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The human species' impact on the earth

2 - Greetings! Another excellent essay! I have just a few grammatical suggestions for you: when the extinction of...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 23, 2007
the effect of Global warming- thesis statement and topic sentence

2 - Greetings! I think you have a good start with your paragraph! It appears that the first sentence is...

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"The Jilting of Granny Weatherall" essay

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay, but a few of your sentence constructions are a little awkward. Here...

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Essay proofread on Jealousy

2 - Greetings! I think you've written a very good essay!I have just a couple of suggestions: whereas aggressive...

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Essay on Deception, The Sparkling Bitch

3 - Greetings! It can be tempting, sometimes, to overexplain things in an essay, especially if you are having trouble...

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Culture change vs. biological evolution essay

2 - Greetings! I'd be happy to help with some editing: On the one hand, the factors of biological...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 16, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 17, 2007
America today is a nation of people with different ethnicities; Cultures Conflict

4 - Greetings! I think your essay is greatly improved! Here are just a few more suggestions: She feels...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 15, 2007
Earliest stone tools - short anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! I'm learning a lot about archaelology from your essays! Very interesting! Here are a few editing pointers:...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 14, 2007
Russia and the Far Abroad

4 - Greetings! I'm glad we could be helpful! As far as expanding the essay goes, there are some factors...

Writing Feedbackyrutrpn - Jul 12, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 13, 2007
Concept of "human races" - short Physical Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! I always enjoy reading your excellent essays! Here are a few editing suggestions: It can be...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 11, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 12, 2007
The Worst Job I Have Ever Experienced! - Essay

4 - Greetings! Great job! The only suggestion I have is to change the punctuation in this sentence, like this:...

Writing Feedbackldixon - Jul 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
On the origins of domesticated felines - Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings! A very interesting and enjoyable essay! I have a few editing suggestions: I both drew and...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 10, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
Summary/Analysis of Lucy from The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe

8 - Greetings! I should have been more specific with my suggetion regarding "immensely." It should read like this: "several...

Writing Feedbackamosborne13 - Jul 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 11, 2007
Vis-ŕ-vis the early anatomically modern Homo sapiens

2 - Greetings! A remarkable and interesting paper! You've done a marvelous job; I have just a few editing suggestions...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jul 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 10, 2007
Thesis help: Education better or worse?

7 - I changed it a bit, but I think this is my final essay. I just have to write a...

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Comparison Essay--Rushdie and Doctorow

7 - Greetings! I'm afraid that "makes religion the only problem for prohibiting birth control" doesn't really make sense. It's...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 9, 2007
"Sicko" - movie review to correct

3 - Greetings! Your essay is well-written and very informative! I'm not sure how deep your instructor wanted you to...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jul 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 5, 2007
Choose a day in your life which did not start off well

2 - Greetings! What an interesting story! I have made some corrections for you: The day in my life...

Writing FeedbackFaheekah - Jul 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 4, 2007
"Life has been tough for me because I have to face many disappointments in it" - Narrative essay

NEW - Any one here please help me with the grammar in this essay. Thanks in advance. Topic: Write a...

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proofread 1st part of another comparison essay--meaning of nothing

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a great job! I know that transitions can be difficult. Sometimes they are...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 27, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jul 2, 2007
Comparison essay - the consequences of Hulga's disillusionment

4 - Greetings! I think you've done a good job of clarifying what you meant by the witch meeting. However,...

Writing Feedbackcat08 - Jun 24, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 25, 2007
Untitled Explanatory/Informative Essay (Due 6/25) what do you think??

2 - Greetings! You've written a great essay, full of useful information! I'll just give you some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 23, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 24, 2007
To rack their brains to find our answers; Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! Another excellent essay! I have just a few editing pointers: Nevertheless, since statistically speaking, that...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
Search to procreate overweighs the pressure over food sources; Physical Anthropology essay

2 - Greetings, Frederic! As is your habit, you have written an informative and educational essay! I always learn not...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Jun 21, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 22, 2007
My most recent discovery is Japanese music, J-ROCK

11 - I like the metaphor a lot, so I think I'll be using something like that! Thank you very,...

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A presence in oneself -- an essay

19 - So have I! Take care! Sarah...

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Buy Buy Buy! (essay on american compulsive shopping)

3 - thanks so much for your review Sarah....

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College freshman after 15 year break - first essay for this class

2 - Greetings! I have added a few more comments and included the ones I made previously: If I...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 6, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Feedback wanted for the first essay I've written in 16 years!! GULP

2 - Greetings! We always try to be gentle here! And, the truth is, you've written a really delightful essay!...

Writing Feedbackmelmcghee07 - Jun 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 7, 2007
Brave New World- Huxley's message?

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Writing Feedbackpoohbear0805 - Jun 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
How we may cause natural events to happen - an essay

12 - Greetings! I agree that it is intriguing and that studying it could only prove interesting and useful. Where...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 6, 2007
Response to "brave new world" by Danial

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. I have just a few edting suggestions: As seen in the...

Writing FeedbackDanialls - Jun 4, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 5, 2007
The human cause of global warming? Research essay.

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Eastern thought - an introduction in three parts

24 - Thanks! She lived a good life; seven years, as is average for a ferret. I still miss her, after...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Childhood memory by anthony qcity

2 - Greetings! What a great story! Your writing is very colorful and engaging. I particularly like the metaphor about...

Writing Feedbackqcityslugger - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Running Backs: Training and Knowledge to become Successful.

4 - Greetings! I agree, you've written a good essay! I have just a few suggestions: These players did...

Writing Feedbackathiththan - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 4, 2007
Summary of a childhood experience

2 - Greetings! The details really make the story! It's a great essay; I have just a few editing tips:...

Writing FeedbackDIPSET - Jun 3, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 3, 2007
Vocabulary Composition on Soccer

2 - Greetings! What a delightful essay! I love your analysis of soccer and its relationship to politics. Your vocabulary...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - Jun 1, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Expository Essay: Important holidays for me

3 - Greetings! Congratulations on working towards your G.E.D.! I think you've done a fine job with your essay--particularly impressive...

Writing FeedbackVerde - May 31, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 2, 2007
Replacing a Kitchen Faucet - Process Essay

4 - We'll be happy to provide it! Never underestimate how well "years of experience" can make up for "years since...

Writing Feedbackscash - May 30, 2007 / EF_Team2 - Jun 1, 2007
Response to Brave New World

4 - Greetings! I think your style and structure are just fine. The only suggestion I might make is that,...

Writing FeedbackANNUR - May 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 31, 2007
Expository Essay: War, good or bad?

3 - Greetings! I think your essay is coming along quite well. I have just a few suggestions for you....

Writing FeedbackmSaKooL - May 25, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 28, 2007
Reflective essay: From highway to hell to shot to thrill

3 - Greetings! First of all, sorry for the delay in getting back to you; I've been on vacation. I...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - May 22, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 27, 2007
Vocabulary Composition in my Storyline

3 - wow! you really are a writer....

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - May 20, 2007 / Rajiv - May 21, 2007
an altogether different way of understanding how we make observations.

40 - Greetings again. Contemplating the infinite should yield us something of worth else it would be considered an exercise...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 4, 2007 / Rajiv - May 21, 2007
Autism is a spectrum disorder; Introduction to Autism

7 - Well Written i have watch shows about the disorder but this essay give me much more information....

Writing FeedbackCeressie - May 14, 2007 / supasikh - May 20, 2007
Argumentative paper "The bridge of san Luis Rey"

2 - Greetings! I think you've done a good job of arguing your case. The only suggestion I would make...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - May 19, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 20, 2007
Capote's view of Holcomb, Kansas

2 - Greetings! You would be able to discuss more characterizations if you eliminated some of the repetition. You go...

Writing Feedbackenglish5210 - May 17, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 17, 2007
"To build a fire" - Analysis of the man's character

2 - Greetings! You've written a very insightful take on the man's character! I remember that when I read this...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - May 15, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Evaluation essay - Criteria for selecting cocoa varieties

4 - You're very welcome, Frederic! De rien! (and you deserve an A, you are an excellent writer!) Sarah...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - May 8, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
essay on - why I write

17 - I see, thank you! Sarah...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 9, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Analytical Essay - characterize Capote's view of Holcomb

4 - Then again, sometimes life just gets in the way of doing what you would like to do and you...

Writing Feedbackbizkitgirlzc - May 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 15, 2007
Reporter at Large interview paper

5 - Thanks paperhanger, Something that struck me right away was that you were addressing something very personal to yourself....

Writing Feedbackpaperhanger - May 13, 2007 / Rajiv - May 14, 2007
he crowd is roaring and yelling, "Go WIZ"; Narrative Essay / The Wiz

2 - Greetings! What you have so far is very good! I think probably the panicking would work well right...

Writing FeedbackmSaKooL - May 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 14, 2007
on sounds and meaning - an essay

4 - Greetings! The great thing about writing is that the author is in total control of the product, at...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 13, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 14, 2007
"Fiction or Fact-Men Suffering from A Girl's Problem" - research paper

2 - Greetings! You've written a very interesting essay with lots of supporting information! I noted just a few things:...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - May 7, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 8, 2007
"See the sky" essay

3 - Thank you Sarah. You have always found something encouraging to say. Rajiv...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - May 7, 2007 / Rajiv - May 8, 2007
Global warming is the gradual increase in Earth's temperature

4 - Wow! Thanks for the info! :-)) Sarah...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - May 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
Expository essay on my early years

4 - Greetings! Well, individual instructors have their own takes on things. I suppose just consider this is an essay...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - May 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 6, 2007
autobiographical narrative account on "Who am I"

2 - Greetings! I agree that writing about yourself can be tough, but I think you've done an admirable job!...

Writing Feedbacksamuraitom - May 5, 2007 / EF_Team2 - May 6, 2007

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