - Dec 11, 2008
essay about world crisis

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Essay about four major generations.

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FAMILY: "Sunshine essay" - Sunshine danced colorfully on the doorsteps

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Chivalry Essay, Advantages and Disadvantages

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"The Candy store" essay - need help on editing and a maybe a conclusion

3 - thank you so much, this helped...

Writing Feedbackstef777 - Dec 9, 2008 / stef777 - Dec 10, 2008
Toefl: What is a very important skill a person should learn

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"differences in work" essay

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Plato, Aristotle, Dante (poetry v. philosophy essay)

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"Private Me" essay - need help on editing and a conclusion.

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"Future me" essay, need help with conclusion

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Stefanie Marie - need help on editing and a CONCLUSION.

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Contribution to diversity: I am a master at Pingpong

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2 - I am not the physically strongest table tennis player, but I work harder than every other team member. When...

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For advice: Account of my experience

4 - Oh, that is an interesting question! In common usage, "temperament" suggests emotion, and ability to control one's temper,...

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toefl:what kind of person makes a good roommate?

NEW - Hi Kevin, I am preparing for my coming test,so I try to practice toefl essay everyday. I do really...

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how your family's experience or cultural history enriched you or presented

3 - in the beginning, you stated off with a little background info, which was nice but you kind of lost...

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For revision or suggestions: The activity I like most

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'I am easy to communicate' - University Of XXX - essay

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Is christopher columbus a great historical figure?

5 - Thanks everyone for your feedbacks!! :)...

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Toefl Essay - increasing the price of gasoline and electricity

4 - Hi Prakash, I found a similar topic in the part of integrated writing. The topic discusses the rising gas...

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4 - Sometimes in literature the most important themes are developed in the scenes where a death or multiple deaths take...

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4 - wow kid wow....

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2 - I AGREE with you!! The whole world is becoming specialized... As students majoring in mass media, we will...

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