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Is spanking a form of family violence? : "In Rod We Trust"

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Media file - Sociology of the Family essay

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End of the World Essay...

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is this brief remark correct?

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About Me essay (Karina raised in Kazahstan)

5 - Greetings! Thank you, Karina! Yes, there are several ways you could say it. For example, "Because English...

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Expository essay NUCLEAR POWER - I did a lot of language mistakes

2 - Greetings! Yes, a language mistake would probably be a problem with the grammar. I have made some corrections...

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Problems with bad student behavior - Solutions

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Essay about awesome Soccer - edit it today

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Is learning history important? - essay

3 - thank you again! your editing really helps! Have a wonderful day :-)...

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What did I learn at Oriental Institute? - essay

4 - Greetings! That's very good! Just remember that, most of the time, nouns in English will require an article...

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Work at a job that you enjoy than it is to earn a lot of money?

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Explantory Essay: About Revenge

4 - Greetings! Normally, when I think of an explanatory essay, I think of a "how-to" type of essay: how...

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Jean Piaget - how is my grammar-Psych paper?

7 - thanks so much for your help once again and easing my worries about plagerism!...

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"Everything's An Argument" - Evaluative Essay

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Essay on requiring employees to dress formally..

4 - Greetings! That's a very good question! The "a" belongs to "company"; it is singular, just one company, but...

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Statement of Purpose for Savannah College of Art & Design; R.E.A.C.H. Art.

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Writing Feedbackjladdison3 - Mar 13, 2008 / jladdison3 - Mar 14, 2008
voluntary work - helping poor elderly people or newly arrived pupil

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing tips: But when it comes to choosing...

Writing Feedbackshing200584 - Mar 13, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 14, 2008
"Pattern's of Medieval Life" - about the presentation in class

2 - Greetings! It sounds like you learned a lot from the presentation! Here are a few tips for you:...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Mar 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 12, 2008
"Road to Perdition" movie review essay (grammar help)

3 - alright thanks alot for the help. Then about the semicolons. I just remember her going on a rant about...

Writing FeedbackLeighS - Mar 9, 2008 / LeighS - Mar 10, 2008
Feature article, Casino in Singapore - response to a government's decision

5 - Oh, I get it. Thank you!...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Mar 9, 2008 / learningtowrite - Mar 10, 2008
'Degree of happiness' with a job is more important than having a high salary

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay! Here are some editing suggestions: the most contributing factor differs from...

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Integrated writing task: the growth of tourism

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Narrative Essay>.> Random moments

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Writing FeedbackDsx2012 - Mar 6, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 7, 2008
Essay on saving land for endangerous animals

4 - Greetings! Yes, the singular/plural conundrum is confusing in English. Most people these days say "they" when referring to...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Mar 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Mar 6, 2008
theoretical analysis of two different media sources ( book and a play)

2 - Greetings! I think you're off to a good start! As you say, it is just a rough draft,...

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School lunches today - Illustration essay

3 - Greetings! There are some distinct differences between formal and informal essays. First of all, the viewpoint the author...

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Essay on The most remembering moment in my life

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descriptive writing: creating an exterior scene

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Education is only single factor in country's wealth?

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Essay on Customer Focus

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Essay: Religion based discrimination

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My laptop is from Dell; An essay about my laptop

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A late arrival leading to serious consequences

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Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 20, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 23, 2008
Literary Analysis on The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost

2 - In a person's life, many decisions have to be made, such as choosing to spend time hanging out with...

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Analysis of Squealer from "Animal Farm" by George Orwell

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Help with my essay on U.S. and covert policies

2 - Greetings! One thing I think your essay is lacking is focus. It's difficult to tell what your thesis...

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Examining the poem "To An Athlete Dying Young" By A.E Housman

36 - Greetings! You could just do something straightforward like saying "Literary analysis of 'To An Athlete Dying Young' reveals...

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One day you made a bad mistake which upset other people - essay help

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World War I, also referred to as the Great War - Essay Suggestions

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Art Nouveau - Glasgow Style (essay)

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Writing Feedbacksamuraihuynh - Feb 18, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
The Vacuum - Analytical Essay; could someone check my analytical essay for errors

4 - Greetings! I think that's an excellent way to write it! You've done a good job of looking behind...

Writing FeedbackTimcago - Feb 16, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 18, 2008
Essay on a case of mistaken identity

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Essay on "Why do people go to college?"

2 - Greetings! Welcome! I'm happy to help with some editing suggestions! Several decades ago, only a few selected...

Writing Feedbackje2ks2 - Feb 15, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 15, 2008
Under English Law, minors have limited capacity to make contracts.

2 - Greetings! I'm glad to help, welcome! the objective element focuses more on what has been supplied. This...

Writing Feedbackericchk - Feb 14, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 15, 2008
What did you learn when you read "The Allegory of the cave"?

2 - Greetings! I think you have given some thought to this. :-) You just need to watch your grammar...

Writing FeedbackBBgirl - Feb 13, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
'Americans and the space program' - English Composition Clep Exam essay

4 - Greetings! You've written a good essay; I have some editing suggestions for you: There have been some...

Writing Feedbackbonechills - Feb 1, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
Evaluation of my father and mother's parenting style - essay

4 - Greetings, Frederic! Your only problem may be that your English is TOO good for American newspapers and magazines!...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Feb 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
My biography (I'm Vietnamese)

2 - Greetings! I think it's very good! Be sure to remember to use articles before nouns in English. For...

Writing Feedbacksaikarvn - Feb 12, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
How does the law deal with minors who enter into a contract?

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Writing FeedbackChristopher - Feb 8, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 14, 2008
Partner introduction speech - critique essay

2 - Greetings! You have written a concise and ruthlessly honest critique--it's very good! Here are some editing tips: ...

Writing Feedbacksamuraihuynh - Feb 11, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 11, 2008
Essay on work offshoring - feedback welcome

2 - Greetings! You have written a good essay with some excellent information. Here are some editing tips for you:...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 10, 2008
Difficulty to gain acceptance of innovations in companies- innovation essay

3 - Thanks a lot, Sarah!...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 9, 2008 / meliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008
Entrepreneurial to a professionally managed organisation - problems

3 - Thanks a lot, Sarah!...

Writing Feedbackmeliaxiao - Feb 9, 2008 / meliaxiao - Feb 10, 2008
The Great Gatsby - help with my grammar and essay organization

21 - Greetings! Your hard work is almost finished, then, great! 1) New York city is also two-dimensional. It...

Writing Feedbacksarahmk - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 10, 2008
Tale - Part 2 (jobeless in a foreign land)

13 - Greetings! And, voila! another example of Eastern thought being in divergence with Western thought. I could be wrong,...

Writing FeedbackRajiv - Jan 30, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 9, 2008
Chinese New Year - Essay

3 - Thank you very much! I think I was really careless about all those tense-related errors:D I suppose there...

Writing Feedbacklearningtowrite - Feb 7, 2008 / learningtowrite - Feb 8, 2008
Experience in life creating a strong memory

2 - Greetings! You express yourself so well, I would never have guessed that you'd had any sort of problem...

Writing FeedbackFredParisFrance - Feb 7, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 8, 2008
It's better to try to be original than to merely imitate others - SAT essay

4 - Greetings! I can't give you a number, because I am not privy to the scoring parameters used by...

Writing Feedbackiggies - Feb 4, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 6, 2008
"First date" - narrative essay essay (need advice)

2 - Greetings! You've written a good essay. I have just a few editing tips: I jumped up and...

Writing Feedbackjustinlove - Feb 5, 2008 / EF_Team2 - Feb 6, 2008
Memoir review - essay for enc 1101

2 - Greetings! You've written a very entertaining story! I have just a few editing sugggestions for you: He...

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